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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - littleolmee on February 03, 2007
Man, I've missed so many chapters . . . they were all great. Loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, I think you really present them in a way that is very on character. The whole clone scene was just too much. I had to lay my head down and get control of my laughter before I could continue to read. "The warden's back, act natural." Way my favorite then all the clone transforming back into Naruto and all of them acting like little kids trying to hide what they had been doing from an adult was a great laugh. The sex scene between them in the next chapter was wonderfully done too, even the begining dealing with oral sex was a great laugh. Naruto telling him he was planning on making an appointment for a later day was so funny. The end of the chapter was touching also, Sasuke can now feel the bond between them becoming stronger. Can't wait to see where that leads them. Thanks for sharing this story with everyone, I'll keep a look out for more from you. Take care.
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From SeveredWings on February 03, 2007
teehee...Zrina...pally...friend...YOU CAN HAVE YOUR FUCKING COOKIES AND ANYTHING ESLE YOU WANT IF YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE LIKE YOU JUST DID! Hot freaking damn girl....that was...A-FUCKING-MAZING...FUCK!

Seriously though...i am so addicted to this it's sick. I think you from the bottom of my ero-sennin heart for your time and talent in doing this fic.

JA NA!

SeveredWings
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From on February 03, 2007
The Big Event!! What I've been waiting for and as always it was great! Can't wait untill the next chapter and see how they deal with the 'awkwardness' or maybe they'll just be comfortable with each other.

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From ANON - burr on February 03, 2007
i love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love it! and it was a narusasu too! i'm so happy! i think i'll cry from happiness now ;___;
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From DevilLived on February 03, 2007
Oooh, I liked that last line, a very cool way to end an AWSOMELY HOT chapter. (dabs tissue on nose). It was definetly worth the wait. Great job. Now, if you will excuse me I have to go get something to help with bloodloss.

UPDATE SOON!
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From elict on February 03, 2007
Oh gods... My head's spinning. That was waaaay intense. Totally amazing.

I love how caring Naruto is through the entire thing. You've managed to once again prove to me why these two are my OTP, why I just can't see Sasuke together with anyone else (I can see Naruto with others, sometimes, but for Sasuke there's no one else - that's how I feel ^^'';); he wouldn't ever allow anyone else to seehim in the vulnerable state one's in while havign sex. He wouldn't let go like that with anyone else. Ever.

I think that you're getting better. I sat down to re-read the first chapters to make sure that I wasn't just imagining things, but I really think that your writing keeps getting better and better. Makes me really excited, since you've already told us all that you're many chapters ahead in this story. I can't wait to keep reading, to get to follow you in this and see how much more you grow/have grown, and what will come of the story.

Thank you for sharing. Hugs! /elict
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From ANON - makkura arashi on February 03, 2007
gosh i loved this lemon!! it was sooo....intense...in the middle of enjoying though my cd writer made a crazy npise and i got jerked out of the feel of the whole thing and had to read it all over again!!! anyway update soon ja ne!!
Taka
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From Adi on February 03, 2007
and sasuke slowly steps out of denial
i would write more
but im gonna be late for work!
great work!
*offers cake*
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From roely on February 03, 2007
fuck! that was great! sasuke is whip!
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From ANON - animehead on February 03, 2007
I had to hold a breath the whole way through reading this. I think I might have died and come back about three times. This was so many things...hot, sexy, beautiful, passionate...whew...I felt like I was watching a movie. It was simply amazing. It was perfect in every way!
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From Allys on February 03, 2007
SQUEEEE!!! Have I ever told you how much I totally LOVE you!!??!! *Bows down and kisses Zrina's feet* That was such a mix of exasperation, hilarity, steaminess and sweetness, I think my brain has gone into meltdown.

OMG... At the beginning I totally wanted to swat Sasuke in the back of his head, but I totally agree, he would be an idiot about it, LOL! Then I was all "Holy Crap! This is getting HOT!!"

But my favourtie, My ABSOLUTE favourite, was this:

Sasuke didn't dare try to move out of Naruto's embrace. He barely dared to breathe. He could feel himself at the very edge of a fragile cliff and he was afraid of falling off.

Cause, my brain did me a wickedness and sent me a very clear picture of a chibi me whistling happily, hands clasped innocently behind my back, walking up to Sasuke and kicking his ass off the cliff XD. I almost died of laughter, and then I read on, and my heart clenched cause of the sweetness. Bound together, oh yeah, BELIEVE IT! with the red silk ties like in all the doujinshis :D.

I'm so Happy *Sighs, with hearts in my eyes and stars floating around my head* I'm going to be grinning like an idiot all freaking day :D - not that I mind.
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From Shosuro on February 03, 2007
YEAH!!! YEAH!!Yeah!!! Yeah!!! I have waited soooooooooo long for this moment!!! Hell yeah!! and you want to know what the best part of the whole thing was?!?!? Naruto was SEME!!! Hell yeah!! Even if it just for now because Sasuke didn't have the experience to do it, I think it's still HOT that he was SEME!!! ......sigh....now that I have that out of my system, I just wanted to say that I love your story....I think that I said that the last time. You have no idea how happy I was to find that you updated already!!! I was jumping up and down for joy at that thought of reading your next HOT chapter!!! No, really I was and my roommates looked at me like I was crazy! Ha ha ha ha showed them......anyways, I'll be waiting on hands and knees (snickers) for you next update!

Shosuro
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From LuthienWildglen on February 03, 2007
Erotic. That is the absolute best way to describe chapter 27: flat-out erotic. I was thoroughly pleased with this chapter and the way you chose to portray both Naruto and Sasuke in the chapter. You did a great job and I can�t help but feel we�ve hit a climax (excuse the pun), or at least a significant turning point in the story. I�m definitely curious to see how they both handle the shift in their relationship; now that Sasuke has finally admitted that he and Naruto are �bound together�, and how this will affect the rest of the story. As always, I look forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and in regards to you�re AN, I would just like to say as a fellow reader who has the misfortune of liking stories that are irregularly updated, I appreciate that you keep to an �update schedule�, as opposed to posting everything you have at once. I would rather you keep to your schedule and not get stressed out about writing chapters as fast as you can. After all, you do have a life outside of AFF, and people don�t generally tend to write their best work when they are more focused about writing a chapter as opposed to the actual content of the chapter. This of course is not a reflection of your work because you allow yourself the time to write something that is well written, well structured, and well thought out and I would like nothing more than to see this continued. Therefore it is my opinion that quality over quantity is best. Don�t succumb to peer pressure, everything is fine the way it is. My absolute best wishes for you and your writing.

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From ANON - Kimmy on February 03, 2007
YESSS!!!! they finally did it! and oh god, did i love it or what. really this is my most fav fic ever. i can't wait until you update again.
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From midii on February 03, 2007
;_; Hoooomg. I am actually crying a little. The entire chapter was freaking gorgeous, as always, but that last bit... *turns into a snivelling baby* That was so.... I want to say cute. But it wasn't cute. It was...

Well it gave me the warm and fuzzies, at any rate. *happy sigh*
Looking forward to the next chapter. x3 Thank you for the great reading!

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