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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From kaururyu on March 20, 2007
    you are teh best.

    somehow you make OroKyuu a canon pairing. [insert evil cackle of perversion here] anyway, can't help but drop another review. although that thing with naruto and sasuke was cliche [the whole, i-want-to-be-with-you-as-me-not-
    some-weird-personality-in-me] i still loved how you put it there. goes to show how deep naruto's understanding of their bond is. and all hail your writing of OroKyuu smut. haha.

    loved Sai's parting line. >:D freaky smile boy VS bug and shades boy

    so yeah... KEEP IT UP! :D i also like how you're sticking with a plan. :D it makes the whole thing more organized. not just some bursts of inspiration... :D
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  • From ANON - Jelp on March 20, 2007
    Oh, I love how you present Sai! You should do one of those stories where Naruto has to chose between Sasuke and Sai. ^_^ I can see you having Sai torment Sasuke so...oh, the jealousy! :-D Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
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  • From on March 20, 2007
    Brilliant! Brilliant! Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. School's been crazy plus there was spring break where I don't have computer. Advantages: I just got to read the last three chapters all in a row *drools*. Team Sai interactions crack me up. Especially the tension between Sai and Shino. Part of me keeps thinking I shouldn't laugh, but I have to. The way you write it is just so...so *giggle*. Especially the last line of chapter 40. Excellent!

    But! OH NOes! Orochimaru has a plan?? Brr. Brr. I don't think I like him having a plan. I'm starting to get worried. I can't wait for the next chapter though. Oh, and your take on Hinata is very interesting. "Express her displeasure with her newly acquired skills." XD I want to see!
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  • From Kimra on March 20, 2007
    I love Sai. As long a his not taking Sasuke's place I love him. So in this story? I love him. Such a perfect innocent bastard. :D You write him well. :D Keep up your wonderful work and although you may get the impression that people want this story to end (what freaks!) that is not the case for your serious readers. We just want to read an amazing story with plot and smut and all that jazz... and what do ya know? We are reading that! Awesomeness!

    So ends my small little rant. :D
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  • From kaururyu on March 20, 2007
    man are you related to kishimoto or something? perhaps an editor? LOLz. the plot of this fic... it looks eeriely familiar as to how oro-san became a recessive part of sasuke's mind...

    DAMN! are you clairvoyant? this is sooo good. i wish kishimoto would update the same pace as you. LOLz. nah. i love your writing style - it doesn't leave gaps nor unanswered questions. it flows so smoothly. being an avid reader of SoD and the naruto manga itself, i must say this work of yours should be the alternate yaoi plot. :D :D

    so yeah. sticks to mechanics + no OOCs [from my POV] + smooth flow + great pace = one GREAT FIC. [applause]

    and this must be the longest review i've ever dropped in anyone's story. :D
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  • From ANON - claire on March 20, 2007
    this is awesome!
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  • From ANON - Sama on March 19, 2007
    I don't say this often enough but I love your story! I just...gods the way you keep them in character and play off the story to your liking...*claps* Cudos!!!! I LOVE IT!!! Please, please update soon...I'm dying to read more! GAHHHH! Don't keep me waiting! LOL ttul!
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  • From ANON - Beautifullove348 on March 19, 2007
    Amazing story!! I love it, love it, love it! It's so well written and the characters are not OOC at all. And the smexyness doesn't hurt;) Please continue, I can't get enough!
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  • From ANON - nameless/soul on March 18, 2007
    Nice chapter. I am sad to hear that the sex will be less, but for the sake of the story I understand it *pout*. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 18, 2007
    Ah! Cliffhangar!! Well it looks like they came up with a good plan. Can't wait to see how the others react when they find out what Naruto has inside him. :D
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  • From ANON - Shadow on March 18, 2007
    Arrrgh, you friggen sadist! *whomps* You and your damn cliffhangers. *pouts*

    You know, that bit with "Rasengan whorled into existence" I keep reading that as 'whored into existance" and it always, ALWAYS makes me go "you should have known better if Jiraya taught it to you...oh wait, there's an L in there..."

    D'ya have any idea of how long this is going to be? And when is Itachi going to come in?

    Anyway, enough of my senseless blathering. Keep up the orgasmilly good work!
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  • From Jelp on March 18, 2007
    Hmm...why do I get the feeling that the old man is going to see Kyuubi having fun with Orochimaru? ::snickers:: Now the million dollar question: who will they get to become the new Otokage? Is it possible one of our beloved will get the position - Sasuke or Naruto? Update soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From Natha on March 18, 2007
    Hello there,

    are you sure, you aren't stating you will keep the smut low because you want reviews ;-) Because I think there will be many people protesting against this decision. And I am one of them :D

    I don't need sex in every chapter (not that I would dislike it) but the mixture between plot, humor and smut you presented so far (though the last two chapters were very low in intimacy between Naruto and his beloved one...) was one of the highlights in this story. Busy or not they are young and horny (that sounds like one of those advertisings for sex hotlines o_O) and some... fooling around every now and then won't do any harm :D

    Then again it's your story and till now I don't have anything to complain about... But now go and write some NaruxSasu smut XD
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - mary on March 18, 2007
    oh man oh man oh man........please keep going. this is better than watching anime!
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  • From mscs3 on March 17, 2007
    Waaaa...cliffhanger. *sniffle* Looking forward to the next installment. Me
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