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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - anonymous on March 21, 2007
    ::DIES:: okay, i don't even have the vocabulary to express how much i'm in love with your story. it rocks my socks. i adore it. my favorite naruto fanfiction ever, and I've read about a thousand, I swears. it has a good enough plot to be a completely original work, if it hadn't piggybacked off an established series in the conception. absolutely breathtakingly wonderful. i love you.

    now. of course, there is one tiny grammatical detail that has slowly been driving me insane because you make the mistake just about every time you use this word:

    Lay VS Lie: I'm an English teacher (yeah, you get all types on aff.net ^^;;;) so I'll explain the difference.

    infinitive/present tense: lie ((definition: to recline, i.e. the subject is doing the action, intransitive verb)); past tense: lay; progressive form: lying; participle(the form used with helping verb "have" and for passive sentence structures): lain
    example: I lie down on the bed right now; I lay down on the bed yesterday; I am lying on the bed; I have lain on the bed before; My body was lain on the bed.

    infinitive/present tense: lie ((def: to tell a falsehood, i.e. the subject is doing the action, intransitive verb)); past tense: lied; progressive form: lying; participle(the form used with helping verb "have" and for passive sentence structures): lied
    example: He lies to everyone; He lied to everyone yesterday; He is lying; He has lied before; The facts were lied about to everyone by him.

    infinitive/present tense: lay ((def: to place or set something, i.e. a direct object is receiving the action, transitive verb)); past tense: laid; progressive form: laying; participle(the form used with helping verb "have" and for passive sentence structures): laid
    example: I lay the kunai on the floor right now; I laid the kunai on the floor yesterday; I am laying the kunai on the floor; I have laid the kunai on the floor before; The kunai was laid on the floor by me.

    So when you want to say "Naruto ::reclined in the horizontal position:: next to Sasuke," it's "Naruto lay next to Sasuke." yeah. so now you know.

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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on March 20, 2007
    Vivi: Oh, no he did not just say that..... I didn't think he would be that....to say that ta Shino, he has Kiba! Of course he is!

    Venny: Wait, why did I like that sene where Kyuubi was doing Oro?

    Vivi: Cause your a sick person (though I thought it was good too), wait, why didn't he take the invitation to screw Sasuke?! The whole time I was on the edge of my seat chanting, "Do it, do it, do. it. dooooooo iiittttttt!" Then he had to go all gushy. He wanted you, finally like you wanted, then he goes and says no. I was so mad, then cursed some.

    Venny: You mean said every curse word that you knew in English, then when you ran out you started to say them backwards.

    Vivi: SO, the lemons she writes are just so GOOOD! If only she would write another one...(hint hint)

    Venny: Wait what were we doing in the first place?

    Vivi: Reading yaoi....... got angry about no lemon between Sasu and Naru, laughed, oh! we're reviewing!

    Venny: Ah, now I remember!

    Vivi & Venny: PLZ UPDATE! WE LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S SO YAOI-LUSH-US!

    Venny: BYE&BYE!

    ~Vivi & Venny
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 20, 2007
    LOL, Sai is hilarious! Love him! Glad that old man kept Naruto's secret. ;) Would love some more SasuNaru or even NaruSasu because those two are so hot together! :)
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  • From ANON - nameless/soul on March 20, 2007
    Great chapter! I just got done watching Haru wo Daiteita (lots of yaoi fucking filled anime) and now you give me Orochimaru being raped! You rock! And the last comment Sai made was pricless!
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  • From Allys on March 20, 2007
    Ren was really nice about that, I think he needs to be commended but then old people are usually wise. It is still unnerving that he just didn't say Anything though. Not even a look, then again that may be my conspiracy theory type nature running off with me.

    Oh and you got me there was a second too, I was all Ooohh!! Kyuubi's being sweet O.o How dumb am I? LOL, how you write that (can you call it a pairing??) always fascinates me though. It's such a mind trip XP

    That NaruSasu bit was sweet though, especially the little comment by Sasuke in the end. Not becase Naruto isn't darling, but I guess I expect that kinda thing from him, but Sasuke is beginning to open up, YAY =D. (Oh and I was like Sooo Happy with the end of the last Manga chapter, for some reason it reminded me soo much of this story, and then he picked up that Mizu..? person and I was like GAH!! Right idea - WRONG PERSON!! (anyway this is me totally assuming that you read the manga, cause if not you've totally channeled into Kishimoto's brain) But just in case I made it so that it's not a spoiler.)

    Oh and Happy Dancing!! Sai and the others should be along shortly =^.^= , this should be fun. Oh and LOL, Sai and his death wish! Do you think people can die from foot in mouth disease? Cause if they can, I'm pretty sure Shino will help XD

    p.s. Slap some ears on me and call me Pinky - I'm SO there (I'll try not to mess up though, Zort!)
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  • From DevilLived on March 20, 2007
    Ahh I -heart- Sai. Lol, that last line was genious.

    I almost felt sorry for Orochimaru there but then he let it loose that he was planning something evil so I decided not to spare him any pity. Humph.

    Go Naruto for being sweet and Sasuke too!

    Awesome job! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on March 20, 2007
    *Sigh* I KNOW I shouldn't feel sorry for Ochimaru, REALLY. He's such a complete psycopath! But a part of me does. I wish they'd just have killed him off.
    Anyways, as for asking about chapters... Hmm... you know the feeling when you don't want things to end? Well, it's like that in this case. :-)
    Great chapter like always. I do hope Sasuke and Naruto will soon have some interaction with others, be it allies or enemies. Please update soon. ^^

    ~KaraQ
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  • From ANON - dana on March 20, 2007
    i loved this chapter especially when i imagined oochamaru the love slave it was another great episiode. That's what i think about long great stories. they are the ones that when they are written well i casn't help but to read again. So write on my sister write on and can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Total Truth on March 20, 2007
    I love the way you described the kyuubi's cell and its reaction to Sasuke and Ren.
    And God do I love Sai! lol "Are you getting laid enough?" :)
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  • From ANON - Ms Trick on March 20, 2007
    HAHA! I love how you write Sai. It's so true to form and it's so funny! ^^ I really liked the Sasuke/Naruto interaction too--Naruto was very Naruto and Sasuke was very Sasuke. Can't wait for more!
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  • From anapana83 on March 20, 2007
    LOL.

    I know i should open with what a great chap that was, but that last line had me laughing so hard. *Sigh* Well, it was a good one. And i almost kinda feel bad for what Naruto has to deal with, what with Kyuubi's err...extracurricular activities and all. Don't have to worry bout complaints of the lentgh from me. I'll read it till the scroll bar can go further no more lol.
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  • From ANON - bluesake on March 20, 2007
    >.< This story is so damn hot! : D keep going. ^_^x
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  • From Adi on March 20, 2007
    Shino and Sai interactions are SO FREAKING FUNNY XD

    YAY!!!! 40 chapters!! go you!

    and more orchimaru and kyuubi together stuff, theres a truly perverse side of me that enjoyed it XD
    as much as I hope that orochimaru doesn't break out, I'm guessing that if you're going to continue for another 20 chapters then its very likely he will, and he'll punish them all in true orochimaru style (with that creepy long ass tongue) but I'm gonna be stubborn and still hopes he doesn't!

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  • From Shosuro on March 20, 2007
    Eeek!!!
    "Are you getting laid enough Shino?"
    I love that line! I just about laughed my self out of my seat when I read that one!!
    Thanks for the latest update!! I shall wait impatiently until Saturday!!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on March 20, 2007
    If Naruto had to use Sexy no Jutsu to get trained what did Yondy and the rest of his cell have to do...?

    *whacks Kyuubi upside head* Didn't your mother ever tell you to play nice with your toys, or you'll break them?...do demons even HAVE mothers?
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