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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From anapana83 on June 19, 2007
Wwo, another good chap. Kakashi and Sakura at once. It was about time though. I love Hiroki's reaction to everything. And the closeness between him and Sasuke is uber cute. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great job as usual.
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From Kimra on June 19, 2007
*hugs* I loved it to pieces. Sakura still hasn't figured out Naruto and Sasuke are a couple... that'll hurt I reckon, but she'll put it together eventually even if no-one tells her outright. :D I love your writing, and the way you... just damn I love your writing and the way it all comes together. I'm not sure about the whole other user of the big-evil sharigan I can't spell right now, but I'm happy to go along for the ride. I imagine you wouldn't be mentioning something like that if you didn't have your own plans for it. If this story has a sequal I htink your going to kill a whole lot of fangirls / boys.

Anyway. Awesome update. It made my day (not that that's surprising it was a shitty exam failing day). An excellent way to end my day.

As for you Anbu Training story, thanks for getting back to me on it. I'm sorry if I was being presumtious asking, but I just loved it htat much and can see so much potential for it. :D BUT I'm more than happy to sit back and twiddle my thumbs to see if you get back to it, and if you do happen to get back to it, what you do to it. :D Hope I'm making good sense. Can't wait for whatever it is you choose to post next. :D

*one of your fans* Kimra
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From ANON - hina88 on June 19, 2007
Oh god I found myself groaning when it reached the end because there was no more to read :(

Anyway lol glad Tsunade didn't take Sasuke's head off that was a relief lol and Hiroki's reaction was brilliant I loved how Sasuke chided him lol making him happy by comparing him to Naruto and then calling him an idiot in the same breath heh :D and Kakashi's reaction looool that was soooo Kakashi :D anyway :s I hope they get to Naruto soon although I know it won't just happen over night but it has me worried :S stupid Orochimaru *glares*

Can't wait for the next update ^_^ thanks for the cool chp.
Hina xXxx
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From ANON - ukestalker on June 19, 2007
OMG loved it, the kid is just to cute! when is everyone else going to find out about sasuke and naruto being more then just friends, i can't waite to see their faces!(or read about them...you all know what i mean)
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From ANON - Adi on June 19, 2007
still haven't logged in XD

Hey hon, it�s the weekly dose of Adi�s weird way of reviewing time XD

Ok, I wanted to emphasise again how well you�ve done Itachi, and I like the mentions of Deidara, and the torturing XD The Leader as an Uchiha theory was nicely pulled off, some people will completely miss that, but that�s because they�re 14 and not meant to be on the site anyway :) Itachi just got bored, it�s the most IC reason to explain why he left. That last line where it shows Itachi�s still a puppet to the Uchiha clan? I don�t know the word for it, but it�s a good word, uh, I�ll come back to that :D

I have to admit, I was surprised to see Hiroki go all hulk, I just didn�t expect it, I love your action scenes. Dammit, I�m gonna petition that you write the anime. Hiroki trying to Sasuke was the cutest thing ever, and his thoughts about protecting him were Narutoish, I almost expected the �Believe it� line again :D

�That�s what makes him an idiot, too.� I think I�ll name that my favourite line of the chapter, it�s just so damn true. And then Sasuke went all dad/older brother, it�s just the way he�d parent, Naruto would just stick his tongue out at Tsunade and Hiroki would probably copy XD

Hiroki clinging to Sasuke makes the cutest picture ever, I hope someone draws that, kinda reminds me of the flashbacks with Sasuke and Itachi, which were cute and a little sinister because Itachi went all psychopath.

We haven�t seen too much with Tsunade, I think this is the only one with almost a whole chapter of her in it and hon you rocked her out. Her conversation with Sasuke, around the recap parts were so funny, and ugh I need to stop using �IC� to describe everything you make your characters do, but it�s still very true. The recap, I HAVE TO GO READ THE EARLY CHAPTERS. IT WILL TAKE ME ALL WEEK, BUT I�LL DO IT FOR IT IS MY NINJA WAY. Hmm a chapter or 2 a day may be more sensible XD. Sasuke being so stubborn about saving Naruto, just tugs at the heart strings

KAKASHI! (your ears probably are bleeding at this point) His one-sided conversation with Akamaru was just freaking mastermind. You have nothing to worry about with your Kakashi not being taken well with the readers, it�s impossible not to love him when he had a convo with Akamaru. I like that even Kakashi was a bit caught out with Sasuke�s appearance, but still managed to take it in his stride, wouldn�t want to ruin his reputation XD . �I see you�ve been busy while you were away.� We have a contender for the favourite line :D Kakashi blinking at Sasuke�s blue eyes just, ah *loves on you*

SAKURA! (you might want to go to the doctors after this) you did an excellent job, you didn�t cave into your �die, pink wench die!!!� instincts. Haha, she felt jealous of Hiroki. Her thoughts immediately going to trying a relationship with Sasuke is characteristic (see I didn�t use �IC� XD) and makes me go �pfft, girl you have no chance� oh and lol I like how Hiroki would have glued himself to Naruto anyway and Sasuke knew this XD

You always manage to find the perfect line ending that makes me go �I WANT MORE WOMAN!!!!� XD

And here ends Adi�s weekly review, tune in next time to see her reaction to Shikamaru.

*HUGS!*

LOVE YOU LIKE YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From Ruffner on June 17, 2007
oooohhh! You are just cruel! How can you leave it there!? I wanna know what happens! Update Please! TToTT
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From ANON - chineseartist on June 16, 2007
ahh, i'm still crying about naruto's eyes. *whine*
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From Keyblyder on June 15, 2007
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Talk about a cliff hanger!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
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From ANON - viper on June 14, 2007
please update soon! this is an awesome story, I want to know what happens to Sasuke! this story is beautifully written, brilliant plot, nice twists, it never gets boring!
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From crazychemgeek on June 14, 2007
lol - I loved Tsunade's reaction to Sasuke with Naruto's eyes. Can't wait to see how he explains himself. I love this story and I'm both looking forward to the ending, and sad that it'll be ending soon.
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From ANON - StarDust--FireAshes on June 14, 2007
I torture myself, I do. I'm on chapter 52, oh my did it look short(your upcoming, for me, fight scene!) , and I dont mean that in a bad way. I just mean even someone like me might be able to read it quick. But I've spent enough time on the computer today lol. I will look forward to your next chapters. The plot you've created is too intriging and now that I'm this far I guess its too late to stop, hm? (like I could anyways. Your story has some of the best naruto/sasuke interaction I've ever read!!!!) But I just thought I'd let ya know I love this story!

Please update soon because even though I am not at your latest chapter, I am anticipating every word of it.
SD&FA
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From ANON - Cin on June 13, 2007
*sniff, sniff* This is getting a little angsty! But I love it! I love how Sasuke's goal of revenge is given up for rescuing Naruto!!! It hurts me to see them torn apart like this. So beautiful! I love Tsunade's reaction to seeing Sasuke though! That's how I pictured she would react. You leave me sitting on the edge of my seat as always! I can't wait to read more! Keep writing!
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From ANON - ninetailedfoxx852 on June 13, 2007
omg i loved it when hiroki said Believe it! i thought it was the cutest thing ever!! also sasuke having narutos eyes and naruto havin his kinda sucks but i its.... just... well, ITS SO DARLING! love the story cannot wait for the next chapter, keep up the awesome job!!!!
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From ANON - armina on June 13, 2007
I liky. I liky a lot. I love how Sasuke accepted that the kid was his family now. I am also curious as hell as to what Hiroku's (sp?) power is. Nice transition chapter and I look forward to the next update. On to Blackmail and Betrayal!
AS
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From roely on June 13, 2007
i'm crying right now that hug between sasuke and that kid so precious (sniff) and what he said (the kid) about hoping someone love him enough to trade eyes with him was just so (sobs) so good. i didn't mind the joke great like always. see ya!
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