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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : terranigma11
  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on December 01, 2006
    Gah!!!... I'm dying for an update!!!! please tell me the reason Sasuke was out there so long was because of Iruka calling!!.. and that Naruto saves him before Kiba can screw him!... I mean, come on.. it's obvious that Sasuke doesn't want it!!...

    Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 22, 2006
    omfg... that was absolutely fucking brilliant. i'm... stunned would be an understatment. i love this story and i love you! i really hope you update soon, cause i really want to read what's gonna happen next. naruto with his hand around his dick while iruka turns on his webcam, sasuke butt naked, lying by a pool, handcuffed to a rail with a condom bearing kiba beside him, a disappearing act by gaara, and a hysterical ino.... holy fuck on white bread, that's all i got to say. and i'll say it again. holy fuck on white bread, you have to update soon, or i might just die from impatience! it's possible!

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 21, 2006
    Oh my God! I need more! It is sooo good!
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  • From ANON - Donedin on November 21, 2006
    Wow! I just started reading and this story is fantastic!! I really like this chapy, but I don't think I like the idea of Kiba and Sasuke getting it on... mostely cause sasuke doesn't wanna, but whatever. Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on November 20, 2006
    This is my first time reading this story and i like it! That last chapter was WHORELARIOUS! But that Sasuke bastard had it comin'! Yay team Naruto. Anyway, i wonder what Kiba has in store lol. And i can't wait to see what happens with Sasuke and Naruto. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - 3lildee on November 20, 2006
    wow that was great! you could totally put in a kiba/sasuke lemon there. I was all for it, and then all of a sudden, it goes to Naruto's view! awww. you should add that kiba/sasuke lemon in on the next chapter or something. well i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on November 20, 2006
    God i really love this story! The whole revenge thing is spectacualar and their both getting eachother where where it hurts, though it seems to be worse for Sasuke. Please update soon and quick and happy belated b-day!
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 20, 2006
    just figured out it won't let me type my name jeese do i suck or wat? neways *happy late b-day wishes ill stop bothering u now
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 20, 2006
    ok now im really pissed *shouts* "your loyale fucking reader
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 20, 2006
    hey it's me (again) *kicks computer in the ass and shouts "haha take this"* damn thing cut me off!! o well here you go!!! your loyale reader
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 20, 2006
    1st of all i don't have n-ething against neji. i just can't really think of a neji/gaara it creeps me out lol but u do wat u must and don't think i have things against gaara cuz i luv him to death along with my little sasuke and naruto. heehee. o by the way the whole sasu/naru u have to admit thats a hot couple but besides wat u think there my fav. ;)
    i like the new chappy but i have others. besides that i have so many unanswered questions i just might pass out
    does THAT actully happen with sasuke and kiba or is he just scaring the shit out of the poor raven?
    what happened to gaara? is he somehow still in the room thingy spying on naruto or somethin?
    how much of naruto does iruka have to see?
    i could go on and on but i don't want to disturb you.
    thnxs 4 mentioning me, im looking forward to the future chapters i hope they come real qwuick like hee hee.
    your loyale reader
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  • From ANON - TheDeviant (too lazy to login) on November 20, 2006
    Lol, great chapter... i almost feel bad for sasuke... ALMOST!

    Ad i agree with everyone else... there should be some sasunaru sex soon... why you ask? well, because sex is fun... plain and simple. (coughcough)

    Update soon, this story is fantastic!

    Much Love- TheDeviant
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  • From ANON - Rennii on November 19, 2006
    XD Omg. Omgomgomgomg. You're a genius, you know that? XD I love your story! The last chapter's ending shocked me so much, I had the craziest case of slackjaw for at least five-minutes. XD And this chapter too! Goodness... I really love it. For a while I assumed that Sasuke might have to wait till Daybreak for Ino to rescue to him (Cause I think a chapter before you said Ino went for really early morning swim) but then realised he'd probably die of hypothermia before that. XD Ahh, Naruto is so cunning XD

    Update sooon! =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2006
    Wow...i'm speechless...i want Sasuke to learn a lesson and yet...Kiba messing with his nonvirgin body is just too much! This chapter was gripping and you left it in quite a hanger! I hope Naruto really does get caught cuz that would be hilarious! Please update soon or i'll die of anticipation!
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  • From ANON - ara on November 19, 2006
    Oh my... i ssriously lost my lunch when i read the line with Kiba and the condoms...LOVED this chapter! I cant wait what's gonna happen next! Poor poor Sasuke...
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