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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : terranigma11
  • From ANON - kyosuke on November 13, 2006
    Another awesome chapter! God you really had me going there till Naruto cuffed him! That was sweet revenge indeed! Happy birthday you really deserve it! And update soon as a gift to us! (-;
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  • From ANON - blu_dragon on November 13, 2006
    Just got finished reading the latest chapter.THe revenge was great. I had a feeling that was coming I can't wait to see what happens next. Also have a wonderful bday. I hope u get to update soon.
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on November 13, 2006
    sexy, funny and hot two thumps up!
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  • From ANON - OMG!! on November 13, 2006
    hahah man I tip my hat to Naruto! That was perfect! Oh and if Ino were to find him like that... *_* man hehe too good. Aww poor Sakura lost on her things! Oh and will Neji ever meet Naruto? How sad, and dude... Gaara's got a gun?!!? I'm loving this story to peices! I hope you update soon, thank you for the long chapter, I really enjoyed it!
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  • From nekochannya on November 13, 2006
    That was intense! I loved the pool scene! I feel kinda bad for Sasuke you know being left exposed on the poolside... but he deserved it! Well done, nyan! I am anxious to know what comes next!
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on November 13, 2006
    Gnaaaa Naruto's meaaan ^.^

    But Sasuke deserved it nonetheless. Hehe i love your story!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 13, 2006
    Oooo, this is just too good to leave rampant! You must come back and tame it soon!...Really good storyline! I love the AU, you utilize the ship and their predicament well! I'm loving every bit of this story! The small taste of rutting was delectable and the declaration of war is definitely riveting to the point where I will forego sleep to find out what Naruto has planned next!...I'm also curious as to see where their past and that letter will catch up to them!...So many questions, and I feel happy knowing that you are taking your time in exploring every aspect of the plot and answering inquiries at a timely pace! Really great job; keep up the good work! Hopefully, I'll talk to you soon! ^___^
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  • From ANON - crazyforkakashi on November 11, 2006
    I love it .Naruto wrote a note with himself drown on the back naked and he does not know it .This should be good . Please update soon.

    wtt_mel_t@yahoo.com

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  • From melliemoore on November 11, 2006
    Oh man, this last chapter was horrifying, but wonderfully written. My expression while I read it was something like this :O and this O_O. Insanely intense. Poor Naruto! I can't wait for him to get Sasuke back - and I hope you mean sexy in a good, non-het-sex way :P because when I read that Ino gets lucky, my stomach got unsettled, heh. Ooh, unless she has sex with Naruto and Sasuke gets all jealous and posessive - hopefully that's what it is. Either way, I just can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing awesome here! ^_^
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  • From melliemoore on November 11, 2006
    I love this story! And before I start, I'm really sorry about what happened with that chapter. That's happened to me before, and I also lost all inspiration for the story I was writing. I hope you get back into the groove soon, since I adore 'Our Most Featured Naruto', and I'll love it even more once Sasuke and Naruto get together. For whatever reason, I don't like the GaaNaru/NaruGaa pairing. It's just...not working for me. But the fact that I still read the story at this point while he and Sasuke aren't together yet, is proof of how much I love the story. I've quit stories in the past, believe me :P yours are simply too funny to quit!

    Alright, now to this story, I am loving it to death so far, but I'm a bit disappointed to see that there's gonna be lots and lots of angst, since I really liked the rather light hearted tone of the the first chapters. Of course, I have no doubt that it will still be an awesome story, so I'll still be reading and reviewing as much as I can. I love the interaction between Sakura and Sasuke, and how you've written her. That 10 foot pole thing had me laughing my ass off XD

    Oh, and just to let you know, that part where Naruto's painting Sasuke's walls actually inspired me to write my first ever yaoi fic (extremely light shonen-ai doesn't really count). It's completely unrelated to the story, but since it was a scene you wrote that inspired it I'll give you credit. I hope that's alright ^_^'

    You're doing a kick ass job, keep it up! :D
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  • From ANON - aria on November 10, 2006
    poor Naruto! but i like the last chapter.
    can't wait for the next. please update soon~~~~~~~
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  • From ANON - dut on November 09, 2006
    I love this chapter... It is kinda sad to see Naruto crying like that but yeah its a great chapter.. I'd like to reconfirm and to ease my curiosity... it IS an eventual SASUNARU fic right? Sasuke the seme neh?
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  • From ANON - C on November 09, 2006
    Your right it was sad but good. Sasuke is such an ass, but what an ass ^_^ I can't wait to see what Naruto does next.

    Peace
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2006
    I cant beleive how good this fic is. I also cant believe what an evil ass Sasuke can be!

    You are a great and i hope you dont give up on this!
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  • From ANON - Mija on November 09, 2006
    ooh I just found this fic and I have to say I am loving it like mad, its hilarious and smexy and a bit freaky, with the awful prank Sasuke pulled on naruto, that was soo uncalled for, that was mean, soooooooo cant wait for naruto to get his revenge, and this time oh pleaseeeeeeee dont let Sasuke win in the end, ok I want him and Naruto together, I will admit that since I am an avid SasuNaru/NaruSasu fan, but really for once i want to see Naruto get Sasuke GOOD...make Sasuke BEG..lol..great fic, hope to read more soon, I thank you for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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