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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - strawbrrygashs on February 24, 2007
Okay, okay, okay. So I finally decided I should review -here- instead of on lj. xD So here we go. My ultimate, jam-packed review!

YAY!!!! NEW CHAPTER!! =DDD SO HOT.

Yeah, that's pretty much it. xD Just when I thought this day was gonna end with suck, you posted a chapter! It made my evening! Not to mention I love your writing and envy it muchly.
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From ANON - animehead on February 24, 2007
Awww Sasuke's first time topping..lol. It was so sexy, yet sweet!

Hey, if the WAFF fans don't want hardcore tell them to take a break and do your thing! Hell, I'll tell them for you! You thought it and you mentioned it, now you HAVE to write it or I'll die. Is that what you want? Do you want me to die?! Then who will finish my stories?! LOL

Seriously, I love this story and Wrong Number. When I finally get to the NaruSasu in my story I'm going to dedicate to you!

Now back to the review. You know, you really have a way of making your lemons really realistic, like Sasuke asking Naruto if he wanted another finger, and Naruto holding onto the headboard. The smallest things make it seem real, you know. Gods there both just so sexy, adorable, and still masculine. I just enjoyed it. *happily sighs* You're awesome, you really, really, are.
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From ANON - Jelp on February 24, 2007
Hmm, I don't think Naruto will remember Sesame as fondly as she does him if she happens to interrupt his and Sasuke's er, training. ~ Jelp
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From ANON - SaraSG1 on February 22, 2007
I would just like to say that you made me fall completely in love with Sai in like, three paragraphs in chapter 22. "For instance, the bugman Shino had seemed calm at the time when Sai had asked him if he kept himself covered because he was ugly. Sai didn't mean to offend him really, he was just curious." *dies laughing* Damn you! I didn't want to like him! Bah. *sulks*

I would also like to say that it doesn't matter to me anymore what happens to Sasuke in canon because this is now my new canon! In character, sexy, happy yet believable, and difficult (they have to work for their happiness). What more could I possibly want?

I laughed when you said you weren't responsible for slipping grades and missed assignments because I am currently (and have spent a good portion of the day) not doing my hw in favor of reading this. *nods* Much better use of my time. Silly college. Gets in the way of good SasuNaru time.

Dude. I haven't felt this fangirly over anything in like, forever. Months probably. Write more soon please! Ya know, if you can work it into your schedule. Please. I don't want to rush you or anything. Take your time! *will be checking twice a day for more*

You totally rule.

SaraSG1
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From ANON - severedwings on February 21, 2007
Zrina....my dear dear Zrrriinnnaaaa....how can I say this gently, ne? *Blushes and giggles*...Well...I don't that I can, so here it is:

THAT WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING...SASUKE GET'S A CUM SHOT AND LIVES TO TELL THE TALE...OH HOW I LOVE THEE WONDERFUL, TALENTED, LADY!!!!!! YOU HAVE DONE WICKED, WICKED, THINGS TO ME THIS EVE!

*Snickers*...Also, on a more level note, I must say that I nearly gave my screen a soda bath. From:

He already knew he was moaning like Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women.

Let's just say this little SeveredWings has a VEERRRYYYYY vivid imagination and I actually SAW this take place in a little, slow mo, horror movie within in my head!

I....I...I really think I am broken...my brain....it's lost all...thhooouuughtttssss!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Ja NA! Canna wait to see more!
Luvs ya,
SW
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From ANON - Lila on February 21, 2007
Yessir this is going to be one of the greats on Adultfanfiction.net The Plot the romance it's too perfect,it has to be put in some kind of hall of fame. Just one real quick thing though in this last chapter i noticed you used contract and i'm not sure if you meant contrast. It's just a little thing but sometimes when ur writing writer's can miss the small stuff. Anyway keep up the EXCELLENT work can't wait till Saturday's update...XD...
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From ANON - yummietummy on February 21, 2007
this was the best chapter yet! Sasuke is so much in love is so funny
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From ANON - Avonne on February 21, 2007
OH! And can we get some fanart for this fic? I mean, it's so perfect and has so many scenes to choose from!! I know SOMEBODY from this long list of reviews is an artist...Anyone?? ANYONE?!? I'm so about to commission someone for this...>.>
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From ANON - Avonne on February 21, 2007
*drools* Not to say that Shippuu-Den wasn't awesome, but I'd much rather see this animated!!! O.o

Oh, and I also recced SoD on my LJ too, here. http://random-snitch.livejournal.com/

....Er well, it was probably more me gushing over you and your writing than it was a recommendation for the story!! But there's a link to it, so that counts, I guess. :P Hope that's ok!!
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From bluegenjutsu on February 21, 2007
Awww this was a great chapter but I can't wait for the next one that has the lemon with Sasuke on top!! It's about time that Sasuke shows Naruto how much he really wants him. ;) Loved the lime!
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From LuthienWildglen on February 21, 2007
�He already knew he was moaning like Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women.�

LOL, that was a great line! I am completely serious when I say that after reading that line I couldn�t stop laughing for five minutes. I was one minute away from being the first person to suffocate themselves by way of laughing.

Anyway though, I just wanted to leave a quick note saying that this, as well as the past few chapters, have been excellent as usual. Sasuke�s subtle progression into loving Naruto is great, and as such I admit that I�m a little worried about the ending of this fic. Of course I don�t expect it to be all flowers and roses (I mean, we are talking about Sasuke here and he just isn�t that type) but I do sorely hope that it does have some semblance of a WAFF ending. Regardless though, my best wishes for you and your writing.

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From anapana83 on February 21, 2007
YAY!! More smut! And a two pager at that by the looks of it. There are quite a few things i like about this chap. The humor btw was so on point. The very image of Jiraiya in full Viagra mode and tied to a chair with chics around him sent me into piddles of laughter. And the banter between Naruto and Sasuke in this one was funny and very smart. It sounded natural. It's nice to know that Sasuke has also finally got those brooding thoughts on the right direction in regard to Naruto. Geez. It took the dobe to nearly get killed AGAIN for him to get some sense plowed into him.

Anyway are you ready?? I found just a few small errors. Where it says: "Arms wrapped around him as the fell toward the forest floor below." I think you meant "they", "Taking the initiative, he deepened the kiss while moving his other around the small of Naruto's back." I think you might've meant other "hand, fingers" you get it, and where it says "Only if you want strangled with them in the middle of the night," he growled." I think you meant "only if you want to get/be strangled with them." Anyway i loved this chappie and i cant wait till the next one for sure. And yes dammit i'm evil!! Gahhhh.

Buuut....you have seriously made Tuesdays and Saturdays my two fav days of the week with this story ya know!
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From ANON - DevilLived on February 20, 2007
Wow... That's all I can say... Wow..

That was pure genious, great writing! I love this story!!!! XDXD

Anyways, I can't wait till your next update. Keep up the great work!
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From Adi on February 20, 2007
GOD DAMN THAT WAS HOT SMUT
you love me too? great! one step away from marrying you and having your babies XD (just like sasuke)
you update at friday midnight?! O_O i cant stay awake till midnight! i'd die at work the next day, must remove that information from brain XD
today has been such a loooooooooooooooooooooooooong day, i didn't get home until just now!, you're update makes up for it, tuesdays are my busiest day (got labs all day) and your update makes it one of my favourite! :D
so from the similar times i'm guessing you live in england too? for some reason i think all fanfiction writers are american, no idea why.
ok sleepy time for adi, night!

XX
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From on February 20, 2007
Lol I always enjoy smex but that Jiraiya comment... priceless

"Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women."

Too Funny, Can't wait until saturday! :)

I wonder who the ninja are...

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