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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : terranigma11
  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 19, 2006
    there is no such thing as moderation when sasuke's a porn star and naruto is just THERE. haha

    i can't say this chapter was my favorite. DON'T GET ME WRONG! this chapter was excellent! but i, personally, just can't stand when people take advantage of my beautiful sasu-chan!! i don't care if he is a bastard! please don't let kiba do anything untoward with my sasu! and if you're doing gaara/neji, how is neji's relationship with naruto complicated? but i'm sure i'll find out ^_~

    and, you asked me for any ideas that i might have, but honestly, aside from sasu and naru getting it on already (joke, joke ^_^), i don't think i'll have any until they reach the island. or maybe when i find out who sasuke's ex is, cause i honestly don't know who that is.

    just keep up the great work! i absolutely LOVE this story!
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  • From ANON - kumagoro-kun on November 19, 2006
    go kiba! *snickers* this is probably the best sasuke-bashing i have ever read. thank you. hey, he's hot, but he deserves what he's getting.

    gaara/neji? yes please.

    I feel bad for naruto. if my best friend started licking white stuff off a knife (ahem) very animatedly i would freak. he's taking gaara's mildly expressed interest rather well, don't you think? well, good luck with the next chapter. you rock.
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  • From ANON - brr on November 19, 2006
    my poor sasuke ;__; i feel so sorry for him..
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  • From ANON - dut on November 19, 2006
    oh my God! what Is Kiba gonna do to Sasuke?! Gosh what a clifhanger
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  • From ANON - Jenny on November 19, 2006
    Oh my gosh, please let Sasuke get away before Kiba does it to him!! I understand Sasuke was an ass and everything (I was pissed at that prank he pulled!), but don't let that happen to him, please??
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on November 17, 2006
    *grumbles and kicks AFF for cutting off the post*...

    Was trying to say Happy B-day!!!

    and that Naruto should definately tip Kiba about Sasuke being out there and maybe slip another note from "Sasuke" under Ino's door... something along the lines of how "he's waiting at the pool to act out one of his secret fantasies"... XD... maybe a bit more descriptive.. like how he wants Ino to "punish him for being a bad boy" or something...talk about Sasuke's worst nightmare incarnate!!

    Also... when/if Sasuke confronts Naruto... he can give him three good reasons why he won't date him... XD
    1) He's a teme.
    2) Naruto doesn't date guys.
    and most important...
    3) Naruto doesn't date sluts..

    *LOL* now wouldn't that be a hell of a slap in the face?!!.. mkay... I'll stop bugging you now!!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on November 17, 2006
    A PS!!... Gyah!! I forgot other things I wanted to say... >.
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on November 17, 2006
    Loved the chapter... just finished reading it for the second time!!...^^..oh... such sweet revenge!!... now all Naruto needs to do is slip another note to Ino from "Sasuke" telling her he is waiting for her by the pool and wants to act out one of his "secret sexual fantasies"... XD.. talk about the horror!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!..^^..
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  • From ANON - carotid on November 16, 2006
    We dont see enough evil Naruto about, i'm glad he didnt give in and gave the teme exactly what he deserved! A very intriguing chapter, i love it! Please update soon!! ^_^
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  • From HGirl69 on November 16, 2006
    For a minute I was afraid that Naruto was really giving in to Saske, but then he left him there cuffed and naked ;)

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  • From kaesaku on November 15, 2006
    haha!
    ..love scheming naruto!
    he's SO hot!
    ^^
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  • From xxdedxx on November 15, 2006
    Damn it, Sasuke and Naruto need to just go at it and release that sexual tension that has them both all twitchy XD It'd do us all some good ne? XD Good story, i look forward to more. ^^
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 15, 2006
    don't listen to them! don't listen to them! (please these certain fans don't come and clobber me!) but man.... a neji/naruto or a garra/neji or something along those lines really just doensn't seem like it belongs in your story! oh by the way i luv gaara havn a gun! it'd b really funny if he went crazy in the future or somthin when neji's his boss and tries to blow his head off! (neji fans don't get mad ! get glad! =) neways u gatta admit it'd b funny!)

    you HAVE to have a sasu/naru or naru/sasu sex scene in a couple chapters u just have to! oh by the way your so freakin creative! id never think about naruto hand cuff'n him to a pool ladder that was so enexpected but so awsome! WOOOOOHHHHH!!!!
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  • From ANON - sasukez sexy on November 15, 2006
    KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING! I LOVE YOUR WORK
    but the deck part you could of turned that into a whole yaoi scene but i guess i kinda liked the way you made naruto such a little devil
    BUT YOU MADE HIM MERCILESS....

    o well i can't wait till the next few chapters are out! please! o please! OH PLEASE! dont leave this fic. unfinished!!!
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  • From ANON - Corvin on November 14, 2006
    Well, I gotta say! This was awesome! I can't wait till the next chapter is up! ^O^ Great job dude, and... Oh please don't hate me, but is there perhaps a possibility for NejiGaara?

    XDD Oh God! At first I was thinking to myself, 'Hmm, Naruto got over that a bit quick' Then when he pulled out the handcuffs I was all 'He isn't...!' AND HE DID! That was great how he left Sasuke out there! Pwned!

    But yes! Great job, I eagerly await your next update!
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