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  • From ANON - PyroNeko on December 25, 2006
    Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates... Please, thank you =]
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  • From ANON - conquerors star on December 24, 2006
    *reads a few more chapters* yayyy you did get better :) and less hnns too ::jumps up and down excitedly lol 3 reviews in a row *sweatdrops
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  • From ANON - conquerors star on December 24, 2006
    oooh and sasuke says hn a liiiittle too much. but other than that, great job :D
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  • From ANON - conquerors star on December 24, 2006
    *squee i love itakyuu ^_^. and good plot idea. emm i only read about the first chapter and half so far so i dont know if you get better later on, but you should try to make it flow better, the sentences are pretty choppy.
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  • From ANON - S.S.eleman on December 24, 2006
    Why is the entire story in italics?
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  • From ANON - Mi-chan on December 24, 2006
    I like this story, I have to read each chapter more than once to understand sometimes and I really like the idea of you writing out a full out lemon for Sasuke and Naruto... OH!!! That would be so... so juicy!!!
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  • From ANON - sasuke1269 on December 24, 2006
    i think u should make the lemon descriptive. i think all 9 chapters were real good! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kalypso on December 24, 2006
    Oh! Please do a descriptive Lemon. That would be great. I like the format for the rest of the story but it would be great to get a descriptive lemon for their first time together. :) :)
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  • From ANON - Lil Kunoichi on December 21, 2006
    Hi, I really like your story so could you please send me an e-mail when you update your story? Thanks. My e-mail address is kunoichi of darkness 2006 @ gmail.com( be sure to take out the spaces).
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  • From ANON - Exane on December 20, 2006
    OMG! I sense SasuNaru lemon in the next chapter!!~
    Thanks for the update alert ^___^!
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  • From ANON - Carla on December 18, 2006
    Email me when you update!

    In this chapter I got answers but I got very confused. I dont remember you mentionng before that they were ninjas. It might just be me but it seemed abrupt...Like how easily Gaara changed Neji's uncle mind even if you explained the true motives of such a turn around.

    Why does Sasuke have nightmares? And why is Naruto so insecure relating to Sasuke's feelings for him?

    Anyway, I think this is all for now.
    Carla
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  • From ANON - Steph on December 18, 2006
    w000000000000t! i can't wait 'till Sasuke + Naruto get to the cottage!! Naruto losing his viginity? i want a front row seat! *grabs popcorn* XD awesome chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 18, 2006
    Great chapter!) Can't wait to read about Sasuke and Naruto's big night. It should be good. I think Neji and Gaara are going to have one very fun filed weekend!P Hope thing go good for Itachi and Kyuubi. Look foward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - animehead on December 18, 2006
    Ohhh..I so love this story. I can't wait until you update again. You rock.
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  • From ANON - Jeice on December 18, 2006
    Ok, so I've only read one chapter so far, but i had to stop and say this is great so far. Not only does the story move along really well, but i havent laughed this much while reading fanfic in a while. GREAT JOB!!!
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