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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - animehead on April 17, 2007
I so admire you ability to write action scenes. I simply cannot do it.

Anyway I loved this chapter just like I love all the others. Go Iruka, you show that Kakashi who wears the pants!! LOL That was great I loved the confrontation between those two!
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From RoseHime on April 17, 2007
Oh yeah, and Iruka is a quite the little spit-fire I might add. I can't believe he kicked kakashi right in the balls! XD It's so hilareous and it still feels in-character for him. And Kakashi's comment about examining the texture of wall had be choaking on my drink. lol I just wanted to ramble some more, don't mind me. *eagerly awaits next chapter*
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From RoseHime on April 17, 2007
GYAAAA! This is the best chapter! I love it so much! I'm so giddy and excited now! Iruka and Kakashi's argument was really struck close to home, I think. It was both funny and nerve wracking. Heehee, poor poor Kakashi. ^_^ Maybe a little KakaIru shipping? Our little boy is in trouble now too, they think he was the assassin! GAH! And the Akatsuki leader is sending Itachi to the scene?! GAAAAAAH! So excited! And as usual, your battles are top notch. My heart skipped a beat when I realized Sasuke and Naruto were fighting each other. I'm glad nothing too determental happened. Though if they don't get batter soon Shino's going to send them back to Konoha, DUH DUH DUH! I hope Sakura can get out there and see some action too before the end of the story too. I love how you make use of Oorochimaru's experiments and freaky research in this story. There's just so much to compliment, I really don't have any critiques. Though I feel a little bad for Lee. *sniff* That's it! I proclaim this THE best Naruto fanfic to ever grace the interenet! End of story!
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From ANON - KaraQ on April 17, 2007
I'm so giddy. Iruka kicks ass!!!!!! And although I'm am a bit of a Kakashi/Iruka shipper, your scene with these two interacting, made my day. I'm glad we saw Sakura again tooo ^^
Great work

~KaraQ
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From ANON - dana on April 17, 2007
i have not read any of your chapters for a while and when i do they are just amazing. i now don't know if i should anxiously await til saturday or wait that's how good they were i am stuck in the land of indecision. also kudos for the way you had iruka tell off kakashi and knock his dick strings loose (i almost died laughing). thanks for the entertainment.
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From ANON - Kimra on April 17, 2007
*huggles*

I've been on holidays, and now i'm back to the good stuff... which means your story.

Yay for your story and all the goodness it entails. can't wait to see how it progresses.

Your ever faithfull reader,
Kimra
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From DirewolfLilith on April 17, 2007
.... Wow... this was a very... interesting chapter... -rubs paws gleefully- i cant wait to see what happens, especially with the little boy!!! Also, i always thought that sai and hina would be a cute odd couple. dunno, sai's openness would probably cause hinata to die from blood loss because of all her blushing or something. he'd be the one in my mind to make a perverted remark about her eyes or something... anyway, nice chapter!
-direwolflilith
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From ANON - armina skitty on April 16, 2007
Sometimes I hate the computer... If you get two reviews from me, please pay it no mind. lP
Yay, the little boy is back... oh gods what happened to you, cute little boy!??! I LOVE your Sai, I love him, he is beyond awesome and I love the way you're devoloping him. I also love Possesive Sasuke, he seriously needs to tatoo 'Property of Uchiha Sasuke' on Naruto's ass. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. You're doing an excellent job. Ja ne for now!
A.S.
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From MsTrick on April 15, 2007
Dammit! Why do Sound's politics have to be so screwy? Gah! The bit with the kid was awesome though. And I liked Hinata's development a lot; it felt very in-character. Cannot wait for more!
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From ANON - DevilLived on April 14, 2007
OOh, I loved it. Awesome job. The little boy is back! I wonder what he is and why he doesn't talk, even though he did before with Sasuke.

I love Sai. He's so innocent yet not at the same time.

Great job! I hope your relatives don't crowd you too much! Keep it up!

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From Allys on April 14, 2007
XD Where to begin.. Um, at the beginning - Luffles XD Have you seen Happy Feet yet? I swear that's where it came from LOL, Luffle up Sadistickiss' feathers for me - I really do love that word - it sounds positively rude to me XD. Oh and I always thought snogging was just kissing, but that's with the Brits and words evolve and change all the time, hey 'Luffles' XD.

Okay now for an actual review - Your little devotional to Hinata was really sweet, I like that you did that. Hinata is such a love and she hardly gets any. Oh and SaiHina :Glomps and sneak in a luffle XD: I love the way he brought it up LOL, he's so freaking blunt, that's exactly what they need, both of them, they're adorable together. Oh and the comment on Naruto and 110% of his heart :) Well if that isn't an absolute truth, nothing is. How I adore that boy, he really is walking sunshine, and the way you capture him XD How did you get the sunlight to stay the bottle? How do you make evey one of your chapters so very magical? Oh, I'm really emotional today O.o Moving along - I like that after last night, despite all the squeamishness, everyone's lightened up towards Sasuke. It's like, oh look he is human :) That was certainly an excellent way to break down walls, you really do amaze me. Everything is so purposeful, it's like A Level literature all over again XD.

Then Holy crap - major happenings Hanzaki and the Scary ass Kawaii chibi! :blink blink: Whoa - I have no idea what the hell is going on, but I love it. I find myself with absolute faith in your mastery and will follow you wherever it is you want to go with this. When do the Tonfa awards roll back around? You should so win one. And hehehe :grins evilly: you did say Sai would mess with Sasuke XD. Your sense of humour and its timing is impeccable. That is one of my favourite things about this story. If I've told you this before (and I probably have) Too Bad!! Take it like a woman XD. (sorry O.o that there was a by product of the fact that compliments make me feel uneasy). But "Had anyone doubted that Sasuke actually had a soft spot for Naruto it was laid to rest as he actually hesitated before slicing his katana through the drawing several times until it fell like confetti.

He paused once more as Naruto gave him the largest, hurt blue eyes that he had ever seen."

Comic mastery, and so sweet and warm at the same time XD. It's a gift. And Holy Crap Sai hitting on Sasuke, priceless XD. And two seconds later, you spin right back into Kishimotoness. With Sai and his questioning of his emotions, it's like, I can't explain this right, but you take the characters, make them do out of the way things and yet make it utterly believable by keeping them so firmly in character and making nods at Kishimoto, and the actual story line - which somehow you beat him to the punch - Are you sure you don't have spies in Shonen jump? or that direct line - It's like if I were Catholic and Kishimoto were God - You would be the Pope. I'm not sure that made any sense. But I've had a headache all day, so forgive me, One more quick luffle and I'm off. Hopefully on Tuesday I'll be more coherent. Oh and I hate to say this but maybe you should slow down your updates, to keep them regular, at least for a while. You've done amazing so far and I don't think anyone would really mind. At least not anybody with any kind of sensitivity. Luv U, Ja ne.
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From ANON - Total Truth on April 14, 2007
I just read both 46 and 47 and I must say that I loved them!!!!! 46 was just plain great! I heart Sai! lol
I must ask that you forgive me because my reviews are really uninformative. It's because of my inner fan girl! :)

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From RoseHime on April 14, 2007
Complications! Hanzaki has been assassinated! So who's the next in line to be Otokage? Sasame maybe? That would be awesome. And Sai just can't stop causing waves, can he? But if he didn't I guess he wouldn't be Sai would he? lol The part with Sai's drawing of Sasuke really cracked me up! And Hiroki is adorable! Naruto's always been good with kids. I wonder what his powers are like and if he can fully control them. Hmm. I wonder if this is the start of a Sai Hinata romance or if Sai was just being his clueless self. Personally I perfer Kiba with Hinata, but it doesn't particuarly matter to me so long as it's written well (which I'm sure you'll do ^_^). This chapter had a little bit of everything in it. I really love it!
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From bluegenjutsu on April 14, 2007
Awww poor Sai needs someone to love him!! Too bad Gaara isn't around!! I loved how jealous Naruto got when Sai was coming on to Sasuke. I also loved when Sasuke kissed Naruto, after breakfast, right in front of the others. I'm glad that little boy, Hiroki is back and that he's still alive! I want Sasuke and Naruto to adopt him!!! :)
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From SamaSurreal on April 14, 2007
You have to update and soon...MY GODS! That was awesome! Is sai and hinata going to get together?? Mmm...makes me wonder what will happen! PLEASE update when you can! I'd so love you forever! Ttul! KEEP ON ROCKING!
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