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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From Kimra on July 03, 2007
    So mean. So soooo mean. Okay. Okay. I might manage this if I breath slowly and count the seconds until your next update. Dear me but I was worried as well for a bit there, this update seemed to be posted later tha usual, and you didn't post anything on the weekend. I was worried for you! well it was purely selfish, because without you who's gonna write the awesome? But I'm glad to see your back and writing. But dear me, could you write any more tension into a story, could you make me feel any more anxious for hte characters? If you could I don't think i could stomach the story. I think any more tension would be my undoing.

    So yes. Excellent, and horrifying and tense and all those thing I'm sure you where aiming for. I pray you post more next week, and I await you updates. :D

    Kimra
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  • From Arcueido on July 03, 2007
    I'm always looking forward to your next chapter and with each chapter I can never get over how good you are at describing the battle details... so much so that I feel I'm in the battle itself. I love the way you kept the story so close to the actual manga and anime and how almost everything falls into place, making this Naruto manga/anime extension definitely THE best by far.... Thank you for writing this.....
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  • From marquesgue1 on July 03, 2007
    Shit.

    loool sorry but that's what completely describes my thoughts as Sasuke found that scene before him. GAHHHH!!! i don't know what i want to happen :s (not that what i want matters lol) so - i shall place my faith in your capable hands and hope that you kick orochimaru's ass and... hmm if itachi dies... O_O that might be painfull for me, bastard's grown on me *sigh*... man i'm getting sidetracked with this review lool :D anyway thanks for the update!!! the start of the fight's got me all pumped up and we have to wait till... next tuesday *droops* heh ^_6 and i'll be tuning in on saturday too for your AU

    Ja!
    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - Adi on July 03, 2007
    Oh *sigh* I’m sure I could give it a read…

    GIMME! *GRABS!* XD

    You already know I was all for the Itachi, Deidara and Oro action. I transformed into my 8 year old self going “POW! Yeah! Kick his ass!” XD

    The Kyuubi and Naruto convo always cracks me up. “on his hands and knees with my dick up his ass” :D:D:D Oro wanted it. Kyuubi wanted it, I wonder what their babies would be like XDXD

    I already read the bit about Naruto thinking about Sasuke but it still got me the second time round. WAAAAAAAAAAH! Comfort me!! :( I had to go read it again, I’m such a masochist.

    “His possessed lover and his psychotic brother faced each other and for the life of him, he wasn’t sure who he wanted to confront first.” Sasuke! you run and comfort Naruto right now! I always love your ending lines, I’m not sure if they come to you in some sort of magical dream or you sit there pondering it for days, but it’s always good.

    Love love LOVE the chapter, I loved the action, am an action girl at heart, so it’s all “OMG THIS SO COOL!” for me :D

    YAY! for you meeting the deadline XD Means I’m gonna be working on porn today. Been sitting here for 2 hours, nothing is flowing :(


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  • From ANON - Kamikyo on July 01, 2007
    Kyaaaaaaaa! Just the thing I needed after my net-less holliday time!
    Can't wait for the next, just like always, right? *laughes* You rock!
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  • From ANON - KunoichiAddy on June 29, 2007
    Oh, wow! It took me three days, but I have just finished your story. I'm very glad that I went ahead and read. Previously, I had bookmarked your story, but I was waiting to read it until it was completed. However, I gave into peer pressure and read it anyway. I had hear that it was an amazing read, and I'm glad that I went ahead and caught up with it. Of course, now I'm stuck biting my nails, waiting to find out what happens next...

    I love how fluid your storytelling is. You also do a fabulous job keeping the boys in character. I am especially fond of your portrayel of Sai. It was a stroke of genius to use a heterosexual male to keep the characters from becoming too OOC.

    I'm also impressed by your origional characters. You have given them so much depth, that they could easily exist within the actual Naruto series. Hiroki is perfect and a welcome edition to the little family. I love stories where Naruto and Sasuke have kids, but the children tend to fall flat, and the story usually crumbles at that point. Good job on avoiding that.

    Chapter 60 was amazing. It's such a dark point in the tale, but the humor was appropriate, and it left me without wanting to bash my head into the computer from an overload of angst. If this wasn't such a well-written and intriguing story, I'd be regretting having read this, since you left us with a horrible cliffhanger. Grr... It looks like it'll take several chapters for the current conflict to be resolved, too!

    Thanks for sharing your story.
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  • From onobaby on June 28, 2007
    yah! Konoha gang is finally back. Sai is so funny. This dude loves to stir it up! Is the picture Sai drew anything like the manga where Sai drew himself with Sasuke? I can't wait for the showdown.
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  • From TheSirens on June 27, 2007
    I really like what this story has become, the eye switching was an interesting idea, and the last part of chap 6o had me laughing...snogging lol. Keep it up i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From MsTrick on June 27, 2007
    AH! I missed all the Konoha nin! You write everyone in a way that makes them so real; I love it! That dialogue at the end was amazing. And I'm still in awe that you managed to create such a cast of OC's without Marysuing left and right. You make my life better. ;) I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 27, 2007
    Oh my goodness, when they started to name all the ways to say sex I started to laugh out loud. I think this chappie was hilarious and now that everyone besides Sakura knows what is going on, I think things will go smoothly.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From crazychemgeek on June 27, 2007
    Another awesome chapter. I love this story!! How long until Sasuke and Naruto get to see each other again. Poor things :(
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  • From ANON - nameless/soul on June 27, 2007
    “Having anal intercourse.”

    My God I about died. Yet that is so like him.
    Cam't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - bunni07 on June 27, 2007
    Ahh! ^_^ Comic relief! lol Gawd I'm so excited for the next chapter but thinking about this story ending is making me depressed...I luff it too much!! XD
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on June 27, 2007
    i absolutely enjoyed the fun at the end of chapters 60. it rocked. i love reading this story, and it's almost time for another re-read. keep up the good work!
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  • From anapana83 on June 26, 2007
    LMAO! THIS IS THE BEST CHAP YET, AND THERE WASN'T EVEN ANY SMUT!

    I enjoyed this one so much. I love seeing the former Rookies together again. That Sai...Anyway, it's so cute to see that they are going to be quick to defend Naruto and protect him. It had to have hurt him to leave them behind. I think he'll be touched. And who says Sasuke aint a father? Wise up Saukra, Sasuke is a daddy already ^_^. Great chap.
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