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By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2008
    Chapter 31: Whoa, cool effect of the wind and flames.
    (!!!) Interesting touch! Naruto wasn’t attacking after all! Sweet! :D
    Good. They’re going to straighten some stuff out. . . . I like Sasuke’s confession about how he felt about his brother in the past, but I think he’d probably be a little slower in saying it. Maybe not so readily.
    I like that bit about Sasuke “trying to sound helpful, but coming off as irritable.” Ahhhh! There’s the clone suggestion! (Plus a little addition. ^^)
    “He blinked as he thought that he would never have described his friend as ‘nagging.’” Talk to Orochimaru, he would! ^^ I like Naruto’s thoughts going on a track and then pausing on something before continuing, by the way.
    Tea, huh? What, is it like coffee for Sasuke or something?
    Oh, crap. I’m glad Naruto likes to help people, but this could seriously give away their position! . . . Knew it. -_-
    Sasuke still “owes” Naruto for “losing” the bet!!

    Something else just occurred to me (it’ll probably be answered later or I’ll eventually figure it out). The title. Why is it called “The Sound of Dreams?”

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2008
    Chapter 30: I haven’t even started on the chapter, and already I’m laughing at your first AN. ^^
    I LOVE the first scene!! :D
    “And that reasoning is why I am called the genius and you, the dobe.” XD
    “Be more respectful when you address the Lord and Master of Ramen Land, non-believer!” XD
    Oh, damn. I’m warning you, Sasuke, don’t bet against Naruto. There’s a good chance you’ll lose. Oh, wait. Never mind, everyone wins! ^^
    Once again, I like Sasuke’s private thoughts.
    Whoa, sudden heated argument, yikes.
    Eh, you spelled “Jiraiya” wrong. ^^'
    HAH! You so deserve more than THAT, Takako!! >:D
    I like how Shino asks his questions without question-marks. H-heeeeeeyyyyy, how do you know that he “blinked at that short but chilling summary?” Hm? I demand an explanation. ^^
    Alright, Kiba! You said it!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2008
    Chapter 29: Dubious consent? (*worry*worry*gnaw*)
    Hmm, this is an interesting development. Now Naruto knows. I wonder how Orochimaru will fare later in the story. I always want Naruto to win (so far anyway), but I mean always; if he wants to save Orochimaru, I hope he succeeds, but I also hope Orochimaru won’t take advantage of that either. Or if he does, he loses again later.
    Editing Reminder: Again, there’s “drug” when it should be “dragged.” (Sorry for nagging.)
    My Opinion on Something: It didn’t occur to me until I saw it here, but Sasuke finally calls Naruto “usuratonkachi.” Honestly, I think he calls him that more than “dobe.” I’ve heard it more often, but I’ve hardly ever heard “dobe.”
    The hot scene was excellent. And I like the compare/contrast of Naruto/Sasuke vs Kyuubi/Orochimaru.
    Interesting ending. I’m unsure whether they’re going to be a help or a hindrance to Naruto and/or Sasuke, but time will tell.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2008
    Chapter 28: About your side note: I’m not a writer, so I can’t say that I have had that problem, but that novelist I mentioned in other reviews? In some of his introductions, he said he’s had that problem before and tries not to fight it.
    I like Sasuke’s conflict. And I like the political background of the countries/towns/etc.
    “Lunch is ready!” ^_^ And I love the conversation after that. ^^ Oh, wait. . . . Yeah, I still love it. That was a good halt. Sasuke’s so sensitive.
    And I like the comment about Sasuke and grudges. As you said in one of the first chapters: He has it all down to an art form.
    Oh, crap. That ending was scary. (*shudders*)

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2008
    Chapter 27: I like Sasuke and his “issues.” ^_~
    XD “No, let’s make an appointment for next Tuesday.” XDDD
    (*snort*) Sasuke puts up a fuss about not wanting to be “submissive,” and look at the way he’s reacting to Naruto when they switch.
    Yay, it’s the pet-name again. Oh come on, Sasuke, you know you like it.
    . . . I don’t think I’ve ever read a fic with this content in it going on quite so long before.
    I like the comment about the clone.
    Again, I love the ending.

    Editing Tip: “You ready?” he asked quietly.
    “Why this way?” he asked in honest curiosity.
    Might want to change the “he” in the second line to “Sasuke.” Less confusing.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2008
    Chapter 26: “Hn.” “That’s my line.” ^^
    Boy, that’s clever, making all the clones the other characters. I’m a little confused, though: are they just pretending to have the other characters’ personalities, or does that come with the Henge?
    Oh man, that was hilarious when Sasuke was all like “What the hell?” AHAHAHA, “The Warden’s coming, everyone act natural!” XDDDDDD
    Nice analogy about Sasuke “poking at the wound to see if it still bled.” I mean, I’ve heard the first part of that before but not the second. Oh, WOW! “Stretch the muscles of his feelings . . .” Nice one! ^_^
    XD “‘Exciting,’ he commented dryly.”
    I hope you didn’t make people wait too long before you posted the next chapter. ^_~

    This only just occurred to me: I wonder how Sakura’s doing, now that two of her teammates are AWOL.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 25: Little Error: “We’ll make due.” Actually, it’s “we’ll make do.”
    I like it how Sasuke was wearing down a little. I also like the touch saying that ghosts scared Naruto a little rather than all that other stuff.
    Uh-oh, I can just tell something’s weird from the first two lines of the next segment. . . . Maybe not.
    “Sasuke had the air of one who was making mental lists as he talked.” Good line. I also like how Sasuke says Naruto’s off in “ramen-land” rather than “lala land.” ^^
    Oh man, I hope Naruto succeeds in changing Sasuke’s mind about that last bit.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 24: Another good fight scene. I like the simile about Sasuke “blazing like a fire through dry grass.” XD “Why is it always needles?” XD I also like how first you see the two kids, then you see the man ripping his way into the tent, then you see the two kids wielding the Rasengan. That’s like something out of a movie. ^^
    Whoa . . . that was a great ending to that fight. “Dead, bottomless red eyes. . . .” And so on. . . . Wow. Hee hee, “He blushed when he realized that he was conversing with a married woman in his boxers.” XD
    Great conversation in the tent. I especially like the paragraph starting with “You’re not an emotionless tool,” and the ones following it. Oh man, and the end of that segment was, again, hilarious! XDD
    “Graphite grey eyes?” I like the description, but I always thought they were black. I know there are hints of grey depending on how the light hits them, but still. . . .

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 23: Ooh, the last two lines of the first paragraph were sexyyyy! :D And I love Sasuke’s heated questions. Actually, I love the whole argument!
    Nice metaphor about the talons gripping his heart.
    XDD “I have t’ go pee.” I always crack up at lines like that. I have a greeting card at home with that as the punchline, which I bought simply because it made me laugh so hard. XDDD And once again, I love the end of that segment. XDDDD
    I hope there are no side-effects to being in a girl-guise for so long. Well, none that can’t be remedied, anyway.
    “Lurking Shadow of Doom.” X) What next?
    Oh jeez, Naruto, don’t joke about things like that to him! He wears that fan EVERYWHERE! Don’t give him any ideas!
    Whoa, jeez, what an ending!! O.O

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 22: Aww, I luuuv Naruto’s pout. :heart: Ouch! Jeezus, Sasuke, that hurt! Mmm, very good point, Naruto; Sasuke, you may want to think on that a bit.
    (*snort*) “He would probably be sitting on the washer, letting it shake him up while he tried to sing.” XDDDD I like his eventual decision in that segment.
    Wow, that nightmare was intense. I had a hard time understanding what Sasuke was talking about until he ended with the bold words. The following conversation was pretty cool, too.
    Haha, “He wouldn’t be able to eat with that kind of distraction at the table.” XD “Gullet of Doom.” XD
    Love the “. . . most of the time”s. (*snort*) “Woman.” “WHAT?” XDDD
    I swear, Sai, don’t SAY anything if Sakura and/or Naruto’s not there! Oy! (Not that I’m complaining, mind, it’s still hilarious. :) ) And--whoa--for someone bad at reading/understanding emotions, he’s pretty good at giving/receiving body language messages. Huh? How was Naruto contradicting him(*cough*“her”*cough*)self? HAHAHAHAHA!! “What do you want to know?” XDDDDDDD

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 21: “Softly, so as not to disturb the slumbering demon vessel, [. . .]” Normally, I don’t much care for Naruto being called “demon vessel” or “contain” or “carrier” when it’s out of context to the situation. And yet, strangely, it seems to fit okay here.
    Awww, that’s so sweet. I’m glad Sasuke’s getting better.
    Hee hee. “That should be easy. I’ve been lost in several.” XD
    (*snort*) “Not that it didn’t work some of the times strangely enough, but that was not the point.” XD
    The planning of this story, by the way, is amazing.
    HAH! Painted toothbrush. XDD
    Oh, wow! Good part! The return of “I didn’t know you cared!” And how he reacts now! EXCELLENT touch!
    XDDDD “You don’t know what it’s like having to play [. . .]” “. . .” “Oh shit, don’t tell me, you too?” XDDDD That whole scene was hilarious. I wonder why Sasuke cut off Orochimaru’s name.
    O.O Oh. My. God. How is Sasuke going to react to being called “aniki?” . . . Oh, never mind, no biggie. But--wait! He paid Naruto a compliment! O.O
    Oh boy, more excellent visualization. . . .
    W--w--wow. . . . I . . . don’t know if I can say anymore. . . .

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  • From ANON - Lechan on January 03, 2008
    I LOVE this story though I must say I really hope Itachi comes in and kills the elders. It would be devine justice. And if Nyone could develope a reason for his sudden massacre of the tw odip-shit elders it would be the magnifficent you. ^-^ It would solve everything. ^-^ Please give them A happy ending in the sequal, I will be an avid reader I assure you, and if there is to be no MPreg in this fic I hope they find a really nice girl to be a surrogate mother. ^-^ So the two daddies can raise the kids without complications. ^-^
    Great story, made me lose sleep and my boss now hates you but, I Loved the fic and hope to see more of your works.

    Lechan
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  • From maggiekebs on January 02, 2008
    I have thoroughly enjoyed "The Sound of Dreams". I think you are an excellent writer and only one other story (Everyone's got Secrets by Erisabesu) has impressed me as much as yours. I look forward to the sequel. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From maggiekebs on December 31, 2007
    Just wrote a long and wonderful review but the page went blank and all was lost! I'm enjoying your story very much and look forward to reading the rest of it. Happy almost new year!
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  • From ANON - Ani on December 29, 2007
    Love this story so much!!! Well except for Kakashi/Iruka part :( It makes me nervous as this is my least favourite pairing and I can sense it coming... Oh well, still I have to comment on your greatness in making Naru/Sasu pairing believable. I really like it the way you write it - realistic where they both remain strong male characters. I like them together and make sure to miss all sorts of arguments about Naru/Sasu vs Sasu/Naru. I think it's pretty obvious by now that they are equals. As a result I tend to prefer reading Naru/Sasu as most of those stories seem to treat both characters kindly without totally loosing Naruto on the way and making him something he is not. Thanks for no Mpreg here. I love it realistic.

    Anyways you are great, I love all your stories and hope you keep updating all of them! Please don't leave us hanging :) OK, I'm back to reading now.
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