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By : Zrina
  • From Allys on January 23, 2007
    LOL, Aww, shucks, Sasuke bastard is really just too stubborn for his good XD, but the really GOOD news is there'll be at least 9-10 MORE chapters!!!!! *SQUEE!!! Happy Dancing!!* and only 3 more chapters to MAN SMEX!!! (I should probably be embarrassed about being so very excited about that, but I just can't.)

    Hehehehe, I almost had a shit fit when Naruto ran out of the tent, I was like "DOBE!!! You're blond and a BOY!!!" But it was all good. And Ryou with hero worship eyes was just Classic! LOL sooo Happy, I loved Sasuke's reaction, that was the greatest, he was all "Back off Bitch!!!"

    You always make my day, thanks again :D
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  • From conquerorsstar on January 23, 2007
    uh-oh..UH-OH is this gonna be sasunaru? i mean i like that just fine..but i thought this was narusasunaru
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  • From ANON - animehead on January 23, 2007
    Damn, Zrina! I love you soooooo much!

    This chapter was excellent. Although I had a lot to choose from, (Sasuke being jealous, the action, the Rasengan!) my favorite was Naruto's speech to Sasuke about who they are. It was so tender, and it totally seems like somethig he would say and do as he got older. I am going to just go ahead and say you have mastered the skill of keeping Naruto and Sasuke in character no matter what they are doing.

    I admire you completely. Even if I had nothing but time on my hands I wouldn't be able to write something this amazing. Your ability to write action is inspiring. You are one of my favorite authors and this story is one of my favorites. I'm 100% sure this is my favorite traditional fan fiction.

    Anyway, excuse my rambling. I just wanted to let you know how awesome you are. I can't wait until Saturday! Oh my gawd...you know what? I just realized that I have turned into a Zrina fangirl...LOL

    Love ya lots!
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  • From anapana83 on January 23, 2007
    Yay another chappie! Once again, i have to say i'm glad you update so quick. Anyway, this was another good one. You reaffirmed the reason why Naruto's sticking around anyway and also i think why subconsiously Sasuke wants Naruto around. Naru's the better part of his conscience really. Also it's funny how Sasuke reacts to Ryou's "attention" towards Naruto. How could anyone not be attracted to him on some level though? Blonde, tan, gorgous shinobi that Naru is *sigh*. Anyway, i digress, lol.

    I truly have no idea about how things will turn out or the things that will come and i actually like that. Surprise me, and please bring on the smut-athon! BTW, there was just one thing i noticed, a small error in a sentence. It was where you wrote "A few strategically tags placed around the annoying jerk's tent set to trigger when said annoying jerk stumbled off to the bathroom in the middle of the night." I believe you meant "a few strategically placed tags" or something similar. Anyway, thought i'd point it out. This was good update soon!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on January 23, 2007
    Lol, Sasuke really doesn't have the best of luck with needles, does he?

    Loved the part with him and Naruto in the tent- that was so cute!!!

    Awesome chapter, really well done. I love your writing style and how it flows so well. I also am amazed that you can update twice a week! I barely update once a month. LOL

    Anyways, can't wait till the next chapter! Keep it up!
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  • From Adi on January 23, 2007
    “I would do anything for you.”

    gah! that line, so simple, got me!
    this chapter made me laugh, especially at Ryou

    as always, brilliantly written
    would write more, but i've been up since 6 and really need sleep
    but im glad i checked to see if you had updated!
    its nice to read this just before bed, takes all the stress of the work i have to do straight out of me!
    thanks!!

    :D
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  • From ANON - Total Truth on January 23, 2007
    Wow...I think I'm deeply in love with your Jealous!Sasuke.
    absolutely.. and does the fact that Sasuke picked up the lube mean he's seme?
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  • From ANON - burr on January 23, 2007
    i want some narusasu action soon ;_; the first lemonish scene when naruto seemed to be so experienced was so damn perfect ;(

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  • From on January 23, 2007
    I still am in love with this fic! I must say I appreciate the gradualness of the erosion of Sasuke's unfeelingness. It's very convincing and well-done.

    I remain a faithful fan.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 23, 2007
    i'm afraid to ask just how many chapters you're shooting for with this fic, but i certainly enjoy each and every one you post. this one was very action-packed. i got a laughed out of sasuke's needle complaint, and naruto's realization that he was in his boxers the entire fight, and especially ryou finding out naruto's secret. omg, and sasuke's "claim"! you tell him, sasuke!! he may be in denial with himself, but he certainly accepts it when others try to gain naruto's interest.

    anyway, great chapter. i'm so looking forward to the man-smex, but i do love what you're doing to get there. and then i'm sure the plot will be all the better with all the build up. keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on January 23, 2007
    yay, awesome chapter as usual; the bandit attack was an interesting way to let the cat out of the bag about naruto's disguise lol--it both broke the news in a big, sudden, dramatic way but also let them know they could still trust him because he and sasuke saved them. i'm glad sasuke really did know the girl was a kagebunshin and also glad he was still upset by the idea of it; and the tender moment and hug with naruto made he wanna tear up and gush at the same time!! and i just LOVED the whole subtle yet glaringly obvious (at least to ryou) show of possession sasuke made lol! i love possessive!sasuke XD

    ooh and i bet i know when sasu picked up the lube--when he was refilling their medical supplies at that last sound lair, ne? i'm right, aren't i?? aren't i??!! :p

    kyaaa what'll happen next, i can't wait for saturday!!
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  • From ANON - rabidfangrrl on January 21, 2007
    KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!

    Whose screaming?!?!?!? Do tell!

    Hey hey! I have a question. WHen you starting kicking this around in your shapely noggin, did you know how you wanted it to end up? Do you have a clear idea of where you see this idea/plot /notion going?

    I'm just curious. A lot of times I see people start out very strong and then abruptly taper off with their stories. Also, I on occasion dabble in fan-based writing. Mostly drabbles tho' because I am sure I would be one of those who fail to follow through. I was just wondering because I continue to be so impressed with your writing style, pacing - everything!

    Sasuke is being such a toad. I hope Naruto totally pwns him when the time comes.....

    Yoooosh! Once again, excellent read!
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  • From ANON - Kimmy on January 21, 2007
    hell, i just love this fic. it's one of the best i've ever read. please, please, PLEASE update really really soon.
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  • From ANON - Can I just be anon? on January 21, 2007
    Ah a scream! Ah this story is amazing, I shall be looking out keenly for updates! Sorry I have not much more to say, but the story is so good it speaks for itself.
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  • From ANON - Lila on January 21, 2007
    I knew Sasuke would be a jealous boyfriend, but that just makes it hotter. Very well done chapter i fell bad for the artist guy if he wishes to keep his life he better back off. Anyway another chapter that is fantastic. Make up lovin' is always hot. Another well done chapter i can't wait till i know what that shrill scream was. : )
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