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By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Total Truth on January 20, 2007
    A jealous Sasuke is a smexy Sasuke!
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  • From ANON - dana on January 20, 2007
    yeah for another great chapter. a jealous possessive sasuke is the s**t. are you going to have sasuke as a seme i could really see that (not that your story isn't blazin because it is) i usually don't read narxsas stories but yours has got me hooked. can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - burr on January 20, 2007
    i don't review after every single chapter but i want you to remember that i love the story and can't wait for the usual update :) aww it's so wonderful the chapers come out regularly :)!
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  • From ANON - Stephy on January 20, 2007
    Great fic. The best I have read since months. I was desesperate with all the shit I read until now. Reading a good fic like yours after an exam, it's... you made my day. I think it's what we say in english. Thank you for writing this fic and for sharing.
    Don't mind my english. It's not my first language and i lack practice. Don't even know if i make mistakes.

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  • From Allys on January 20, 2007
    OOOooohhhh!!! Beware the evil cliffie :(. But I still have to say, I LOVED THIS!!!!! *Happy Dancing* A whole chapter of jealous, possessive, obsessive Sasuke, and make up smut :D!!! hehehe 4 chapters till we're out of denial!!!! Soo Happy *swoons*

    I'm up!!! EXCELLENT - Zrina is Fabulous - Zrina is Magnificent, and I'll sing your praises forever as soon as I get some Full On MAN SMEX!!!! I didn't miss Sasuke stealing the lube, come on boyo put that shit to good use. *sighs happily* Naruto is just to sexy for his own good.

    Okay, Tuesday needs to speed its way here cause I have NO idea, what the hell is going on. But as usual I'm dying to find out.
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  • From pooh on January 17, 2007
    moah....you tease! *grumble*

    na anyway great chapter :)
    hope we're going to see more of this sasuke.
    a possessive and jealous sasuke is a good sasuke!

    just keep on...i love this story!

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  • From featherededge on January 17, 2007
    right on. sai's hilarious, like how he 'socializes' with the rest of the team. 8)
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  • From EndlessxRain on January 16, 2007
    Awesome. Just freaking awesome really. You have such an amazing handle on these characters and I so envy you for that. I didn't see anything that needed concrit, so I'm sorry, but you'll just have to make do with encouragement and praise. ;P Keep up the wonderful work and I'll see you on your next update! Ja ne~
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  • From on January 16, 2007
    ooh, nice nice.
    I like the jealous Sasuke, he makes an interesting story.
    Ahh!! I'm excited to see where this story is going next.
    So please post another chapter soon, I look forward to the great read!
    A long lasting fan of this fiction,
    Fujinakaheero
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  • From Shosuro on January 16, 2007
    OMFG!!!
    I love the last chapter!!!
    Oh the scene with Sai was great!!!
    Oh I hope you update soon that would be great!!
    But I think you said that you update every Tues and Sat.....that makes me sad that I have to wait for Sat.
    Oh well its worth the wait.
    Thanks
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  • From on January 16, 2007
    Nooooo! I've reached the end of the latest installment! T_T

    I just found this fic today and I haven't been able to put it down. I kind of wish I had timed it but I know I've had two snacks since I started ...the fudge poptarts were delicious.

    I am envious of your story-telling skills. You move things along nicely, the smut is tasteful and (like I think you mentioned in an author's note) adds a lot to the development of the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke--so I guess I'm saying it's not 'porn-what plot?.' Jealous!Sasuke is super-cute, even if he is a little bloodthirsty ^_^

    Having read the fic straight through, some of my favorite parts:

    -When Orochimaru is having Naruto-istic moments--like when he buys the orange pants and starts wearing the orange-beaded hair-tie.

    -That Naruto has a vitamin and mineral deficiency from living off of ramen...I feel kind of like it's subliminal messaging. "Look kids! Even ninja need to eat their fruits and vegetables to grow!" lol

    -Naruto's clone turning into a white fox with blue eyes...I want a plushie that looks like that. XD

    -Naruto practicing the naughty with his own clones. *rawr*

    -*shifty-eyed* the whole Kyuubi/Orochi scene. Whimpering Orochi just sparks a sadistic flame in my heart, me thinks. O_O

    -the 'toxic fumes' that Sasuke blames on the ramen but probably has more to do with the sleeping potions.

    -any Sai moments--usually the guy drives me nuts and I don't like him at all, but you've shown me the humor intrinsic in the character. The bugs biting him after he asks if Shino is ugly was a lovely touch. Implied in the same statement--thank you for giving Shino a hint of a personality! A lot of people leave him out of fanfics (I suspect they don't know what to do with him) but I think he has the potential to be a very interesting character.

    And a question from an aspiring writer to a writer--what kind of daily schedule for writing do you maintain? Do you write in big chunks or do you set time aside every day? If you have time and if you want, you can hop over to my fanfiction account and send me a personal message from there (same penname). I'm usually not logged in here long enough for my e-mail to remain unhidden.

    With that, I shall wait anxiously for your next update.

    Thank you for this wondrous gem. Now if only I knew why I didn't start reading it sooner. *scratches head and shrugs sheepishly*
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  • From anapana83 on January 16, 2007
    OOH OOH, i liked this chappie. You've made Sai into someone i like! Anyway, the bastard's reaction to Sai near Naruto was positively interesting to me. And since Sai's gonna be around, I wonder what else is gonna happen! I'm glad you update so often, it really is a good story!
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  • From on January 16, 2007
    Now I like my smut, but I find the more and more I read it, the more and more I find that sometimes things get a little monotonous. He kissed, he licked, blah, blah, blah. It's disturbing when I can skip entire paragraphs and still know what's going on.

    With that said, I wouldn't skip a single WORD in chapter seventeen! It was witty, engaging, and rawr!yummy. I loved that Sasuke melted like a kitten in sunshine, I thought that was very cool, and the line about clones, man, I just about lost it!
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    And i love this fic! It's one of the best action/adventure fics I've read since "Naruto no Hohoemi" by Nazo over on fanfiction (though that one's aLOT more angsty). I'm entranced thus far and so exicted to read the next chapter that I keep forgetting to remember stuff that I think would be helpful criticism. Absolutely fantastic!

    will probably review again after I've read more. ^_^
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  • From Kimra on January 16, 2007
    Bah. Log in? Log in!

    Right right. I only had to try about ten times to remember my password so I'm not too upset. And I must love your story heaps and heaps to have bothered at all. Seriously. I'm a lazy bugger by nature and logging in to review isn't usually on my 'to be bothered' list.

    Anyway, you continue to amaze, intrigue and astound with your wonderful story and I'm anxiously waiting for more every day. Umm... I'm suffering a lack of words today so update soon and I'll write a better reivew then! Yay!

    Kim
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  • From DevilLived on January 16, 2007
    Woot, loved the jealous!Sasuke, it made up for the stick-up-his-ass!Sasuke. LOL

    Great job, loved the conversation with Naruto and Sai. Keep up the great work!
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