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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From roely on January 30, 2007
    yeach! finally! some good hot sex! who will be bottom?
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  • From LuthienWildglen on January 30, 2007
    Oh now that’s just cruel! That has got to be one of the most evil cliffhangers I have ever had the torture of reading. You have got to update soon. Regardless of that though, I would just like to say that the part about Naruto changing his clones into other people was very funny and clever. It was a nice touch as this point in the story.

    Also, I think I need to restate something I said in my last review for I fear that it came out wrong. I would just like to clarify that I am fully aware that people don’t change just because they have fallen in love. However, I have noticed that authors have the tendency to change their characters once said previous phenomenon does occur. Therefore, I only made the prior comment about hoping that Sasuke would not become a bowl of mush more so as a gentle reminder than anything else. I haven’t read much else by you so I don’t know how you handle your characters with different emotions, or how you choose to portray them in different situations. Granted that I have been thoroughly impressed with your writing style, plot-line, and characters portrayals, I simply wanted to state a concern of mine as a reader. Anyway though, I just wanted to clarify that.

    In regards to the chapter itself, you were true to your word and you have a very realistic sense of people and the reasons behind their actions; which is why I still really enjoy the story as whole and also your portrayal of Sasuke’s character. I didn’t want to write you a book though so I’ll stop here. My best wishes for you and your writing.

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  • From ANON - animehead on January 30, 2007
    That cliff hanger broke my heart. It just stopped. Right there. Just stopped! I have never hated three letters (TBC) so much before in my life! I had to laugh at myself. I know the expression on my face was hilarious. Anyway....


    I have to thank you for putting this image in my head. [Neji was scrubbing the wall muttering, “It is my fate to get every stone perfectly clean.”] It's so funny yet, I would love to see post-time Neji scrubbing a wall (he would get raped)!

    I'm so excited about the next chapter...and to think I had just started writing the next chapter to "You're Mine", and I had to stop to read this. The henge clones were a nice effect. I do kind of wish he made one of Shika and Gaara though, I understand why he decided against making one of the lazy boy...lol. Oh well! You rock as always!
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  • From SeveredWings on January 30, 2007
    AHHHHHHHHHHH ThE HOrrOR! How can you leave it there?! *Pouts*...You must hate us...*sniffle sniffle*...That's gotta be it...right?

    *Fumbles with an over full platter of chocolate chip cookies...warm from the oven*...and to think...I baked this in honour of yummy smut with everyones favorite boys! WAAAAAAA....NOW WHAT DO I DO WITH HOT COOKIES AND NO YOAI?!

    teehee...


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  • From ANON - nex on January 30, 2007
    Oooh, nice chapter. I can't wait till the lemony goodness (hopefully) continues in the next!

    Thanks for sharing your talent, keep it up!

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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on January 30, 2007
    dammit, stupid weird keyboard.. somehow i sent before i meant to.. what i get for using my husband's comp, ne.. anyway *ahem* (picking up where i left off..) i was straight up CRACKING UP at naruto's clones' antics with deciding who would henge into whoever, the fight about not wanting to be gai or lee until naruto promised they didn't have to follow through on any crazy pledges, no one being allowed to be shika, kakashi-clone's haphazard cleaning while reading icha icha, jiraiya-clone's "research", sakura and ino-clones' sasuke attack *lmao* haha, even the "warden" line was hilarious to me.. and then ahhhh you're still able to move smoothly from that to naruto showering and sasuke suavely offering to help, knowing what he intended it to lead to *woot* i can't wait for saturday again!! *dances in anticipation*
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on January 30, 2007
    eeeeeeeeeee *squeals in anticipation* omg i can't wait for next chapter, such a yummy tease to lead into it!! and the rest of the chapter--omg i was laughing so much! starting with a giggle from sasuke saying "that's my line" to straight out CRACKING UP
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  • From Shosuro on January 30, 2007
    OMFG!!!!!!!
    The funny scenes, the everyone wanted to be Shikamaru but no one wanted to be Gai or Lee!!! The Sakura and Ino scene was just to priceless! I love this story! And I can't wait until your next update! Now I have to go to class, it starts in 10mins!
    Hugs and Kisses
    Shosuro
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  • From ANON - Negai on January 29, 2007
    This is so good. I truly enjoy it so I definitely look forward to when it's updated again ^^
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  • From DevilLived on January 28, 2007
    Yay... That was really good. Though it was sad at the end with Naruto and Sasuke and Konoha and the thought of Sasuke dying.

    Very well done, I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From DemonicTenshi on January 28, 2007
    Another great chapter.
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  • From ladygizarme on January 28, 2007
    FUCKING DOWNTIME!!!! gahhhhh urgh, so i had this nice, long review typed out and stupidly didn't copy it before i tried to submit it and what do ya know--of course, daily fucking downtime!

    grrr anyway, so of course i loved the chappie! woot for naruto's luck! ^_^ the whole shrine part was cute/sweet, with naruto insisting sasuke pay his respects first, being creeped out by the idea of ghosts and worried about sasuke angering something, sasuke leaning against him to sleep, naruto's kissy way to wake sasuke and half asleep sasuke *needing more* when naruto broke away *huge grin*, and sasuke stretching on purpose to watch naruto check him out heheh

    ahh and now sasuke knows why naruto left and that he left w/out permission.. but gahh freakin sasuke and his "mutual kill" idea.. i mean, gahh that is SO him! ok naruto, now it's time to start training and show that thickheaded, shortsighted bastard he's got a future when you work together!!!
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  • From roely on January 28, 2007
    wow! that was short and sweet and finally naruto told him about why he left! will you have itachi kill him! or will this be a good so what happy ending?
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  • From ANON - animehead on January 27, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter! You know I am working on a song fic that will be dedicated to you and this story. Oh, and I am working on updating my stories. I promise!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2007
    hey! sorry i havent reviewed the last few chappies...love the story and hope you update soon! bye for now :P
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