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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From Shosuro on April 10, 2007
    LMAO!!!
    I love it this chapter!!
    I think I mention before that I love this story!!
    I like your version of how things come together.
    I love the interaction of each character with each other!
    And the ending....oh yeah that was perfect too!
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  • From obsidianazul on April 10, 2007
    This chapter was great. It had me totally cracking up. Lol. Your story is great. Well written with good plot lines and excellent flow.
    Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - animehead on April 10, 2007
    YES!!!!!!!!! I loved it! It was just perfect for Kiba to react that way. I laughed so hard. This whole chapter was great. And the lonely tear drop from Sasuke made my heart clench.

    hehe I am still giddy over Kiba's reaction, although I am sure if he was getting it on with someone he would be able to go more than one round too. Sai was his typical perverted self. LOL Shino was calm as I assumed. Makes me wonder what goes on in his head.

    I also like the conversation that they were having and how Sasuke's grip was tightening in Naruto's hair. It totally seems like something he would do. Even if it's not on purpose.

    Oh well...I will be sitting here reading over this chapter again because I love it. As I plot a way to marry you. *hugs you* *sneaks in a grope* *smirks evily* *says to Zrina's husband...* "How are you with sharing?"
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 10, 2007
    looool poor Kiba heh :D he obviously isn't gonna be sleeping any time soon... who knew Sasuke could be so loud *smirks* go Naruto XD... and ooooh now Sasuke knows Kakashi has the mangekyo too but can't go ask about it. Nice chapter ^_^

    Hina xXxx
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  • From RoseHime on April 10, 2007
    HAHAHAHAHA! Poor poor Kiba. I'm suddenly reminded of another fanfic, Roommates, where Kiba always had to put up with Sasuke and Naruto's sex life. Heehee! This makes me very happy. Naruto and Sasuke are so sweet to each other in this chapter!
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  • From ANON - claire on April 10, 2007
    gosh poor Kiba......I'm sure he wil be panda like the next day XD
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  • From on April 10, 2007
    The ending was hilarious!! I laughed out loud! And again, the brilliance of your writing shines through. I was all happy that Shino, Sai, Kiba and Hinata had found Naruto but I kept thinking, so what's next? And what do you? You have Sasuke find out about the new Mangekyou!! I so excited. And I really liked the new chapter of Shippuden too! How do you keep staying one step ahead of Kishi like that? First it was Orochi getting sealed inside someone, then the curse seal really does with a person's head! I love it.

    Did I mention that I thought the end was hysterical?

    lol
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  • From kaururyu on April 10, 2007
    this... was hilarious. ROFL. poor kiba and his heightened sense of smell.
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  • From ANON - Lauryl on April 08, 2007
    That instrument thing was really creative, and even went with the title of the story. I liked it a lot. =)
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  • From on April 08, 2007
    The return of the incredibly cute albino fox with the big blue eyes!! Oh joy! I really love that henge and you're description of it. Orochi is as worrisome as ever, the jerk. Will Sasuke realize that the reason the curse seal went into corrupt mode was b/c Orochi's slipping out of his cage? On that note, I love how you suggest that the curse seal greatly affects Sasuke's personality and decisions. I can live with that kind of interpretation (for the manga and anime) very easily XD.

    And have I mentioned that I love your Sai? Really just adore it. And Kiba and Hinata and Shino as well. I don't know why, but all of a sudden, a couple chapters ago I couldn't stop wondering "What IS Sakura doing?" I hope you're not going to forget all about her? Well, I love this fic still and the regular updates are beyond admirable. (I don't even *review* regularly...*sweatdrops*). Keep writing. I'm excited to see this fic to the end.
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  • From MsTrick on April 08, 2007
    Wow. That was intense. The music metaphor was really beautiful--I liked it. Not to mention your ending just about knocked me out. And you're making me really hate Orochimaru. -_-
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  • From RoseHime on April 07, 2007
    WAAHHH! Damn you Oorochimaru! DAAAAMMMN YOOOUUU! Sasuke was getting along just fine without your stupid curse biting stupidness! GAH! That chapter was intense. And scary. Evil Sasuke has reared his ugly head. Naruto said he loves him though! Not that I think Sasuke heard him... (sniff) Naruto will save him from the darkness though! I just know it!
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  • From ANON - -xyz- on April 07, 2007
    HI,
    I just found you fanfic today, well since it's 3:30 am I would have to say I found it yesterday :D
    I love it!!!!!!!!!! (If my English is not at its best right now: It IS 3:30 AM...)

    At the beginning I was wondering if I could read a fanfic with over 40 chapters but it went surprisingly well :D
    You described the charas and their actions so well and keep as close to the storyline as possible- that's really great (and i haven't found that very often as of yet- not that close to the storyline and you didn't completely abandon it after you changed your story from the original!).

    Though I found the first twenty chapters or so very interesting I was really surprised when you included Sasame and I realized that the action is only starting. I am so looking forward to what is going to happen- if they are going to go back to Konoha or if they are going to make otogakure their new home. I am just glad that you wrote at one point that you have the story already outlined and that you are really planning on finishing this fanfic. it would be tooo bad otherwise... (That description is too mild!)

    The way you describe the charas- you make them sound so droolworthy..:D I LOVE how you portray Sai though I don't quite get your Shino- he sounds somewhat off to me. I know he is the serious type who sticks to rules but I still don't think he would just want to take Naruto back?? I don't know- perhaps your other charas have influenced me too much :) I have been reading none-stop...

    I like how your sex scenes are always so different from each other and how they (most of them?) seem to have a kind of meaning? behind them. Ok I don't know how to say that. I hope ypu understand anyway.

    Do you really think Naruto is such a bleeding heart that he needs to convince himself first the the others are enemies before he can kill them and not just expects them to be enemies before they start growing on him and falters in killing them then? Hm, I don't see him as a heartless killer of course but a bleeding heart makes him sound (you proved otherwise though he did get a kunai in the stomach) like a not-so-efficient shinobi and that doesn't feel right either!? That's not criticism just a curious question. is there a middle ground? I mean that's what Naruto's nindo (or what's it called :D ) about: finding a way between a heartless tool and a useless bleeding heart, right? I should probably visit a community with that, ne? :)

    Thanks for reading my ramblings and BIG THANKS for sharing this story (and putting it where I could find it!)
    I saved the link to this story in my favorites so PLEASE keep updating! I am soo looking forward to the next 20 chapters.

    [though with the story you have going my estimate is at 70+ at least, I mean: Orochimaru, Itachi, Akatsuki (? or is that = Itachi's death?), restoring Otogakure, restoring Sasuke's health/sanity/soul whatever, getting a happy end for their relationship, a happy end with their friends no matter where they end up (how could they convince the council so that it's convincing to us readers?) and the obligatory smut scenes :D
    Souhds like a lot of work, chapters, story, fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!}

    Yours
    -xyz-

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  • From anapana83 on April 07, 2007
    Woo hoo! That was a hawt chapter there. Powerful stuff. And awwwwww did Naruto just say what i think he said??? Anywayz, i hope Sasuke will embrace that gift. Damn Orochimaru. He just had lurk around. Anywayz. I love this chap alot. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From roely on April 07, 2007
    oh, even thoughtg that was extremely hot! sasuke is going to freak! i doesn't take well to declarations of love! till next time!
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