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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : terranigma11
  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006
    SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! OMG THATS UNBELIEVABLE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT SO BAD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006
    SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! OMG THATS UNBELIEVABLE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT SO BAD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006
    SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! OMG THATS UNBELIEVABLE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT SO BAD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - dut on November 14, 2006
    oh yeah... i almost forgot... Happy birthday to you... may all of your dreams come true~
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  • From ANON - dut on November 14, 2006
    oh my God! Naruto is so cheeky... man that was tricky! Gosh i still hope that Sasuke is the eventual Seme...
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  • From ANON - Taylor on November 14, 2006
    Awesome job really. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter...like...ALOT. I cant believe that (bitch) Sasuke. >< He's such a whore. But that's why we love him! HAHA and HA.


    But, there's like, one thing confusing me- it seems like you're using "Jamaican" like it's a totally different language, which it isnt.It is, however, a "way of speaking" that sounds like a different language, but Jamaicans speak english. Either that, or it's a pun I'm not understanding (it might be the latter too ^^;;)


    Sorry if it's just a joke I'm not understanding, but clear it up for me please. ^^

    Other than that, I see no problems. Write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Tara...(again) on November 14, 2006
    Just noticed something...are all my reviews normally that long? My gosh! I talk too much...or in this case "type" too much! Geddit? Geddit? *laughs at own silly joke but then realises no one else is and stops* *crickets do what they do and a tumbleweed rolls by*
    Well..errm...ah..*scratches nose nervously and runs to the door*
    Hurry and update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Tara on November 14, 2006
    LMAO!! OMG!! That was soooo KAKOII!! I loved that!! ABSOLUTELY LUUURRRRVED IT!!! Somehow I knew Naruto was up to something!! LMAO! Job well done, my beloved! I bet Sasuke is shitting his pants!! Oh no...wait, he didn't have on any pants! *laughs so hard insides threaten to burst*
    I hope, for all things good and pure, that Neji will be the first to find him like that and appraise Naruto more when he meets him!! Yea! Naruto should be given so much more credit and love.

    1) The whole Sasuke screwing (excuse my obsceneties) Neji thing...WOW...That's all I can say. Hot though...but not as hot as it woulda been if Naruto was involoved! (They should all love Naruto! Yay Naruto and his adorable-ness-ness!)

    2) Naruto and Hinata...(sitting in the tree! F-*-C-K-I-N-G!) Lol, hope that's not the case. Or at least, I'd like to know more on that. Hopefully Hinata is not so shy in this...actually no, then that'd be too OOC. Just a little shy...and only of Naruto, eh?

    3) Is it just me or did Kiba make a pass at Naruto...hmm...maybe it was the beer!

    4) Speaking of beer...Lee's drunken master state!! O-M-G!! I love it when that happens! It's just too funny and his face looks kinda kawaii!! *screams like a fan-girl who's missing her daily intake of prozac*

    5) Gaara...*sigh* why won't you just admit that you're in love with Naruto?
    Gaara: Because...I'm not. *glares*
    Tara: But...you drew naked pictures of him and you blush when it's brought up. If you didn't like him why would you bother drawing naked pictures of him?
    Gaara: I...I...ugh! Curse you and your *beep**beep*-ing *beep* You're lucky I don't have my sand in this! Wait...hold on...*grins maniacally and fishes out the AK-47* My precious..Oh my darling precious *strokes cheek with gun then frowns and holds it at arms length with pleading eyes* But-you...must not let me...*pulls it back against cheek and strokes it lovingly* But I must! My precious...*throws it against the wall and turns away* I must...not...give in...to...must-not...must-not...must...GYAH!! screw it! The hell with this-you're dead Tara! *starts chasing Tara round the post screaming maniacally*
    Tara: Wait! No, spare me! I have...I have *trips and falls over a knocked out Lee* I have cookies!
    Lee: *springs up and goes into a defensive stance* I will protect you Tara-san! I must avenge and stand by all things that are youthful and spread the love of cookies all around the world!

    Okay...I have now officially...gone INSANE! See! This is what your stories do to me! Hurry and ADD!

    Lee: What the world...needs now...is youth,
    Sweet youth!
    Tara: Oh, can it already you ignoramus!

    ps: I wouldn't mind a bit of SakuNaru even if it's just one scene. Because Sakura obviously likes Naruto! We should see more of that...even though I so totally hate the heffa! That should get Sasuke envious, ne? And everybody loves a jealous Sasuke! *chuckles evilly*
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  • From ANON - ara on November 14, 2006
    Wow! Sasuke deserved every ounce of that! Happy Burthday! Sorry that the only present i can give you is this review, hopefully that's enough. Update soon! Or else i'll die!!
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  • From ANON - eepmonster on November 14, 2006
    rofl! I love it! And Happy Birthday - it's so sweet of you to update when you should be celebrating. You're so awesome.
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  • From ANON - SM on November 14, 2006
    Oh my god. This chapter was hilarious.
    Felt kinda bad for both Sasuke and Naruto during it though.
    And I had finally thought we had a real sex scene going on. So close.
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  • From ANON - crazyforkakashi on November 13, 2006
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!


    I like dthe end . Naruto walking away with his clothes under his arm.
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  • From ANON - Vixenia on November 13, 2006
    OMG THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME. I LOVE THIS STORY. UPDATE IT SOON. OMG HAHAHAHAHA GET KIBA TO TAKE A PICTURE. NYAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - layke on November 13, 2006
    That chapter was smoking!!!! Naruto is one hella good actor!!! Even I wasn't expecting such a turn of events... I thought he was going all ultra-uke teary eyed. Good for Sasuke! He totally deserved that!!!
    Ahahaha... anyway, your story rocks just please continue writing!!! =^.^= Toodles!
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 13, 2006
    i'm so sorry i stole your idea!!!

    ...

    but if you let me play off one of your other ideas (aka the fake suicide), then i can get a special fic out just for you! please let me! *bows, hands and forehead on floor* just e-mail me with your permission, and i'll get right on it!

    now, on to the chapter. OMFG! you're evil! i can't believe you'd have naruto leave sasuke like that, though he deserved it, the bastard. i was laughing my ass off this entire chapter, ya know? i can't wait for the next one!

    and happy birthday!! (that's math i can't even do! though, thinking about it, i could probably figure it out with time. i won't though. too troublesome) ^____^
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