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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Armina on March 30, 2007
    (big, sad puppy eyes of DOOM) Update soon? Real soon? Onegai?
    I love how you incorperate the latest Naruto manga chapter into your fic chapters. It's extremely well done.
    And I have to disagree with you on Sasuke's reaction to the Naruto bridge. It wasn't a 'I don't care" reaction, it was a 'I don't really care, you can't make me say I did, even though I do" reaction. Thats my opinion at least. But I agree that it's probably not going to be a happy ending, I really got the feeling that Sasuke is going to have to die to redeem himself.
    I really, really love the boy though. Finally, someone that Sasuke is willing to share NAruto with! Are they going to adopt him? (hopes prays) I love this fic, thanks so much for writting it. Ja ne
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  • From ANON - ArminaSkitty on March 29, 2007
    This story makes me very happy. You have the characters acting in a way that I think is natural, and the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto feels right. They love each other and sometimes hate each other, which is a good parallel to what's happening in the cannon. ANd your Sai is priceless. I think you nailed him perfectly. I haven't really seen any continuity errors nor grammar/spelling errors. I really wish I was that good.
    I'd love to see some of the rest of the cast, but I'm confident that you will take the story where it wants to go in due time and if the story wants others to appear, they'll appear when they do. Keep up the good work, ja ne.
    A.S.
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  • From ANON - Aki WildQueen on March 28, 2007
    Still loving the story!
    Update soon!
    Aki WildQueen
    P.S. Mr. Bunny also says hi and update soon!
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    c(")(")
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  • From ANON - dana on March 28, 2007
    have sasuke and naruto picked up a son that is so slick. i can't wait i know i say it all the time but this time i mean it even more
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  • From Jelp on March 28, 2007
    Your Sai ammuses me so! I hope he gets some more story time in later chapters. More please! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on March 27, 2007
    Vivi: >.> see, it's kindda my fault we didn't review the last time

    Venny: -glares- you made me miss her yaoi!

    Vivi: ^-^ Sorry, 'm forgot! But did you just call us Syble? (is that how you spelled it?)

    Venny: I think we knew a girl named that when we were younger, not sure though. But still no yaoi smut!

    Vivi: Excuse him, he runs on the stuff.

    Venny: Shut up! You got to look at yaoi pics before you left!

    Vivi: Hey, Bud gave us the pics you could have looked too.

    Venny:......shut up. ANYWAYS! Why does Naruto keep hiding his feeling from Sasuke?

    Vivi: And why doesn't Naruto just screw him into the wall?

    Venny: -whispers- now who has yaoi problems.

    Vivi: I'm sorry, excuse me did you say something.

    Venny: No, no not at all, sister dearest!

    Vivi: >.> kindda happy I ain't ur really sis. But! we'er getting off track! Still love it! Sasuke's a parinoid possive monkey and I love him!

    Venny: Naruto's cute, sweet, complicated, and is sexy, lurv em!

    Vivi & Venny: UPDATE SOON!!!

    Venny: BUH-BYE!!!

    ~Vivi & Venny
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  • From MsTrick on March 27, 2007
    Love the chapter! Seriously, your updates make my week. ^^
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  • From Bunni07 on March 27, 2007
    Awww....poor Sai! XD

    I find the little boy simply adorable! Can we keep him? ^_^

    That last little scene w/Sasuke and the kid was so sweet...I loved the image it created for me!
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  • From ANON - Beautifullove348 on March 27, 2007
    AW! Possitively adorable, ths chapter was. The scene with the kid and Sasuke laying on Naruto's shoulders was the most adorable and sweet thing I have read in a long time. Thanks for posting this chapter and keep up the outstanding work! Please update as well:)
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  • From mscs3 on March 27, 2007
    I just wanted to say that I love your Sai. His total cluelessness is very entertaining. Thanks for the new chapter! Me
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  • From ANON - rascality on March 27, 2007
    Every time I'm sure it can't get any better it does. How do you do that? I love this fic so much! ^_^ I love the quiet moment with Sasuke and the kid - it's really sweet. And Sai and co. crack me up!
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  • From DevilLived on March 27, 2007
    Aw I love Sai. XD That last scene was funny.

    It's cool how Sasuke and Naruto are dressed as ANBU ninjas, I like that! Better than what Naruto was going to wear (snicker).

    The sleeping scene with Sasuke and the little boy talking was cute. Wonder if the boy has a bigger part to play in this story? Aw, maybe Sasuke will adopt him as a little brother! (not probable but that would be cute)

    Awesome job! Keep it up!

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  • From ANON - bluesake on March 27, 2007
    awwww poor sasuke! loved the chap continue!
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  • From ANON - strawbrrygashs on March 27, 2007
    That's so true! Sasuke is so useless after sex. xDD It's so cute. Another wonderful chapter!! I so look forward to your awesome updates!
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  • From manicandyshumway on March 27, 2007
    It took me three days to read through the already exhisting chapters.

    BUT OMG IT WAS SO WORTH IT! Why didnt I run across this fic sooner?

    There are so many things I absolutely LOVE about it, I think I could type all day so I'll just poke at the things I enjoy most about your writing.

    I love the fact that even though Naruto and Sasuke become lovers they don't fall out of character (This happens all too often in fics unfortunately)

    I love the fact that you're actually putting the crap in the fillers to good use.

    I LOVE the clothes you put Sasuke in. (Buckles arent exactly my fetish but OMG...)

    I about died when you had the anthro-form fox demon rape Orochimaru. Twice! I NEVER would have thought up something so ORGASMICALLY twisted!

    I absolutely envy you for your writing ability and the steady flow of effort you put into your work. (I am frequently compared to Shikamaru when it comes to doing anything other than reading.)

    Your lemons are hot and throughly well done without being rudundant in the slightest.

    The plot you've developed is simply wonderful. It's very easy for me to forget that it's a work of fanfiction and not really a part of the cannon.

    I could keep going and I probably will at a later date (I fully intend to re-read and re-read the entire thing at least half a dozen times) Until then KEEP IT UP! I've fallin in love with your writing and wholeheartedly wish that you had more stuff published on AFF so I could keep myself entertained inbetween posts.

    *HUGE HUG*

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