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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ursweetheartless on February 18, 2007
    OMG TEH CLIFFHANGERS THEY KILL!!!!! @_@ but for serious, im too hooked, that was tehmazing, i think it ate most of my saturday but im not really complaining...
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  • From ANON - eevilprawn on February 17, 2007
    Iiik, just to clearify, I think the smut is great, so don't missread the 'beside the smut' line ^^;
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  • From ANON - eevilprawn on February 17, 2007
    I just finished chapter 17, and oh. mah. gawds! *faint*
    That was probably the best smut i've read in ages! and that is saying something!
    really really hot. I was eating while reading (bad habit, I know ^^; ), and I had to handle to fork with my left hand just so I could scroll down with the other. The utter hawtness gave me trouble swallowing.
    I love the fact that you let Sasuke be a 100% virgin, cause, seriously, where could he have gotten any experience? *gets a Kabuto-giving-the-talk-to-an-annoyed-Sasuke vision*... *chough*
    Oh, and Naruto experimenting with his clones, brilliant! The thought made me drool...

    Beside the smut, I so far love the plot and it's very well written. saw some typos here and there, but those could easily be ignored. So far, the charaters are pretty much IC and I can't wait to find out where this is all leading! Great work and keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Spiral Wolf on February 17, 2007
    I absolutly love your story. You are creating such an original and wornderful yarn. Your character development is spot on and I never am put out by the characters actions (or think they are out of character). This is the story that I look forward to the most every week. Every time I look for updates I scan for "The Sound of Dreams" first. Thank you for this wonderful story.
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  • From MsTrick on February 17, 2007
    I LOVE THIS STORY! And I'll be damned if you didn't slip in some sap. Hehe. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 17, 2007
    absolutely fabulous!! they really do need to work out their relationship, but this phase of "learn something new about the person you thought you knew" is great, too. can't wait for your next update, and i hope naruto didn't just screw them over...!
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  • From ANON - Allys on February 17, 2007
    LOL, okay *blushes sheepishly*, I remember the sorting system XD.

    Okay, now I would like to take this moment to say - SUUGOI!!!! O.O That was soo COOL!! :D I LOVE the combo technique *Bows to your skills*, and it only made it better when -

    "It's like Orochimaru said," Sasuke uttered quietly. "'Apart they are deadly, but manageable. Together...' Together we are..."

    "Where we're supposed to be," Naruto finished with conviction.

    Adorable and so Very True. You scared me with the whole "we need to talk" thing, that never ever bodes well, but it seems to be okay. I always get these vivid pictures in my head when I read your work. Today's image was lots of Naruto bunshins go poof from gaping at Sasuke, while the bastard smirked his head off XD.

    It was also so like Naruto to blow his cover to save a kid.

    Til Tuesday, Ja ne.

    OH - P.S. You've gotta tell me a hair queue is, cause it's been stumping me for a hot minute. Every time I think of Naruto's hair, it runs amuck trying to destroy my mental image.

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  • From DevilLived on February 17, 2007
    Uh oh, people are getting suspicious. Well, Naruto had to save the little girl so I guess it was for a good cause, though I wonder how Sasuke's going to take it?

    Great chapter, I loved the scenes with Sasuke and Naruto training together.

    Can't wait till the next update! Keep it up!
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  • From on February 17, 2007
    I can't help but keep thinking...the boys had that bet about the teleportation jutsu...*nosebleed*

    I did love the new chapter though. Who are these shinobi with? Are they Sound? Or someone else? I'll be as excited as ever to find out.


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  • From ANON - Lauryl on February 17, 2007
    Yesss! Thank you very much for this story. I love it (especially when it gets updated like this!)
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  • From kaururyu on February 17, 2007
    a fuuton + katon rasengan shuriken?! holy shite. i love how this is progressing... maybe you should throw in naruto's suiton trick... WOAH! and then add chidori to it or have sasuke learn his nagashi chidori to envelop him and naruto. OH MY GAWD THAT WOULD BE SO COOL!

    *cough* sorry. anyway, love the chappie. keep it up!
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  • From anapana83 on February 17, 2007
    What a suprise this is! I'm here unable to go to sleep and this new chap is up. Pretty sweet. I hope you have fun this weekend. Anyway, i'm glad Naruto and Sasuke were able to finally talk it out. They really needed to. When they don't they can miscommunicate on soem many levels. However it is rather true. They compliment each other in this almost incomprehensible way. Sasuke needs to learn that it isn't about him being alone anymore. The technique thing was interesting too. You managed to explain it rather neatly i think. Kudos to you for that. Lol, its kinda funny to me picturing Sasuke watching what he says and so forth and creeping Naruto out. Anyway, the ninjas there at the end...would they have something to do with the ninjas who needed a hero and what not? Anyway, can't wait till Tuesday's update. Good luck writing.
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  • From Adi on February 17, 2007
    YAY! you updated super early! which is great because i have a super early shift at work! XD
    naruto was just going to SHOW sasuke his new jutsu? i nearly fell out of my chair laughing
    so sasuke's being attentive now? hes probably making sure he doesnt misunderstand something again and get attacked XD or maybe hes trying to figure out a way in which he gets to go through with that bet and top naruto :D i still love NaruSasu more than SasuNaru, but i'd like to see sasuke top, just to see what a mess he'd make of it!
    ok gonna stop babbling so i that i actually have time to brush my teeth this time XD
    great work as usual!
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  • From ladygizarme on February 17, 2007
    aaaaaah! accidentally combined jutsu! haha, that was sweeeeeet! close call for them both, but awesome, and naruto saved sasu from danger again, awww. hmm, so now sasuke's being more attentive, this is a good sign.. i'm sure it won't solve all future altercations, but it's a start ne?! ack, now naruto's disguise has been compromised, what'll happen next??!!
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on February 17, 2007
    ooh, i love this stuff, and i totally agree with that comment about how sometimes you just end up with lemons without planning on it. and i am looking forward to the next chapter, so please don't keep us lovely readers waiting for too long, 'kay? good luck with your writing.
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