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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From DirewolfLilith on March 03, 2007
    i absolutly love this fic.... every time i open up aff and see a new chapter, i squeal like a six year old watching my little pony for the first time... great job!
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  • From anapana83 on March 03, 2007
    Good chappie! This time around, i particularly loved the sense of humour you put in it. Very natural and easy. It's always interesting to have Sasuke and Naruto do mundane things. Anyway, so Sasuke is gonna train Naruto with a katana or sword huh? Thats pretty cool I can't wait to see how that goes. So Sai and crew are not far behind either. I wonder if they do find them what Sasuke's reaction would be. I don't think he'd appreciate others ruining thier privacy for, well, anything. However, he'd be in his right for more than one reason. Especially considering that Naruto does not deserve to be locked up.

    Anyway, there was only one small thing i caught that you can fix after you come back. Where it says "Naruto sank into him once, twice more as he rode out his orgasm before slowly lowering himself onto this lover." I think you might've meant "his lover". Hope you had fun on your trip. Can't wait till Tuesday!
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  • From ANON - clarinetcandy on March 03, 2007
    WHAT!!!! ASUMA DIES!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO! Yeah, that was a big...BIG spoiler for me. O well jingle bell. I have been with you every TUesday and Saturday! I love this story! Especially the first love scene. Sasuke tearing up after sex....(gushes). AND your story actually has some type of point, not just them having sex...well the sex is good, but sex AND a story is even better. Wow, I can't wait till the climax (of the story) happens! Yeah, and this chapter. I had to use a dictionary. Which is good...I can get smart while reading yaoi! Who would've thought...
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  • From ANON - yummietummy on March 03, 2007
    fascinating as ever, the other guy i forget his name will cause trouble for Naruto and Sasuke if he starts asking questions to the hokage. He is not as dumb as Sasuke thought. Sasuke is a jealous little cat isn't he. Great chapter!
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  • From Jelp on March 03, 2007
    Another excellent chapter! I also really like the way you portray Sai. He seems a hard character to write about, but you charactarize him just as I imagine him in the manga. ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Kimra on March 03, 2007
    Awesome-ness in the form of words. I am still addicted and still reading.

    I was actually kind of worried you where going to go into a wordy storyline that didn't fit with the rest of the piece. But I see you will not stoop to such poor writing and I am thoroughly impressed by that!

    Keep up the amazing work.
    Kimra
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  • From ANON - animehead on March 02, 2007
    Awww!!! So sweet. I love to see those too interacting like that, and of course I can't forget about the lemon! Makes me want to hurry and get my own NaruSasu posted. Have I ever told you how much I love this story? If I haven't, I do, a lot. I wish I had your motivation to be able to write so many chapters and post twice a week. I admire you for that, really I do. You're awesome!
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  • From ANON - claire on March 02, 2007
    This fic has been amazing! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Bliz on March 02, 2007
    I adore this story, and I wait for it to update every week. And don't worry about your sex scenes, they're plenty hot. Though I almost died laughing when I was reading the "Sasuke gets to top" scene, and my radio started playing "lets get it on". XD it was too perfect, lol
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on March 02, 2007
    WEE! I loved that chapter, awesome job! The dinner scene was very well done. I can't wait till your next update!

    Have fun this weekend!
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  • From mscs3 on March 02, 2007
    I love this story. I'm always so happy when I see a new chapter. Thank you! Me
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on March 02, 2007
    Once again....I...SERIOUSLY...LOVE...SAI!!!! Do you mind if I kidnap him and chain him to my bed??
    I was wondering...does Naruto know that Asuma is dead? And has Shikamaru killed Hidan? I hope to see some interaction with some of the other ninjas from the village. :-) Naruto and Sasuke are strong, but I doubt they could take out all of the Atsuki even though the 'officialy' only are after Itachi. Have a nice weekend then. ^^

    ~KaraQ
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  • From crazychemgeek on March 02, 2007
    Yay - thanks for updating so quickly. I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved reading Sasuke and Naruto playing house. Can't wait to see what your going to do next.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 02, 2007
    Another great chapter!! I loved the smex parts, especially when Sasuke teased Naruto at the counter. It was funny how Naruto got revenge too. I love how their relationship has progressed. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2007
    Also, a jealous Sasuke is very hot, love how he plans to deal with Naruto's infidelity! lol
    "Breaks fingers".....:)

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