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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : terranigma11
  • From ANON - kiss_me_deadly on November 05, 2006
    Gossiping Sasuke was just too precious for words. I liked the interaction between Sasuke and Sakura, very believeable.

    The only suggestion I have is a little more attention to editing. You had some strange typos in there. No biggie, though.
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 05, 2006
    my god. this story is so addicting. i must have more! and i love the shakespeare thing you did with whom i'm assuming is itachi, but it might not be... anyway, i look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - dut on November 05, 2006
    wow.. thats a nice start.. wohoo~ hot...more more! Hope Naruot wont give in so easily
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  • From kaesaku on November 05, 2006
    wai~
    i like!
    so interesting..
    'hope you update soon!
    can't wait~
    ^^
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 05, 2006
    Sweet Jesus that was HOT!!
    I like it so far!!
    Can't wait until you update, next time.

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  • From ANON - aria on November 05, 2006
    another great story!
    poor Naruto...what happens next?
    can't wait for the next. please update soon~
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  • From ANON - Lanie on November 04, 2006
    Wow, I think that was a fantastic start, and a really good plotline (I probably sound perverted for saying that, but seriously it is!). I can't wait to read more so update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Sama on November 04, 2006
    OMG!!! Totally awesome girly!!! I can't wait for you to update again! Hopefully soon! Please let it be soon? LOL. See ya!!!
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