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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 07, 2007
    Aww, I thought Naruto was enjoying the roughness that Sasuke was using. Anywho I really enjoyed this chappie. Pretty soon Orochimaru is going to escape.
    Well keep up the good work

    ja ne till next time
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 07, 2007
    Awww! Naruto told Sasuke he loved him!!! Too bad Sasuke is unconscious though! Great lemon! I sure hope Orochimaru doesn't succeed in trying to take over Naruto again.
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  • From ANON - Total Truth on April 07, 2007
    Absolutely amazing as always! I can't wait to see what Sasuke's response will be on tuesday... :)
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  • From sldale on April 07, 2007
    Oh my god, you are so amazing.
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  • From ANON - Sama on April 07, 2007
    Wow...thats all I can say really because I'm just speechless on this chappie! IT WAS FRIGGING AWESOME! You must update again and soon! AND AWWW! Naruto finally said it!! So awesome! GAH! I want to kill orochimaru! BASTARD! GAH! lol ttul! Update soon!
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  • From Dragon7 on April 07, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

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  • From ANON - DevilLived on April 07, 2007
    Loved it. I was kinda scared when Orochimaru took control. Thought he was gonna rape Sasuke or something. O__o

    Luckily, Sasuke got Naruto instead.

    Cute ending. The whole chapter was awesome. Keep it up!
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 07, 2007
    O_O whoa - that was intense... good ^_^ heh, I like intense... and then the ending line 'I love you' yeah - I thought that worked out really well - lol just thought i'd say that. It was a great chapter :d Sasuke's suggestion at the beginning that they kill the others made me snicker lool (hope he wasn't entirely serious though).

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - Hitomi_No_Ryu on April 07, 2007
    Is it hot in there or is it just the smex? *Hitomi fanning self to keep calm*

    Other then the obvious misspelling of "desire" to "design", it's another smextastic chapter!

    PS Orochi should never escape...NEVER!
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  • From Allys on April 07, 2007
    I can't believe you wrote that in, in your comments, I'm so embarrassed, but it is - It is perfect. From the playful banter at the beginning that you are so very good at to the warmth and fuzziness, yes I found WAFF:
    "As long as you want me, I will only be yours," he quietly reassured him. He then gave a lopsided smile. "And I think I've already proven that even if you say you don't want me, I'm still yours."
    So Sweet, it pulls at my heart. Then you scared me, I mean that, really scared me, when Orochimaru came out to play. That was supposed to be the safest place in the world - wrapped in Naruto's arms and surrounded by allied ninja. It's heart-breaking that is isn't, that it can't be... yet.
    After that the chapter just turns into this roiling, roller coaster of emotions. Sasuke's confusion is really well written, all the contrasts literally on top of each other. Then the "fight" and how Sasuke realised he was so close to hurting his most important person. I love that he fought and struggled not to. I also loved that you put in the little bit when Sasuke called him a scaredy cat. That phrase has so many memories tied up in it between the two of them, and it was a beautiful way to tie in the series.
    And the sex - Gah! The musical metaphors - It was freaking poetic! Yet still Really Hott. Then he confessed, and my heart swelled. This was masterful, I feel like the instrument, I feel Played - I'm baffled. This is by far my favourite chapter, as of yet. You're amazing, and I agree with the guy from your comments, Kishimoto should be jealous.
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  • From ladygizarme on April 07, 2007
    thx for the well wishes on my c-section. i can't believe it's less than a week away; i'll only have a chance for one more of your updates before i go in!! anyway, on to the review: awwww narutoooooo!! i feel like i'm gonna cry. that WAS intense. all of it. it makes me sad he still can't tell sasuke for real, but i know it'd still freak him out *sigh* jeez, i love how you did sasuke's conflicting thoughts. his own contradicting "ideals" (old ones and the new naruto-influenced ones) fighting with each other, brought to the surface of his mind by oro's stupid butting in influence (which was scary by the way, does not bode well for the future of his containment methinks *eep*) kyaa and then the fact he had enough presence of mind through the curse seal and the pain to know he didn't want to rape naruto if he could help it; i was glad for that. and the sexual description was wonderful. so... carnal but beautiful still with the musical imagery and the picture of sasuke's curse seal flames added to that too. after all that, it's still such a wild confusing situation. i wonder what will happen when sasuke wakes up *bites nails*
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  • From ANON - claire on April 07, 2007
    The part where Naruto said I love you was sooo sweet! The sex scene was truly intense XD
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on April 07, 2007
    Whoa.. "I love you" Gods, what a way to end a chapter XP. Awesome smut... seriously, you're amazing... your writing is addictive, your plots are dramatic and interesting, your characters are intricate and in character... and your smut is HAWWT!! YOU ARE AMAZING!!! I bow down before you, awesome Zrina-sama XD.

    ARgh, I can't believe Orochimaru got out like that. *shivers* KYUUBI!! KEEP YOUR PET ON A LEASH!! It was so lucky that Naruto managed to wake up in time...

    Great job!! This story is love X3. LUFFLES!!! I can't wait for an update!!

    And thanks for the email!!!
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  • From ANON - clarinetcandy on April 07, 2007
    Yeaa. He finally said it. The "L" word. LOL! Was there crying involved? I wasn't sure if those were tears of pain, joy, love or what! Man, what a fucked up relationship they have (to kill or not to kill), yet they are sooo perfect for each other it is scary (yet so hot). *sigh* I wish they really would fall in love in the anime. I guess they do love each other but it is in a brotherly way. To bad. I guess that is what fanfiction is for. Wheeeee! It looks like the story is about to take a turn with Naruto entourage in full force and Orochimaru sneakin' around with his bad self. I'm sure Sai is going to stir up some trouble to. So many possibilites! Can't wait for the next update. It is a pleasure. Oh, by the way. "Obessively possesive" is my new phrase now! Like I said before, fanfiction can be chalk full of knowledge...and knowledge is POWER (yaoi power).
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on April 07, 2007
    Vivi: Ok. We've missed the last four chaps.

    Venny: It's 1;59 am here, we were suppose to be asleep by 12:00 for church and then churuch again Sunday.

    Vivi: We have to wake up before 8:00 am both days.

    Venny: We'er going to pass out any second now. This won't be pretty, at least Vivi won't be.

    Vivi: Shut up. Ok, let's get down to bessnuiess

    Venny: I thought that Sasuke and Naruto had picked up a small boy? And that Sasuke and the boy had fallen asleep on his chest. Or was that another story?

    Vivi: Oro that whore. Doing that to Sasuke.

    Venny: What the hell were those things that attacked them in that base?

    Vivi: Did you re-upload a chap?

    Venny: Where's that orange haired girl.....her names sounds like a veggie.

    Vivi: Smut!

    Venny: Yay!

    Vivi: -is tired- Kay. Done.

    Venny: -tired- 'm too.

    Vivi & Venny: PLZ ANSWER OUR QUESTIONS AND UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

    Vivi: Ja ne. -falls a sleep-

    Venny: 'NIGHT! -passes out snoring-

    ~Good night from : Vivi & Venny
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