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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From Allys on March 27, 2007
    LOL, your Sai is so totally on the ball. I love the extreme level of cluelessness that he always exudes. And OMG! You totally just made me wish this story was an MPreg, don't do that, so wrong XD LOL, but they are soo cute with babies. They should totally just adopt that little one. LOL nevermind me like they need those kinds of complications. And *Snicker* I see the pink hair comment finally came back to bite Sasuke in the ass XD. I love your little play on "traditional" ninja wear LOL, it was really funny, and those little socky things are called tabi boots or just just tabi when they're socks, random piece of trivia for you there. I loved the little smexy referrence and that they fight about stupid things like who gets to go down on whom first XD so Kawaii XD. Oh and I'm kinda sad that he lost the little briefs though XD, you know I think they're way too smexy. that jutsu is kinda getting out of control though!! It's still really cool, but I guess it would only be a last resort sort of thing, cause it's so extreme, I mean damn, that was a big mess. I loved Naruto and his very casual

    “Hey, Sasuke…”

    “What, usuratonkachi?”

    “The trees are on fire.” LOL!!

    and Ohhh!! I read your reply to Makkura Arashi, I soo have to agree, I get that feeling all the time. My brother and I have this running quarrel about Bleach vs Naruto, he likes B more, I like N more and I usually say cause it's more realistic, cause nobody dies in Bleach ever, but this is one instance where I wish Naruto wasn't so very realistic. It makes me so sad, to think about.
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on March 27, 2007
    Awww... More please! :-) I think I could read your story forever and ever...end ever...
    I know what you mean about having a bad feeling with the manga, and I strongly suspect it will be Sasuke who dies. Darn it.
    I actually like your story better than the manga. It makes my day ^^

    ~KaraQ
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  • From BishounenKrazed on March 27, 2007
    great chapter!! but i so know what you mean about the bad feeling. rasengan22 and i were conversing, and while i think sasuke will die, she thinks it's gonna be naruto. which would make since, you know, him fighting and dying trying to get sasuke back and all. maybe his death would cause sasuke to come home, but then he'd take his own life because naruto's gone, and then we'd know that kishimoto was a sasunaru fan all along...

    damn i'm rambling. anyway, i look forward to saturday! and... did naruto and sasuke just get a son? so cute!!
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  • From anapana83 on March 27, 2007
    Lol. This is one of the best chapters you've written to date and it didn't even have any smut!! Anyway it had the perfect balance of humor, there were too many little moments to mention, and some heartfelt stuff i.e. Sasuke and the little boy. And Sai. Omg, Sai lol. That guy is a one man circus without meaning so. Anyway, i loved this chappie.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 27, 2007
    Poor Sai is confused!!! Love him!! That was so cute with the five year old little boy. I wish Naruto and Sasuke could adopt him!!
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  • From ANON - ukestalker on March 27, 2007
    hay i've been reading your fanfic for a long time now and i love it XD!! in my mind if they fu@k up the real one i can always act that it went like the way you rote it XD so it's all good!! and i wanted to know if you were going to use clones in later smut.....because in one of your chapters naruto was all like, mmm yes thats an idea...
    so yeah love the fic!! plezs keep on writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on March 27, 2007
    That last chapter was wonderful. And I completely agree with Naruto; really what self-respecting ninja would wear such a ridiculous outfit LOL! That was a good one, really! Well it seems it will take longer for Sasuke and Naruto to find a way to use the new jutsu they are working on, either that or Sasuke needs to learn how to transport them away quicker. Don't you just hate it when you get something stuck in your mind and it comes back at the worst times to haunt you; the pink pubic hair, NO! I could just see Sasuke suffering from that still. It seems the first raid as went well, and that Sasuke and Naruto has picked up a new friend, Naruto really is at his best when he his trying to help others. And he has a thing for kids, I have a feeling this boy will be wanting to stay with them, especially Naruto who saved him and Sasuke who seems to be bonding with him; at least over Naruto. Maybe this child can live a better life thanks to them, being they would both not want to see a child go through what they did. Naruto has already stated he didn't want any child to be seen as a moster and Sasuke sees himself in the boy. Well like I said you did a great job on that chapter, thanks for the update and I can't wait to see what you have in mind for the story next. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Kimra on March 27, 2007
    :D I was going to leave it at a smily face, because I'm tired, but now you get an explenation about why the substance of this reveiw is limited to a smily face and an explenation. Cheers! Kimra
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  • From kaururyu on March 27, 2007
    you make sai so cute. :D
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  • From anapana83 on March 26, 2007
    Great update. Lol, i can't seem to get over the hiking the leg part. I laughed for 1 minute. Anyway, great progress, and it seems at least Sasuke might be able to at least tolerate Sasame. Hopefully. Anyway, can't wait till Tuesday.
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  • From Bunni07 on March 25, 2007
    I really hope Oro-bastard doesn't pop out any time soon....though it's bound to be in the plot somewhere...and it's gonna be freaky as heck!! ^_^ Anyway, this is my second time reading this and now we all have an answer to who is seme in Kishimoto's eyes!! ^_^ Manga 347...when Konohamaru changed into Sasuke and Sai...who was seme?? lol SASUKE!! WHOOHOO!! REJOICE ALL SASUKE-SEME FANS!! ^_^ (just no more Sai...ick)
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  • From ANON - dana on March 25, 2007
    i think this was a funny chapter or maybe it was just me. i had this picture in my mind of sasuke saying i am not going through that same shit with this chick as i had to go through with sakura. no damsels in distress coming in between us this time around. i love this story can't wait til your next update.
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  • From ANON - Makkura Arashi on March 25, 2007
    so we're really getting into the plot now. i so totally love the jealous sasuke you portray, i can totally imagine him acting that way. what did you think of the chapter 347? i discussed it with allys, but was just wondering about your opinion!! so get back to me ne? and when are we going to have some more smut...not a lemon, i suddenly seem to have taken a liking to smut more nowadays...i loved this chapter. great work i love your story!!
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  • From ANON - claire on March 25, 2007
    jealous Sasuke is always the best xD
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  • From ANON - Clemen on March 24, 2007
    I can't believe I haven't review this story. Baka me. Your story is wonderful very believable. You manage to keep the characters in characters and yet you add much more richness to them. Not an easy task. I love the fact that both Sasuke and Naruto are seme and the uke. I don't think either of them would want to be the uke all the time like many fanfics portrays them as. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Take care and god bless.
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