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By : oraday
  • From on March 02, 2007
    i say stick to the same old format. i really love how you made itachi all possessive and perverted. u wrote lemons for itakyuu, nejigaa, & kakairu but what about raigenma? also any change u could write a itanaru fanfic?
    thanks
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  • From flameofthenight on February 11, 2007
    LEMON!
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  • From Shiwasuda on February 09, 2007
    Just read all of your story in one go. Loved it. I like the how the characters interact. My favorite part is Perverted Sasuke, and his thoughts when Lee is around. XD
    Personally, I think I'd like to see the full-blown lemon with the thoughts, but, hey, whatever you end up doing, I'll probally enjoy what it is. ^^
    E-mail me for when you update? Yay! Shiwasuda@hotmail.com
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  • From barara on February 08, 2007
    i like it, its differently written ^^
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  • From ursweetheartless on February 08, 2007
    *throws things for horrible cliff-hanger* i vote for lemony deliciousness, its better that way *grin* now its not like a needed /another/ reason to hate Orochimaru (just finished a character analysis essay on him to help out a friend) but GODS i think that would have done it. he stopped the smex, NOBODY stops the smex *growl* still, fic love
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2007
    Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Venny on February 05, 2007
    Ha, I'm so ready for Kyubbi to kick some snack ass.

    I just found this and I'm already addicted.

    I love the ItachiXKyubbi, SasukeXNaru-chan, controllable seme NejixGarra.

    Plz, tell me that was Kyubbi who shot that snake.

    Plz, update as soon as you can.

    ~Venny
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  • From ANON - Emrilou on January 08, 2007
    why! why do you leave me hanging! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 05, 2007
    ZOMIGAWSH!!! you're not done are you?! T_T keeep going~~~ ^_________^ heeheehee
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  • From ANON - oldie_joe on January 03, 2007
    Well, may be it's just me and not liking POVs, but it looked like downright bad. I'm sorry for bring destructive. If you want a constructive piece, here you are. *deep sigh*
    "teme" is used as a PRONOUN . Yes, it is pejorative, but still. Just find all the "teme" in your little "work of art", replace them mentally with "you,bastard" and see what happens. It is overall a simple guideline to follow.
    I can propose an even better one though : don't know - don't write. Works every time. You might want to check it out.
    Same applies to other scraps of fangirl japanese. They do not serve to create local colour, but rather to impoverish the style.

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  • From ANON - roanae on December 31, 2006
    I like the nice descriptive lemon as well. Story's really good so far, so keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - narufan on December 31, 2006
    hey, i love this story very cute, some of the parts are a little boring and i think that u should update, well thanks for writing this story and update!!!!
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  • From ANON - Exane on December 28, 2006
    ARGH! *pulls hair* The stupid ANBUs!! *bashes them up with a fork*
    *bash bash bash* SasuNaru Lemon soon!? WoooHoooo!! I can't wait!!!
    Thanks for the update alert :)
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 25, 2006
    Great chapter!) Though I was hoping for Sasu/Naru lovin'. Guess I can wait. I would love to read the full blow description of when they finally do get to have some fun.

    Why is Orochimaru a bastard? Maybe cause he was born that way.

    Why couldn't we spend more time with Neji and Gaara? Cause there are more than those two in this story?

    Who the hell got shot?! Don't know, have to wait for the next chapter. Hoping it is Orochimaru, a girl cam dream, right?

    Will Kyuubi finally kick some ass, preferably snake ass? I really, really hope so.

    Sorry about that, had to be a smart ass. Looking forward to the next update.

    Briryan


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  • From ANON - Elise on December 25, 2006
    I would love full blown description with the thoughts. OOO That would be such a turn on. Um....oops pervertedness kicking in. I love your stories A LOT. I can't wait for the next installment. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays and all that jazz. see-ya
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