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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 26, 2007
    Oh my soul, I absolutly adore how each character described what they saw. It was perfect. I laughed soooooo much. Please, update again soon.
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 26, 2007
    Awww I loved this chapter :D you just reminded me of why i love the rookie 9 so much :D loooool and Sai!!! man looool :d 'snogging' looooool :D i love how he just attached himself to that word lol, and I loved how they all threw in their version of what naruto and sasuke were doing in the scroll that Sai showed them heh and Tenten, a little hentai isn't she :D anyway, I really loved this update ^_^ can't wait for next week for the next one ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From NekoChild on June 26, 2007
    I wasn't expecting the eye change in the last couple chapters... I can definitely tell you are having fun with this story. One thought crossed my mind earlier on with the... ah... 'hotter' scenes, either your husband is absolutely amazing in bed leaving you with all sorts of unbelievably sexy ideas, or, he is lacking, leaving you to daydream through fanfictions... heh^^;
    Anyway, I hope you keep it up to the end, I am loving it thus far.
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  • From AlbelxthexWickedxisxlove on June 23, 2007
    Hey!! This is my first time reviewing, but I've been reading this story for awhile, and I must say it's my favorite! I really love this!! Keep up the good work, and try to update as soon as you can!!!
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on June 21, 2007
    ok 1st and foremost i started reading this fic like a week ago and i am now i hav caught up and the only thing i hav to say is damn this is a godd ass story. i mean chapter after chapter had me wanting to know more even when it turned ugly at times i had to know wat happnd next. man this story is just that good. i had to review, no i needed to review. wat else can i say. i mean wow. just wow. well i guess i will finish up by saying ur a great writer and i enjoyed reading this and cant wait to read more. so i guess thats it. XD well ok then. peace
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  • From roely on June 21, 2007
    i have only one complaint! i wish you write more! good chapter! i hope that when sakura finds out about sasuke and naruto she doesn't hurt much.
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  • From LuthienWildglen on June 20, 2007
    (Blushes as red as a tomato) I always have faith in you, that’s why I’m still reading your work. You truly are one of my three favorite authors (both officially published and unofficially published). I’m very sorry for my last review. To say it came off as a bit strong is probably an understatement. Like I said before though, take it as a complement that your writing is able to affect your readers so much. I suppose I was just very surprised in your choice to take Sasuke’s eyes from him. I sincerely hope you give them back.

    Anyway though, in regards to this chapter, I enjoyed it immensely. You can really see the affect that Naruto has had on Sasuke in this chapter just in the way he handles Hiroki and treats him. Sasuke’s really matured throughout this story and I am very excited to see how much growth he continues to undergo by the end of the story.

    I also thought it was very interesting that you gave us some insight into Itachi. Granted that I don’t read the manga so I don’t know how much is your fabrication, and how much is real, I thought that your explanation of why Itachi massacred his clan made the situation even more tragic. I’m curious though how this mysterious “objective” that he has to complete will play into the rest of the story. Just when I think you are finished adding in plot twists you create a few more. You do have a way with keeping us on the edge of our computer chairs. My best wishes for you and your writing.

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  • From MsTrick on June 20, 2007
    AHHH! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! This story is my lifeblood! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - mary on June 19, 2007
    sakura is in for a surpise!! i love this fic of yours! just how many more chappies are you planning? and keep cool for summer has hit!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 19, 2007
    Aw. I love Sasuke and Hiroki moments. They make me squee.

    (sighs) Only Kakashi could be so calm about meeting Sasuke again, especially with Sasuke's blue eyes. I love how you had Sasuke let Sakura know that there was nothing romantic between them. It was really cool and subtle.

    I wonder how she'll react to the news? Very excited for the next chapter; keep it up! (cheers)
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  • From Allys on June 19, 2007

    Hey sweetie, YAY it was like a whole chapter of adorable family relations XD. Sasuke and Hiroki are sooo Kawaii!!! I think I've his look all worked out, now it's just to get the three together. I like the theory that Leader is an Uchiha. He does have those funny eyes and it would be a cool way to explain them. The snails pace that they're moving at would irritate me if it weren't for the distracting cuteness, LOL, but that's perfect cause that's how they move in the anime and manga as well. That's my dobe streak shining through, Naruto would have been impatient as well. I love how you wrote Sakura. She's perfectly in character, especially the odd behaviour around Sasuke, and I was so happy when Hiroki was all "Who the hell are you?" LOL, it was a perfect reaction. I also love Sasuke's answer and the fact that Sakura remains as clueless as ever. I really want to see everyone's reaction to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, and boy does it crack me up that Hiroki refers to Sasuke as his nii-san, it's so innocent, yet incestuous, and could confuse the hell out of a person!! XD. Thank you so much for the update. :Huggles: I wanna go draw now ;D.
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  • From Dragon7 on June 19, 2007
    Love it!!!!!!!!!!! this story is great I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on June 19, 2007
    and i still don't like her. *shakes head helplessly* this was a great chapter! so much going on and yet nothing gets done, haha. that is the mark of a true suspenseful author. i'm surprised no one bitched sakura out for coming in uninvited like that. cause i know the minute she finds out what's going on, she'll want to go along. ah well, nothing for it, i guess. this is such an awesome story, though, and i can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From RoseHime on June 19, 2007
    Daww! Sasuke actually went easy on Sakura. That was really cute! Hiroki gets more and more adorable every chapter! I wonder how they'll find out about Naruto and Sasuke's romantic relationship, I'm half expecting Sai to randomly blurt it out. Heehee! That would be great. Good chapter, you really capture Tsunade. Companding, stubborn, yet caring. Her interaction with Sasuke was really great. Itachi is good too. I'm really impressed by how you are able to capture the character's personalities so accurately. Kudos!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 19, 2007
    Uh oh! Is Itachi and Deidara going to steal Orochimaru/Naruto before Sasuke and Kakashi can save Naruto? It's so cute the way that Sasuke and Hiroki are so attached to each other. I can't wait until Sakura finds out that Naruto and Sasuke are together. Great chapter! :)
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