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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - hina88 on June 05, 2007
:s oh god that bastard got his eyes and naruto can't get out this really isn't going well for our boys :s but Sasuke being so worried about Naruto to the point where he'd consider going back to Konoha (swalllowing his pride lol) to get help from Kakashi had my hear going all warm :) And I love how Naruto just thought of Hiroki as his own when Kyubi made that crack about him wanting to have kids. Anyway thanks again for the update ^_^

Hina xXxx
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From Adi on June 05, 2007
*squints at review replies* yup I can safely say you love me the mostest :D XD

I like the past references to the anime, like the Haku insertions you add in, they�re a nice touch

I know the matter is very serious and all but the convo with Kyuubi at the beginning made me laugh, it sounded like Jiraiya trying to be a parent XD

AH! You extracted Sasuke�s eyes and Oro wants to replace them with Naruto�s?!?!?! (lol erm incase you haven�t noticed I�m writing this review as I read in case I forget to say something) TEH ANGST!

And Sasuke�s thinking about Itachi when Naruto has been taken over? *kicks Sasuke*

You�re bringing in the big guns aren�t you? Enter Kakashi! The ultimate cool of cool, who kicks everyone�s ass :D

Zrina, I spared you from the lynch rope last time because I trusted you and the next chapter wouldn�t hurt as much, but it did! You took out Sasuke�s eyes, that I could deal with, wouldn�t expect anything less from Oro, but you gave him Naruto�s eyes. NARUTO�S EYES! *goes into despair*

*twirls lynch rope* come along willingly and it won�t hurt so much

*pounces* I LOVE YOU! XD (I think I�m slightly bipolar XD)

okay now I'm completely up to date, and I can't believe I've been missing out on this, the hell is wrong with me?! screw the exams! (don't worry, they're finished now, so I can say that XD)

*does a happy clappy dance for Kakashi* will there be Gai too? O_O *loves on you*

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From Bluesake on June 05, 2007
oh my god......Whats gonna happen now? Keep going!
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From BishounenKrazed on June 05, 2007
omg!! i was choked up when i read that orochimaru had sasuke's eyes! and then to learn that instead of letting him remain blind, the doc put his lover's eyes in him...!! such drama! oh but please, please, when all is said and done and everyone (sasuke and naruto) is fine (not dead *brandishes computer virus*) let tsunade, the best damn doctor in fire country, correct this injustice! naruto without those brilliant blue eyes and sasuke without his ebony black/blood red eyes is not something i want to consider!!

or, you know, something less fanatic. *shrugs*

that said, this was so edge-of-my-seat exciting! i don't think i looked away from the words once! again, the eyes! but if i know naruto, and possibly kyuubi, they'll find a way to keep orochimaru from fully utilizing the sharingan. hopefully. oh, i'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
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From Trollmia on June 05, 2007
ohh, the tension, the tension I tell you... it has me sitting on needles. Great chapter as always. I will be roaming around the latest posted stories until I see that you've updated again...
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From ladygizarme on June 05, 2007
holy fucking shit, oro's plans get more maniacal by the chapter!! and now the eye switch...wow! poor naruto and sasuke. but i love that you did that. it's unique and somehow makes me squeee for sasuke at least getting to keep naru's eyes since he no longer has *him*... and i like how you do kyuubi's reaction to the situation and naruto's and his predicament--you keep him in a realistic perspective, not making him overly affectionate and such like often happens in fanfiction. i like the description of his annoyance with naruto's feelings and emotions affecting him through their link, and.. just everything is really good! the "i'll help you, but only because it benefits me" attitude is right on. the banter about sasuke, bitch vs. mate, and the kit--err, kid, lol was greatness as well.

sooooo, now sasuke will be on his way to konoha.. ack! more drama and action to come, ne??!! i can't wait to watch (read) it all happen!! i hope sasuke can actually get the help for naruto he needs, and warn konoha in time. omg, if naruto's body is used to destroy konoha naru will freak!

~ lg
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From ANON - animehead on June 05, 2007
OMG I thought I reviewed last chapter. Im so scared and nervous now. My heart is like pounding. I'm afraid to keep reading, but I'm going to. Please tell me my Naru is gonna get his blue eyes back! *groans* Okay, trying to calm myself. I'll just patient. Loves you.
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From Kimra on June 05, 2007
Ah GOD! Your gonna save them right? Right? I don't know you well enough, I don't know if you like happy endings, or if you like to screw the reader around to no end. If it's the second option you may have a whole lot of people trying to kill you... just a warning. it wont me me, I'm likely on teh wrong side of the world, but someone will be ploting your demise. Erg. Not serious death threats. It's your story you write it how you want, and if you want to trumatise a whole lot of innocent readers, that's your perogative. BUT I will love you and worship you and praise your existance if you make this happy. Hell I'll write you a story, and Naruto Sasuke story (no where near as good or long as yours) but I'll write any story you want, and I'm decent enough at writing to pull it off. YOu could ask for Naruto in a easter bunny suit and Sasuke in a wheelchair and I'd write it for you. See this? This is me trying to buy you off, words are my only currency so I keep offering but no one actually takes me up on my offers. Take me up on an offer - I even have done one Naruto fanfic that you can see an example of my awesome powers of mediocracy. :P

Anyway! The story! The worship! The praise! Dear lords I'm worshiping and praising and praying to god you nice to Naruto and Sasuke. You are so good, you are so fucken brilliant that I'm fumbling trying to realise what's just happened in teh story and where everything will have to go. Kakashi can save Naruto, Tsunade can reverse the eye thingy, or it can't be reversed (whatever). Itachi can die in flames and horror, and Sasuke and Naruto can bonk and be happy doing whatever the hell they want to do... which is bonk and be happy. Please please please. I can't stop writing because you just threw this chapter at us and I was so happy because I needed to read somethign good, but it was too good and it wasn't concluded and I just neeeeed to read the rest.

Okay I better stop, this can only get longer from here on out. I await, with baited breath, the next update of this story. I await in awe and anticipation and other aliteration for whatever climatic ending you give. We will be happy no matter how it ends, so fear not we love you!

The end.
Kimra
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From ANON - littleolmee on June 05, 2007
Aaah, they switched eyeballs! Sorry, had a horror movie moment there . . . . Wow, powerful chapter. Even though Sasuke had his moment of worry about himself and his desires he switched gears quickly and thought of Naruto and how to save him. Looks like it all goes back to Konoha after all, hopefully his info will be enough leverage to not only get them to help Naruto and allow him to help, but save them all as well. Can't wait to see what you got in mind for the story next! Keep up the great work, take care.
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From Adi on June 04, 2007
ok I've finished reading the last 2 chapters, but I'm also really sleepy. I really enjoyed them, and the I like the perspective from Orochimaru's POV, I sometimes find myself cheering for him until I realise he's the baddie and Naruto and Sasuke are glaring at me XD heh for all Orochimaru being all evil villany he doesn't come off that villiany, but in a good IC kinda way, oh I'm probably not making sense and have just been converted to the KyuOro pairing so I'm probably sprouting gibberish XD I am amazed by how you've managed to plan all of this, it must have taken quite a bit of effort and time. O_O ok hon, I think I'm all reviewed out, well just really sleepy, if I remember more to say in the morning I shall come back, for that is my ninja way *does good guy pose*

*hugs*

Night night

Adi XX
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From Adi on June 04, 2007
Review for Chapter 54

NYAH! I was just about to give up Togimeishu as a lost cause to some filler episode that I couldn�t remember and then you went and pulled a fast one on me! Damn you plan in advance! *in awe*

NYAH! Again! Orochimaru is a daddy! lol sorry I�m easily excitable at the moment because SoD is doing wonder�s for my reward system :D

Oh I caught a typo �He ran a hand of the visible seal� �over� instead of �of� :)

I�m not going to say the whole Oro jerking off thing was hot. Because it wasn�t. Oh who the hell am I kidding?! I, Adi, think Oro is hot. What the hell have you done to me? Him visualizing Kyuubi only made it hotter. I am so corrupted XD

O_o Oro went a little crazy at the end there. Demented Sannin fun! XD

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From Adi on June 04, 2007
he wasn�t sure if he should follow Sai�s advice and call Naruto Otousan and Sasuke Okaasan

Holy cow, that line made me choke. Sai is a complete, uh there are too many words to describe him.

�Snog!� Sai cursed

Ok I almost fell out of my chair with that one. Honest to god.

AW the Hiroki and Akamaru thing was so freaking adorable. You make me like kids in this fic :S

lol I love how ol Oro likes to plan things out, he�s one small step away from getting a cat and stroking it while evilly laughing, what�s disturbing is that he�s like that in the anime too, he�s very smug XD

I think the Togimeishu is part of another filler episode? Hmm I�m not sure, lol I don�t need to ask sily questions anyway before the next chapter is but a click away. *dork*

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From Adi on June 04, 2007
Review for Chapter 52

"After a long considering look, Itachi calmly reached behind him and drew his own weapon, the same one that had slain his family. The one that would now either finish the job or bear witness to his judgment being rendered."

I love that line. It summed things up very nicely, genius line.

I like that Naruto got irrationally jealous about how Itachi and Sasuke had beautiful graceful fighting thingys (don�t look at me like that, makes sense in my head!) lol Zrina, you�re hinting at Uchihacest in Naruto�s thoughts there XD

AH the fight scenes were amazing!!! The fight between Sasuke and Itachi almost felt like it could have been the anime.

Ok I�ve just finished reading the rest of the chapter, lynch rope? What lynch rope? Ah yeah, that lynch rope over there, come along Zrina, you knew this was coming XD lol The whole Orochimaru thing makes me really frustrated, just when Naruto and Sasuke where getting somewhere! Okay off to read the next chapter :D

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From Adi on June 04, 2007
Review for Chapter 51

lol trust me to stop reading just before the smut, XD what the hell is wrong with me? let's see if I can leave a proper review without going to reread all that and drooling. Honestly Zrina your fics leave a brainless wreck, I'm not sure how I function afterwards XD Right the chapter! Must not babble. I love your Shino, he's gona a personality and everything XD I liked how you showed what Sasuke thought of Itachi and still managed to tie it to Naruto. The ending made me sad where Naruto felt like he had a no-win situation. *tries to steal your Naruto* I'd look after him!! Ok going to read the next chapter!
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From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on June 01, 2007
You certainly do weave a tangled web don't you, and thats putting it mildly. I'm very curious to see how you will handle all the plot twists you have created. It should be more than interesting to see where the story goes now. I look forward to the next chapter(s). My best wishes for you and your writing.
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