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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : terranigma11

From Vague on February 29, 2008
Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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From ANON - redtatsu on January 13, 2007
Where did you go? Did the boat sink? Are there any survivors? PEOPLE WANT TO KNOW! Well, I do at least. Please don't leave this in limbo.
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From ANON - Sam on January 09, 2007
I can't say I know how you feel, and I hope I never can, but I can say that I understand where your coming from. If I lost my mom...I don't know what I'd do. Just remember, she wouldn't want you to give up on your own life because she's no longer in it. She would want you to keep going and be happy. I read a saying on my grandparents wall once: It's when everythings wrong, and you think thats it, when you must not quit.

I know your thinking I'm just saying this cause I wanna see a story keep going, but the story can rot, as long as you make sure your own continues.

Sincerely,
A concerned fan
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From ANON - Tara on December 17, 2006
Oh...My...God...*on the brink of breaking down*

I feel empathy for you...I know how it feels like, especially when people apologise to you just because they think it's right or i would be polite, it just comes out, naturally. And sometimes I've even thought of screaming in their faces and gauging their eyes out because when I looked, I didn't find anything there but only pity. The pity just makes you even more aware that what you're mourning for has happened. They couldn't possibly...know.
Unless they've experienced a sense of loss themselves, but nonetheless, I am truly, truly sorry. And I understand your need to take time off and be with yourself, your family. I don't think any of us are in any position to deny you of this right so take as long as you need. I'm going to be honest, I do feel, somewhat, disappointed because you know how much I enjoy reading your stories. But you need this, so don't fret. Heck, I'm still hurting from my loss. No matter what people say, it's wounds like these time cannot heal.

May she rest in peace...
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From ANON - Taylor A.L.L on December 10, 2006
I'm so very sorry for your loss. Y'know, I guess I can relate to you slightly. I just lost my Aunt around my birthday, and needless to say, I was struck dumb, when I heard it, and the information truly sunk into my head when I saw her in her covered in flowers. Y'know, I should rephrase that; you definately havent said goodbye to your Mom, it's just a "See you later", y'know? Your Mom is definately not gone for good,she's just made a transition from a physical form, to a non physical form. So, it's a transition, not death, because she's not dead.

And you, dont do yourself any harm. I know I dont know you, and you dont know me, but I want you to know that I love you. Those words may ring hollow in your ears, but, believe me, they mean SO very much. So, I wish you good luck, and many many blessings to you, your Mom, your family, and your friends.

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From ANON - Flyinggodess on December 08, 2006
I was very toutched by your message , and hope that one day you will recover ...i maybe cannot understand what you feel at the moment nor why you would ever listen to a stranger like me , but i find that in your words you were one of the most pained person in this cruel world. Your story was good , i'm sorry i did not comment on it and i regret it . goog luck on your life and never forget that you still live for the person you lost. I do not believe in heaven , but i'm chure her soul will neevr be forgotten in your heart and may reste in peace.

good bye to you. and good luck.
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From ANON - Hestia on December 08, 2006
Hey--don't do it--life may seem like shit now, but be like Naruto--be strong--things can change and tomorrow can be better. Your a clever writer and talented write, and you have brought a lot of joy in people's lives with this fun story. It doesn't matter if it is never finished--it still is a testiment to the good you have contributed to the world. Please try to believe that life is still worth living even if it seems as if everyone you love is gone and taken from you by an evil world. There are people who have the spirit of Naruto in them and can help you see the world in a different way--just hang on and one might show up tomorrow! All my sympathy, and feel free to email me if you need to have someone to talk about fighting the urge to die--Hestia
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From ANON - Rennii on December 08, 2006
I'm so incredibly sorry for your loss, and I wish you the best for the future. It was a good story till now, but I don't mind your haitus. I'll always be a support of this story, even if you never pick it up again :)

Wishing you the best,
~Rennii.
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From ANON - Allys on December 08, 2006
I am so very sorry for your loss.
I totally understand about you not wishing to continue. I only wish you health, happiness, strength and love.
I know that the chances of you reading this are slim to none but I had to try. Please take care of yourself.
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From ANON - dardlea on December 08, 2006
I understand perfectly, you don't have to apologize. It's normal to break down after such an event, and you will need time to get better. I wish you good luck, and I will pray for both of you.
dardlea
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From ANON - xBunni on December 08, 2006
Mou... That bites terranigma-san.. I hope you cheer up soon. Don't worry, I'm sure you're mother is happy wherever she is now~ ^^ Dont give up on writing, even if only to yourself. If writing is something you enjoy, it can become a great way of stress relief~ My mum died when I was about four or five years old, so I can't really say I remember anything about her, but I know that you will be able to get through it. You'll develope a new cycle to your daily routines. So please don't go off and talk about suicide so lightly, I have had a lot of unforturnate run-ins with the issue and I can tell you now that death is a coward's way out and a waste of the life you have been gifted with whereas so many children in this world don't even live to the age of even ten. So please make the most of what you are left with, ne? ^^ I left my email in case you wanted to chat or something, I cant promise I'll be much help, but I can relate a little to your situation and talk about it. I hope you do not give up on your passion for writing, terranigma-san is a great authoress, your style is just so unique and stands out in the spotlight. It would be a shame for it to rust away.
Ja, I hope terranigma-san cheers up soon, ne? ^^ You probably have a lot more than you may realise.
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From ANON - Meytal on December 08, 2006
Meh, it did not post my email~ here it is - shallowsleep@hotmail.co.il, i am there if you want me to, we can always talk
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From ANON - Meytal on December 08, 2006
oh god baby,
i hope you are reading this~
i just finished reading your story and i loved it....but what you wrote now broke my heart...it is so hard, and i dont want to even imagen what you are goin through
i hope you will gain the will to live, i dont care about the writting, but even though i dont know you i am hopping for you to be strong, if you need someone to talk to you can add me to your MSN or E-mail me to my email address, i will be there for you.
i hope you will be alright, pleas dont give up!
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From ANON - Yukino (Yup FF.net) on December 08, 2006
No no, please don't apologize. I know what it's like to lose somone close, and am more than willing to give you
all the time you need to feel better. *hugs* Just know that it's ok to cry, but please don't try to kill yourself
because even though we only know you through your writing, we still care about you. So pplease be strong, but
don't carry too much weight on your back either. ^-^ I truely am sorry for your loss...
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From ANON - Velvetina on December 08, 2006
I'd only just joined this story and I loved it. I wanted you to know that... and now on the otherside I understand you're need to stop writing after what has happened. When I lost someone very dear to me I stopped too so all I to say is that I am very sorry for your loss, you are a phenonomal writer but that until it feels right again you are right to stop. **Smile** I know this is my first review because as I said I'm kinda new but I know how you feel and wish that you feel better.

Good Luck
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