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Reviews for Waking

By : Taes
  • From ANON - Seto's Darkness on November 03, 2006
    Hi, this is Seto's Darkness, who is yet to join this lovely community once she has got the time to make a livejournal account :P

    I love the way you write, even though it's a bit different from your previous stories :P I'm happy that even though you attempted at a change in your writing style, you still manage to relate the characters -in this case, Sasuke- to the readers. The formatting is also very great, and aids in creating the "mood" for this story. Though I have to admit that I was a bit confused during the first time I read it =D But I think that it's just me XD

    Woaaaaah ^___^ Very exquisite story :) Naaaah. I wonder what would Naruto do... Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

    Keep up the good work ^____^ I hope this feedback cheers you up/gives you back the energy taken away by writing this incredible piece of a fanfic! ^__^

    >> Seto's Darkness
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  • From ANON - myrafur on November 03, 2006
    This is exceptional! O.O I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - lazynin on November 03, 2006
    Oh, wow. I put this off to read another day because I was tired when it first came out, but I like it.

    The style is abstract, and the intentional (or so I assume) uncapitalizations are such a niiice touch! Also, the interaction between Sasuke and Orochimaru--I'd never imagined Sasuke having consciousness of whats going on after being taken over. Its a different and interesting idea.

    I'll be looking forward to the next bit!
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  • From ANON - attackfish on November 03, 2006
    I love, love, love this story. Sasuke is so insane. There are so few (good) stories where Sasuke is...out of his mind. XD;;

    Can't wait 'till Naruto gets in this story!

    ...Kabuto and Oro are so CREEPY. Really. Shiver-worthy.

    Love the poetry, the ambiguity works here...since Sasuke's isn't in his mind completely...I like the fractured look on things. Can't wait to see the rest! :)
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