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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From CrazyToffee on February 27, 2007
I should be less lazy when it comes to reviewing, particularly if I can read 34 chapters of something and take soooo long to actually give feedback. :) (Woops, sorry?)

I've really been enjoying this fic since I started reading it a few weeks ago. Not only is the premise quite original - in the sense that Naruto leaves, rather than have Sasuke returned - but the development of their relationship was well paced. They didn't rush into bed (as many fics end up doing), it was a slow progress as well as a give-and-take between the characters. I like how you've managed their personalities too, particularly Naruto's. He rings quite true (to my own, personal perspective, of course :D) when I read each new chapter.

I'm quite interested in how the plot is moving as well, especially with Naruto's doubled problem with hosting monsters inside his body. Sasuke feels convincing more of the time, except when his thoughts towards Naruto get a bit sappy (again, to my taste). It feels coherent with the story and the setup when he acts like that, but I sometimes have trouble invisioning 'Sasuke' saying this things anyway. But then again... Sasuke is a pain to write, and you do a great job of it already. Keep up the great stuff!
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From Shosuro on February 27, 2007
OMFG!!!
I think I always start my reviews off like that....
Anyway, I was waiting for your update until I couldn't wait no more and I had to go to work. But as always I rush home and went on line and found your story!!! Thank you.
And YES I am that addicted to Yaoi!
It's just too good!!
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From ANON - sadistickiss on February 27, 2007
You write beautifully T_T... I love all the intereactions between Sasuke and Naruto (LOL and Kyuubi and Oro ;-P) in this fic. *dreamy sigh* Bah. Sesame's a little... irritating. I totally understand Sasuke's annoyance. Shojo characters, grr... *glares at Sesame*. Is she going to be a major character? Can't wait to hear how she knows Naruto XP.

Naruto's last lines had me going cold... It was really effective... and... angsty...

YAAAAAAAY! MOREEEE!!!
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From MsTrick on February 27, 2007
Awesomeness! Can't wait to see what happens next! I do love this story.
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From anapana83 on February 27, 2007
Alright, keep them chaps comin'. Very goos one this Teusday too. That was very detailed and informative that parts about the clones, and the jutsu. Oh, and grabbing Sasuke's ass lol. Sesame finally came out and reached Naruto huh very good. Dang...i'm getting worried a lil now. seems like theres a shadow hangin over Naruto at the end there. Very ominous closing line. Well Sasuke will watch over him i'm sure. Hopefully...Anyway, i didn't spot any mistakes! Either that or i really am tired lol. I'm very sleepy for some reason. Can't wait for the next update.
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From Allys on February 27, 2007
Awww, Naruto needs a hug, and Sasuke is getting much better with his possession issues, such a shame *Smiles wickedly* I do so love a jealous teme. The technique at the beginning will be so kick ass when they get it down. Oh and the grope session was a sweet little tie in. Are you going to write this up until they battle Itachi? What about Akatsuki? And Konoha? Damn, you set this up to be in for the Long haul, talk about Epic, you seriously get props for dedication. Til Saturday, Ja Ne.

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From ladygizarme on February 27, 2007
hmm their meeting with sesame was tense but informative without giving too much away. i'm glad nothing major happened between sasuke and sesame and that sasuke was able to deter her trying to wring further details from naruto. i worry what will happen once she tells her leader though. *bites nails* also, when DOES sasuke go through his "all things dobe" files? :p
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From BishounenKrazed on February 27, 2007
quick review before class... i loved it! i don't know why, but i did. it was very good, if not exactly exciting. oh! i loved the beginning, when the clone grabbed sasuke's ass. classic. ^.~
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From ANON - burr on February 27, 2007
mmm sorry i wasn't able to comment for a while. whoaa, the story's progressing :). i like present sasuke :). and as always, i can't wait till next chapter! it's really amazing how you got me hooked up. well, i expect some fluffy narusasu smut next! ;)
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From ANON - Sama on February 27, 2007
GAH! I just love your story!! I know I haven't reviewed and stuff...Lately and all but now I am! I wanted to tell you that I love your story! That I cannot wait for your next update! Hopefully soon...LOL I'll ttul! Byes!
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From Adi on February 27, 2007

YAY UPDATE GOODNESS

i honestly don't know what it is with guys and sasuke, i kept waving it about trying to get my friend to kiss it and he just gave me this look like i was crazy, i mean c'mon, how could he not want to kiss sasuke?
boys are weird.

you cant kidnap him! its bribing material!!

oh and the plot thickens,
i knew there was a reason why i watched all those god damned evil spawn fillers, it was so i could understand this fic in all its amazing plot glory!!

those fillers have only one redeeming quality XD

i still reviewed in time, which means adi wins! :D

oh and do we get to see more jealous!sasuke ? followed by angry!"you're mine" sex ?
angry jealous sex is the best. probably explains why i love narusasu so much XD

p.s its good to know you're not 40, makes international stalking a little less creepy :)
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From Adi on February 27, 2007
I COMPLETELY FORGOT TO LEAVE A PROPER REVIEWWWWWWWWW
but its ok because you havent posted the next chapter, so i win right?

oh no! you're all the way in america?!
international stalking is damn hard!!!

oh and you have a hubby too? dammit!!!
whoa how old does that make you? (dont have to answer that, but if you're like 40 that would be weird... no offence to the 40 year old fangirls out there!!!!!!!)
ah well i can always steal you away from the hubby by bribing you with my brand new sasuke plushie :D (my friend bought it for my birthday present, and i've told everyone under the sun about it)

right... the chapter i'm meant to be reviewing, XD

seme!sasuke is O_O

i still liked that naruto didnt give up complete control

that chapter left me as a puddle of goo.. so much so that i had to go back and read the end bit just so i know thats happening with the actual plot XD

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From ANON - SaNa on February 27, 2007
Okay now I'm gonna tell you my fave parts of the story so far xD
- the convo between Iruka and Kakashi! In canon Kakashi is so high and mighty, so the fact that an academy teacher like Iruka can talk on par with him is a cool thing!
- Sai "socializing" with his team: I was literally lmao it was so funny!! I like how you keep Sai and Shino in character so well x3 Hell, you keep them all so IC it's scary!
- Sai's exclamation "Sasuke may be Naruto's friend but Naruto is mine!" O_o Saying I was pleasantly surprised by this line is an understatement! lol SaiNaru is second best!
- Chapter 17 for obvious reasons *_* All the smut scenes in this story are delicious xD And best of all it's "plot sex" so there's no avoiding it huh? ^_-
- chibi fox Naruto. homg I could have died with the cuteness *_* A white fox with big blue eyes..! +_+
- Chapter 23 (my favourite). There's nothing better than a furious, jealous Sasuke and a teasing Sai. Liked the angst in this.

Scenes that freaked.me.out 0_o:
- The rape featuring Oro and Kyuubi. The vision of a naked Orochimaru made me sick, but you compensated that with a lovely image of human form Kyuubi *�* smexy
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From ANON - SaNa on February 27, 2007
Hi Zrina! After watching Naruto Shippuuden my SasuNaru fangirling has increased tenfold, so I went on the google looking for yaoi smut and I found your fanfic through your comments on the sasuxnaru livejournal community. So here I am finished reading (after 3 days!) and ready to review.

I'm so happy I stumbled on this marvelous story (that's turning out to be THE epic narusasunaru by definition)! I searched for a story like this one everywhere. A maturely written, multi-chaptered story with weekly updates(!). Unbelievable. I adore you so much you're now 2nd if not 1st on my top fave fanfic authors. (Btw in chap33 Naruto says: "that's all your gonna get" it should be "you're" x3)
I could go on and praise non stop about SoD. I think you make a perfect balance between action, crack humour, smut, romance, and angst and your writing style is wonderful and very professional with good consistent chapters.
What really captivates me in this story is the way you develop the whole Naruto and Sasuke relationship (without leaving out the other characters^^). Their relationship keeps growing as physical passion becomes more spiritual^^. Those times when Naruto touches his chest, the two boys are reminded of the same thing and yet they still don't have the courage to face their past wounds. I find those parts so heartbraking!;_;
That scene in chapter 32 where Sasuke sincerely smiles at Naruto and they run through the forest; it was so romantic and soothing. It's just the two of them in their own world reminiscing back to when they were 12, when their bond was carefree and innocent. I'd choose a moment like that over 10 pages of smut anyday, as much as I'm concerned. Really one of my fave moments. It was a really good decision to write such a scene at this point in the story. You've planned out everything so perfectly!
I wish you best of luck with the new chaps. I very much enjoyed reading the boy's lives as roomrates, though from the looks of chapter 33 you'll bring in your OCs so the plot should move along?
Hey have you read the new Naruto chapter 343?? *_* Sai tries to spoon feed Naru-chan xD and then Sasuke reveals his true intentions!! I knew it all along that he was just using Orochimaru, not even bastard!sasuke would want to give himself to that psycho -_-
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From ANON - miss quel on February 25, 2007
i love this story. update soon.
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