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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - wempu on January 27, 2007
    Hehe, or course i'm still enjoying your story ;) it's just that i've been kinda busy and i've only had the time to read the newest chapters but not to review, sorry :/ well, anyway. to the review now :D

    YAAAYY! This is getting more and more exciting, can't wait for the training to start! *remember THE LUBE* and hmm...some other ACTIVITIES between those guys, hehe *drools all over the keyboard* :DD as i said before, i really REALLY like the way naruto and sasuke's relationship developes in this story, it's very well figured out. I like it slow and complex, not like in many sasunaru fanfictions where the plot simply is "he's my best friend -> i think i love him -> gah i'm gay -> let's have sex" ;< I'm so glad i found this story! i was really getting fed up with those kind of sasunaru fictions.

    Great chapter once again, nothing to complain about! ;) when sasuke was talking about those scrolls he had with him i remembered the srcoll naruto manipulated earlier in the story :D the one that made sasuke's toothbrush turn pink xD i was just wondering if it'll play some bigger role in this story later on...we'll i guess we'll see that in time ;) well, thank's alot for updating in time once again :D it was nice coming home after a cosy day with friends and sit on my pc and read the latest chapter of The Sound of Dreams n__n See ya next week! (on thuesday i hope...for your sake ;DD you don't want to disappoint a fangirl, do you? they say angry fangirls can be really violent sometimes ;D)


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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 27, 2007
    in the words of peter griffin, "oh, you are dark." well, more like bitter sweet. jeez, everytime i see that you've updated, i get this fear that this is the chapter where orochimaru will make his comeback. and i so don't want that to happen. so can you give me an estimate about when that bastard is just going to die already? i'll sleep easier. *bats eyelashes*

    and great chapter!! i'm loving how they're interacting with each other. keep it up!!
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  • From on January 27, 2007
    ...can I be a fangirl? Well, I guess I'll have to give it a try...

    OMG ZRINA UPDATED!!! OH JOY FILLED WITH WHIPPED CREAM AND MARASCHINO CHERRIES!! I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH AND I LOVE YOU MORE FOR YOUR CONSISTENT UPDATES!!

    *embarrassed* How was that?
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  • From anapana83 on January 27, 2007
    Another good chap. You know, one of the things i like about your writing style that i noticed alot in this chapter is how thorough you are with the details and quick explanations. Sometimes stupid lil things like, well how would they have electricity underground and crap like that that one wonders vaguely, you answered quite efficiently. Kudos to you for that. Nice to see Sasuke didn't snap at Naruto at the end, they are a very good team despite it all. I wonder how Sai and the others are gonna pan into the story later. Anyway, so i'm mentally on the countdown to smut lol. Update soon!
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  • From Allys on January 27, 2007
    Aawww... This was a sweet chapter, with cute limey bits :)
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  • From LuthienWildglen on January 25, 2007
    Well this has taken an interesting turn hasn’t it? The progression of moods in this fic is very smooth, making the chapters flow well instead of feeling forced together as I have seen happen to other similar plot lines. Sasuke and Naruto’s gradual relationship change is also excellent. It’s more believable than “one day they hate each other, the next their head over heals and googly-eyed.” I also would like to commend you on your plotline. You’ve quite a number of chapters but the plot hasn’t gone stale, that of course being due to your writing as well. The only thing I have to say against you is that I hope that you don’t turn Sasuke into an emotional pile of mush not that he’s becoming more in touch with his feelings. I just don’t think it would be realistic given the past you’ve set up for him. Anyway though, I can’t remember if I’ve reviewed before but just in case I haven’t, I’d just like to say that this is a fantastic fic and extremely engaging, not to mention captivating. I always look forward to your updates. My best wishes for you and your writing.
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  • From ANON - wempu on January 24, 2007
    i really have no bad word to say about your fic, i've already accepted the fact that i'm your fan :D meaning that every tuesday and saturday i sit on my computer waiting for the new chapter to come and i've enjoyed every single one! so, thank you for writing this fic, it really is the best fanfiction i've ever read n__n
    -wempu from finland-
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  • From ANON - wempu on January 24, 2007
    2. the PLOT! as you said in the AN of 24th chapter, there is a plot! and what a plot! this really could be a real novel or a script for a series...you can tell that you have put time and effort into writing this :) 3. the pairing: sasunaru is such a great set because of all that has happened in the series and it's 'easy' for a author because of all the elements that are already there...but you've managed to take that, too, one step further...their relationship in your fic so interesting and it feels so real...down to every little detail it's just perfect...like the whole fic.
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  • From ANON - Lila on January 24, 2007
    I knew it poor guy he's lucky Sasuke only gave him that little warning. Anyway another well done plot filled chapter I wonder if this is the last time they'll see the family. Anyway i want to see them training together again, i always find that enticing when they're rolling around on the ground sparring it's great and gets this fan girls mind working over time XD
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  • From ANON - wempu on January 24, 2007
    Yesterday i wrote the longest review i've ever written and just when i was about to post it to your LOVELY fic i accindentaly deleted it all!! you could call that fucking annoying...:/ i've already forgotten most of what i wrote, but the main point was to extol you fic for three reasons: 1. the characters are so IC that i feel they are even more IC than in the actual series! i've lost my interest on naruto as a series long time ago, but your fic is something so great, that i don't even think about the original series when i think about naruto, i think about your fic! you've taken the characters to a whole new level, you've developed their personalities and other qualities further than in the series, i like that!
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  • From midnightphoenix on January 24, 2007
    This is an excellent story so far! I like the pace of how things are being set up and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. I like it so much that I've posted the link to your story on my livejournal: http://kitsuneshadow.livejournal.com/ Please continue your great writing!
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  • From roely on January 24, 2007
    love ur story! anyways Sasuke seems getting soft where naruto is concern. If it makes you feel better ur story always seemed to have a plot to me!
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  • From ANON - severedwings on January 24, 2007
    Zrina! It was wonderful! I love the way you play jealous lover with a dense Sasuke! It's so cute and endearing. I can't wait for another chapter! Thanks again.

    Ja na,
    SeveredWings
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  • From ANON - malimillions on January 24, 2007
    Woohoo! Man... do i adore this fanfiction so much... It really, really should be illegal how much i'm enjoying it.... But really, i can't wait 'till chapter 27, since that's when you've seemed to allude that there's going to be the hard core smut scene.... Hmm... *rubs her chin* I hope it stays the way it has been so far, with naruto and sas-uke.... x3
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  • From ANON - dana on January 23, 2007
    another great chapter. i think it's slick how you made naruto not notice sasuke staking his claim. after all he would not be naruto if he did not sometimes act like a blonde. can't wait for your next update.
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