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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From marquesgue1 on April 21, 2007
    Aww man Hiroki - :s that's really really sad and the way they kept calling him 'it' made me so mad!!! I'm glad Naruto punched that guy in the face - heh, if Sasuke hadn't been there he probably would've done worse but hey the punch satisfied me ^_^. And I just love how Sai is with Shino, lol, he just seems to rub the other the wrong way lol, makes me laugh despite the intense situations the group is in. Anyway, cool chp. ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From DevilLived on April 21, 2007
    AWW! They're gonna take him in! That's such a great idea. I really hope that Sasuke warms up to him.

    Loved the chapter, awesome job. I hope you're able to get more writing done. Don't stress yourself too much though, okay?
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  • From Allys on April 21, 2007
    Oohh! :sniff: they took the baby XD. :Glomps Zrina, and huggles her til she beats me off with a stick: :D. I'm really happy that you like the pic too, but you know, Sasuke all tied up at Naruto's mercy - I just couldn't resist XD. This was a really good chapter, I was worried for a second that they would all have to be dragged back to Konoha :S. I'm glad they didn't. Ren was an excellent choice for leader, and after all the recent decisions and orders things are moving along on a fast clip. I saw you said 60-ish chapters, that leaves about 10, that's about 5 weeks if all goes well... That's so sad ;_;. It'll be a really major accomplishment though, one that you can definitely be proud of. This is an Excellent piece of work. Naruto was so cute at the end there, getting all riled up about the baby, who I have to stop calling the baby, cause he's ... how old is he? In my head he's like 5. I'll go back and check. I also love how Sasuke immediately translated "I'll take him" to 'What are we going to do with a child?' XD. He always was a smart cookie wasn't he ;D. I expected him to give Naruto hell about the mommy comment, but I guess the situation was too tense. He's such a bastard though :D, “Good luck explaining the mission to him, dobe.” They all need hugs right about now. They make a cute little monster family. Hinata was the first person to jump into my mind too when the issue of leaving him came up. So a new mission - rescue Katsuro (isn't that the leader's name from the Rurouni Kenshin OVAs? That's how your character is in my head anyway - kind and respectable like that Katsuro.) This plot is really good, if Naruto ever goes into filler again they should let you write you the plot, that would be Awesome! Much luv, Allys.

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  • From ANON - KaraQ on April 21, 2007
    Oh wow, there is A Lot happening at once. It's a little bit confusing. I had to reread the last couple of chapters again. >_
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  • From ANON - lyn on April 21, 2007
    i loved this chapter! daddy sasuke and mommy naruto! XD its so cute XD
    also, we're in need of more smut!
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  • From ANON - makkura arashi on April 21, 2007
    hey i liked this chapter.. poor poor baby hiroki!! i hope naruto cares for him. i'd love to see a sasuke hiroki moment tho...just to bring out sasuke's kind sweet side if he has one!! so update soon and don't brring it down to once a week i'm not sure i could live!!
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  • From RoseHime on April 21, 2007
    WAAHHHHH! So sweet! I fell in love with Naruto all over again in this chapter. I love that he punched that guard out! Heehee! Served him right! Hiroki is so cute and I'm really curious about his powers.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on April 21, 2007
    i love you. i do. marry me. wait, you're taken.

    i so wanted naruto to take in the boy, and you wrote it. thank you. that made my day. and he really likes sasuke, i know, so it's only a matter of time before sasuke likes him back, and then they can be like a real family. my god! i'm so happy.

    and if you need to cut down on updates, do so. i'll wait as long as i have to for this story. regardless, i look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 21, 2007
    Well, thax for updating I really enjoyed reading the newly updated chappie. This story just keep getting better and better I bet the climax is comming in the upcoming chappies.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 21, 2007
    Heart rendering.
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  • From ANON - neji_chan on April 20, 2007
    Gah, I don't know why it took me so long to review! >< I've been following this story since the begining, and I have to say that is the best Naru/sasu/naru story ever. Your style is very clean, with the right amount of details to make it interesting but not overly descriptive. The caracterization is spot on, specially Sasuke, which is the hardest to make IC. But you did well in showing the two sides of him, the one he shows everyone and the one he tries to deny. Plus, I like how he's slowly accepting his feelings. Naruto's perfect, kudos for not making him just a stupid, loud idiot nor a super!emo kid (and neither Sasuke). The plot is awesome (and according the recent chapters of the manga, something very Naruto-ish... When I read the Sasuke-Orochimaru thing I was like, wait a minute, where I've read something like that!)Now, the lemons are amaizing, but you actually manage to make the story so interesting that I'm not only reading for them, but to know what happens! (That alone shows how skill you are, in my book XP)And one of the things that captured me was how well you insert the story in canon, and didn't forget about it (Asuma's death, for example)
    Now, for the best parts (IMHO)... The first time Sasuke shows how much he cares for Naruto, when he found out Orochimaru had taken over him. It was heartbreaking. Then there're the little rutines between Naruto and Sasuke, squee worthy. The first lemon was the best so far, firts, it was Narusasu, and then we had in denial!sub!Sasuke (c'mon Sasuke, embrace your ukeness! XP I'm still waiting for the sub!Sasuke one ... but I think he's still has some issues to sort, beforehe feels confortably with that) Sasuke's first bj was the hotness!!(Naruto thought that too, ne? XP) I like Sai's participation in the story too, even if I didn't liike him at first. And last (well, ther are a thousand more, I might as well qoute the full story) because I'm a kakairu fan, and moreso an Iruka fan, I looooved his part in the last chapter!! *That's* how he is, a chunnin that speaks his mind in front of his superiors, with total disregard of rank, unafraid of the jounin's upper level in skill, and with a terrible temper XDD The hit in Kakashi's balls was the best!! Still a chunin, but caught him unaware... AND he fought dirty. (Go Iruka-sensei) Now I want to read something kakairu from you, s'not fair ::pouts::
    OK, sorry for the long review with nothing near close as constructive criticism, and for the crappy english (not my first language)
    Can't wait to tomorrow's chapter!! XD
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  • From MsTrick on April 19, 2007
    God this story just gets better and better. I love the Kakashi/Iruka interaction -- really true to character. And the bit at the end was awesome! Can't wait for more!
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  • From manicandyshumway on April 18, 2007
    I absolutely LOVE Iruka in this fic! *hugs you to death* Finally someone who doesn't write him as a quiet, blushing uberuke but the tempermental, very vocal, conserned schoolteacher that he is!
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  • From Bunni07 on April 17, 2007
    Dun dun dunnnnnnn...! Here comes the Akatsuki!! XD I liked the idea of the snake venom turning them onto eachother, well not the fact of them getting hurt but it was cool anyway, it was unexpected. Oh and, YAY!! Dun dun dunnnnnnn....!!! Itachi...teehee......I can sooo see the drama on the way. (That was the point, though, huh?) lol I wonder who you're gonna make leader of the Akatsuki...? lol Exciting.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 17, 2007
    The poor little boy!!! I hope nothing bad happens to him! Naruto and gang need to get back to the Sound village fast!
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