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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From DevilLived on March 10, 2007
    Woot, great chapter. Don't worry, there were no spelling/grammer mistakes that I could see.

    Ooer, I love Sasuke's outfit. Someone should really draw that.

    Can't wait till your next update! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - dana on March 10, 2007
    i wonder if you are going to a little more jealousy in the form of sasuke come out again and will his rival for naruto be kat (who will of course not care that they are lovers). nice fill in and stretcher by the way i can't wait for the next great update.
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  • From Allys on March 10, 2007
    Dun Dun Duuh, the return of heavy plot. I Love the new outfit, but you knew this, I can see the evil inner workings of Naruto's mind, hehe, LOL, Run Sasuke Run. Other than that I like the twist that the boys go on clean up missions for the Fuuma clan. If Sai's team ever finds them, maybe they could help and sweep the Sound out, good and proper. But that would cause problems for their personal agenda, and there's always Orochimaru picking at Naruto from the inside. God life is complicated, but that just makes this plot really Really GOOD. I forgot how much your story line blows me away for a second there, I was blinded by smexy NaruSasuNaru goodness. Sasuke seems to have his jealousy issues under control, cause Sesame would be bugging the fuck out of me, but maybe he's not worried cause she's a girl, I don't know I have issues. I've seen girls in those kinds of situations pull some messed up shit. But then I've gotten in trouble for being fiercely territorial. It was real nice to wake up to The Sound of Dreams, having a wireless connection in my house is rotting my brain, I literally woke up, rolled over, opened my lap top and checked AFF for updates, LOL, that's so wrong, my mac can no longer sleep in my bed with me. Anyway I'm off, til Tuesday, Ja ne.
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  • From anapana83 on March 10, 2007
    Great chap. Rather serious there at the end too. So yes, i can see that it's very much trasitionary. Good. I feel as though i'm about to read a Part II if you will. Anyway, i imagined Naruto would manage to get Sasuke to give in. Cant wait till Tuesday for the next update.

    BTW. HAVE YOU READ CH. 345? I AM TOTALLY FLIPPING OUT OVER IT!!!
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  • From ANON - animehead on March 10, 2007
    LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sasuke's new outfit. The most recent manga chapter of Naruto made me think of your story, but in vice versa, although I guess I'll have to wait until next week to see if my theory is correct. I liked the interaction between all the characters. Another good chapter as usual. I'll be waiting patinetly until Tuesday.
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  • From Adi on March 09, 2007
    ACK! I FORGOT TO REVIEW!!!!!! TWICE!!!!!!!!!!!

    i loved that last chapter though, i love how close they are getting.
    *chucks cookies*

    do we get to see more of orochimaru soon? i know its odd, but reading about kyuubi torture him fills me with glee and brings out my sadist side :D

    when i read your fics i always forget they're 15-16 year old boys XD


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  • From DevilLived on March 08, 2007
    Loved that chapter; great job! The part about dobe-ness being a STD was hilarious.

    This story is going great! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Blackwulff on March 08, 2007
    Okay, I have two pictures done sketched, I'm totally giving you my e-mail... and I'm going to get them scanned in when I get the chance, maybe on friday if I get the chance... *waves hand in front of face* Anyways, my e-mail is: crimsonnever@yahoo.com drop me a line and I'll get back to you to discuss artistic-ey... stuff. Yeah, so, the story is awesome, I look forward every single Tues and Sat for my Naruto fixes of the day after Shippuuden and the manga chapters come out on Fri's. You are a truly awesome writer and I hope to the dieties that you start writing stories that can be published instead of just fanfiction because you are totally talented and should write for reals. Keep up the awesome work, now I must wipe my 'puter clean of blood... lol.
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  • From MsTrick on March 07, 2007
    So hot! I love the line about Naruto being able to call up a thousand man army at will -- what an awesome way to phrase that. That whole scene was great! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - burr on March 07, 2007
    YES! :D
    i wonder how sasuke's new outfit will look like :). oh, and i still hope for some full narusasu lemon :) is there going to be one?
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  • From kaururyu on March 07, 2007
    sasuke sure is useless after sex. LOLZ. great chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - Lauryl on March 07, 2007
    Another great chapter for my favorite fic that I'm currently following! Well, that sentence was a bit rough around the edges. I really liked this chapter, I like how you make good use of the filler characters; I disliked most of them but they are enjoyable the way you write them. Also, Sasuke's war on the clones was quite amusing. As was napping in a tree...I wish there were trees around here with branches big enough to nap in! Eh, I'd probably still fall out though. The only thing I saw that I would have done differently from you, was the sentence:
    "Naruto couldn't help but notice that all the words Sasuke had picked had long term significance." I would have used "had a long term connotation" instead of "had long term significance," it carries the precise meaning of what you're trying to say, and also I feel like it shares more phonetic and rhythmic elements with the rest of the sentence. I don't know, that's just me, but it stuck out a little so I noticed it, so I thought I would mention it. =P

    That's all! Update soon please! I love your story.
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  • From ANON - yummietummy on March 07, 2007
    i been waiting for ur story! i can't have a good day without reading ur latest chapter! I got it bad!
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  • From ladygizarme on March 07, 2007
    awesome chappie, kyaaa i love this story more and more, and that's saying a LOT since i already loved it XD i want to sing your praises. i love how you work things in so smoothly from one type of scene to the next, even as far as working flirtatious things between the boys into normal activities like sparring--sasu nuzzling the clone's hair before stabbing his ass lol (and before, the cooking, and there's plenty of other examples too but i'm sure you already know them anyway so i'll leave it at that :p) and omg, i loved the sasu-gets-stitched-and-then-sucked off/fucks naru's mouth O.o most awesome. (also to reiterate how much i love him being turned on by naru's kyuubi-ness, naruto KNOWING sasuke's turned on by that, and the erotic ways naru uses that knowledge--and yet, at the same time, though naruto was tapping into kyuubi a bit, sasuke was still able to feel that sense of power/control he also gets off on; it's a great blend and so fitting for him, i think, to not only crave his own power, but be turned on by naruto's as well) also the discussion of terms for them, and all of sasuke's suggestions being longterm--yaaaaaaynessss! wheeee!! ack, now how is this whole "meeting" gonna go?? *bites nails til saturday*

    *lovelovelove4u*
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  • From ANON - clarinetcandy on March 07, 2007
    Ummmm, wow. Is it hot in here or is it just me? Man, I tell you what sista'. Your sex scence's are DY-NO-MITE! It seems our little Sasuke is getting a little pervy. I LOVE a Kinky Sasuke! WooT! Can't wait for Saturday!
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