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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - animehead on February 17, 2007
Another wonderful chapter. You just got to love Sasuke and Naruto, and after watching the (finally) the new episode, I am in love with them all over again. *squeals, even got to see animated Sai!* Anyway, I knew Naruto wasn't trying to hit Sasuke with the Rasengan! Gods Sasuke...relax would you? (yeah, I know that's not possible)! I can't wait to see what will happen next in this story. Have a good weekend!
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From ANON - mike~ on February 16, 2007
wow! i love your story so much!

i love your long and detailed description about what the characters feel and think at that moment. the swtiching of POV's are actually very informative, as they give a different perspective on the same event.

for chp 1-29: i laughed a little, i cried a little, nosebled here and there, and loved every moment. sasuke in denial was hilarious; him being jealous was even more precious! naruto's amazingly strong, sometimes its hard to equate his happy-go-lucky attitude with the fact that he currently houses two of history's most notorious killers, the kyuubi and orochimaru. i love how kyuubi sorta gets a play toy; its nonconsensual and wrong, but then again, somewhat understandable given the fact that kyuubi's probably bored being traped for so many years. orochimaru's so funny... he even whimpers... i dont know if he deserves the punishment he's getting, but compared to all the evil sins and experiments he was in charge of, i can't seem to find a better ending to him (i hope he doesn't re-surface)

for ch 30: i love your version of sai! he says the best and worst possible things! and for the development of narusasunaru, i can't wait to see sasuke fall deeper in love! XD i'd love to see sasuke get jealous all over again; maybe with sesame? with sai again? with another OC? a jealous sasuke is the best yet cuz it just goes to show how much he loves naruto!

can't wait for the saturday update, i hope sasuke and naruto get their argument resolved and sasuke can finally accept that naruto's a skilled ninja. its kinda ironic; sasuke can only accept someone he respects as strong and capable, but then he can't stand when naruto shows signs of true skill. newaz; i look forward to ur next update!
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From ANON - Girl_in_the_corner on February 16, 2007
You had to stop there right? I want to read the next chapter soon... I couldn't stop reading your story until I was at the current chapter... it's soooo great^^ I have read it from the morning till the evening just so I could finish it and now I want mooooore... so... yeah... I hope you update soon *smile*
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From MsTrick on February 14, 2007
Ah this is the perfect Valentines Day gift to myself. It's so rare that you find a story that has an incredibly original plot that fits perfectly into the Narutoverse, has characterization down to a tee, and has hot sex. Beautiful. This is probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read. LOVE! I get to keep reading now. ^^
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From anapana83 on February 13, 2007
Lol, you know what, you're gonna hate me for this. Out of curiousity i saw this story back up at the top so i assumed you'd edited that error i told u about and you did, which is kool.......But i noticed a teeny tiny other one right when i was reading the line you'd corrected. Where it says "He bit back an oath as he felt he aching hardness between his own thighs..." near the previous corrected line. You might have meant "the" or his". I don't know. Thought you should know. Lol, sowwy.
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From on February 13, 2007
Agh! Cliffie!!! (for the Sasuke/Naruto scene T_T)

Both naruto and Sasuke are so stubborn. They're both driving me crazy (which i really, really appreciate by the way--it makes for an excellent story). I continue to admire your timely updates and I love that you were able to re-pick up the Sai et. al. mission thread without it feeling forced or messing with the flow of the story. The way you wrote it, it just *fit*. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I can't wait until Saturday!
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From anapana83 on February 13, 2007
I love this chapter alot. I think it hit home once again just how serious this is in the story. Naruto's well being is certainly not something to take lightly. It is nice to know though that Kiba, Sai, and crew want to help him so badly. He doesn't deserve to be used as a tool. That part with Sai was just soooo funny. I Lol'd. I think you got him down pat. Anyway, Sasuke. Sigh. Instead of being such a dick he needs to be grateful someone is willing to be by his side. Is it gonna take for Sasuke to loose Naruto again for him to realize that Naruto is precious and he should have some consideration for him, that the dobe is willing to be there for him if he treats him like an equal. Such an ego i tell ya. He has a funky way of thinking. That one of Naruto's thoughts where he says he would show Sasuke what he'd learned while he was off being Orochimaru�s little bitch had me lol'ing. Damn right.

Anyway, i gotta say though, though he frustrates me, you do have Sasuke down to the T, i feel. He often is contradictory without even realizing it. On the one hand he cares for him ALOT, wants to sex him up ALOT, and admires the power within Naruto ALOT. And yet, he has trouble voicing his need and continually deludes himself into thinking it isn't love, has the UBER hots for him and yet stops himself often so that he doesn't look like a wimp, and knocks Naruto down because of his own insecurity of being inferior to Naruto. Baka. He needs to be taught some lessons bad.

Anyway, enough of my rants, thats the longest one ive ever given lol. There's just one small grammar thing i caught and that was where it says, "Growling under his breath, he tossed the blankets off and stalked towards the bathroom, unmindful of his unclothes state." I think you meant "unclothed". I'm so good at this :). Anyway, can't wait till Saturday for the next update.

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From ANON - Kimra on February 13, 2007
I'm sitting here, reading and reading and loving this story and checking for updates daily (I know you are rather systematical with your updates but I like to check incase) and I just realised I haven't reviewed the last few chapters at all. How lame is that? Anyway. The story is great. The only reason I haven't reveiwed is becaues everytime theres a hot smex scene I get distracted and forget that whole 'coherent review' thingy.

Anyway. No Smex, so here I am reviewing all the while! Still excellent, still well writing, still has me on the edge of my seat. Your almost inspiring me to write some Naruto Sasuke stuff, but my last attempt ending with... well no attention worth mentioning I'm loath to bother (isn't that so lazy of me?). Anyway I'm rambling. Keep up the great work!

Kimra
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From ANON - dana on February 13, 2007
your chapters always leave me hooked and this one is no exception. what are you going to do about sakura. can't wait til saturday (it takes the place of saturday morning cartoons i have all of the good ones). for that i thank you.
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From darknessfeathers on February 13, 2007
Yay! Another great NaruSasu scene! It is just like Sasuke to get pissed that Naruto is so strong and find something to blame it on...I love how you stay so IC. I'm kinda tired of all the OOC stories out there. No pressure or anything, but: keep up the good work!
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From bluegenjutsu on February 13, 2007
So Naruto is going to kick Sasuke's ass, huh? Can't wait! :D I also can't wait to read the lemon where Sasuke is the seme. It's about time he gave Naruto some loving back. ;)
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From DevilLived on February 13, 2007
Sasuke is a big bastard. I hope Naruto kicks some sense into him.

Another well done chapter, I have a feeling that Sai and Co. will find Naruto and Sasuke- I'm almost positive.

Wonder how Sasuke and Naruto's fight's gonna turn out. UPDATE SOON!
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From ANON - Total Truth on February 13, 2007
While I did miss the smex, this chapter was a good transition chapter. Very good!
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From roely on February 13, 2007
you know stupid sasuke just ruined the chance we had of getting a hot sex scene!!! GRRR! he is so stupid sometimes! Anyways, i loved Sai in this story i always felt he got a bab reputation but i like him. Still it always has to be Sasuke and Naruto together.
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From BishounenKrazed on February 13, 2007
very, very dramatic! omg, is naruto going to kick sasuke's ass now? i'd pay to see that. but, if he uses that wind chakra rasengan, won't it get out of control like it usually does and send him inside his own head? and won't that give orochimaru a chance to break free? jesus, i'm filled with worry and dread now! man, this story is so good! saturday better get here fast! i want more!
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