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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 11, 2007
    ch7
    YEAH YAY YAY!!! Sooo good. I like it when be was free...and the dream...poor naruto and i had been wondering what he was dreaming about. i guess being taught by nothing but pervs rubbs off on you. so he is going to help naruto, orochimaru wants to kill him off. and naruto and kyuubi have a plan...that i want to know what it is.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 11, 2007
    ch 6:
    its offical i love his dreams...and by extention him.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 11, 2007
    chapter 5:
    i like sasuke's dream, i think i will really like this story. I also really have a developing fondness for your sasuke. i wonder why the fox attacked the village and it seems a little tired and kind before leaving naruto to himself. So he knows he can't let the fox be on his own because he would kill him even if it was accidently, although think of Kyuubi i would wonder if it were an accident. I wonder what Tsunade is going to do along with everyone else. I think Neji is right, naruto is resisting even if he is traped right now.
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  • From ANON - LiLlAdYeX(not logged in) on July 11, 2007
    You always leave me in suspense and when I get into it the chapter ends but im confused when did Naruto get all those seals on him? And how is Orochimaru using Kyuubi's power so extensively?
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  • From ANON - KunoichiAddy on July 11, 2007
    Oh! That was a cruel way to end the chapter! Of course, it was brilliantly suspensful, too.

    I enjoyed chapters 61 and 62. You write action very well. You add enough discreption to create sufficient imagery, but you don't bore the reader with details about the gleam, heighth, weight, and texture of Sasuke's sword. Woah, that sounded kind of dirty.

    Anyway, I must admit that the first time I read chapter 61, I missed quite a bit. I was in a bit of a hurry to reach the end in hopes of finding a cuddly SasuxNaru ending. However, I'm glad you didn't skimp on the fights, despite my need for some actual yaoi loving. I look forward to the resolution you are working towards. Oh, and you made Kakashi very cool. :)
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 11, 2007
    Chapter 4:

    Ah. I really loved the part where he was remembering the feel of naruto's body, and how blue his eyes still are. I wonder what they are going to do in the next chapter. Sasuke just want's to kill his brother and he wants power. i don't know about Sasuke being okay with Orochimaru killing Itachi, i mean he wouldn't really be the one doing it, just his body. too me that would be like "hey he's over there now you can kill him for me." or maybe he messed up and doesn't want to be wrong.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on July 10, 2007
    Ahhh this story is... I just can't put it into words I love it sooooooo much. Can't wait till next Tues. The finally is coming and I can't wait till we find out what happens to sasuke and Itachi, kakashi and orochimaru.


    ja ne till next time
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  • From roely on July 10, 2007
    im going to cry! you always leave off when its getting good!
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  • From ANON - Myra on July 10, 2007
    AUGH cliffhangeer! *falls over and dies*
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  • From Onawa on July 10, 2007
    "Oh - Jeez," I thought to myself. "Not another fight scene" I was pleasantly surprised, however, when I saw how you handled each of the characters' fighting styles, and didn't rely upon the names of the jutsus. Each part of the battle felt like a real part of the story in furthering plot, and not a D&D role-playing game recitation. While using dice and a D&D format might make for an interesting experiment, I am so pleased that you relied upon your skillful style of writing using all of the senses.

    There was one thing that threw me. I have only watched Naruto up to the end of the chuunin exams, so I knew about the marks on Sasuke from O. but didn't realize that it turned him into what he did.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on July 10, 2007
    o yea of the evil cliffhanger!! As always, lovely chapter...and waiting (again) for the next update. Thanks
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  • From BishounenKrazed on July 10, 2007
    you can't leave it there!! but apparently you can, 'cause you did, and i'm just a bit disappointed because i want that snake bastard dead. but this chapter was so exciting that i actually said, out loud, "i'm excited," bouncing a bit in my chair, to which i quickly replied, "i'm a nerd." but who cares when the story is this good, ne?

    i seriously can't wait for the rest of the fight. here's hoping next tuesday is tomorrow! ^.~
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  • From anapana83 on July 10, 2007
    WOAH! What a great chap. Theres like 3 things going on at once. I hope Kakashi can make it man, and Sasuke too. Anyway, great chap! I cannot wait for next week's.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2007
    The fight-scene: Boring??? NEVER!!!!
    I'm so exicited, my keyboard is suffering^^" The tension is neally unbearable! I feel it's comming to an end^^ *cries* don't want it to end!!!
    Can't wait for the next^^
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  • From llyoung on July 10, 2007
    Very nice fight scenes (and hey you have over 1200 reviews now!!!!!!!!!!).
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