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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From HumanInfiltrator on July 31, 2007
Aaaaaaaaahrg! Torture, torture, torture. Please don't leave us like this for long. Pleeeeease!
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From RoseHime on July 31, 2007
UWAHH! Poor Naruto! And Sasuke just in the next room... that's some dramatic irony right there! Let's not make this a romeo/juliet misunderstanding! Happy ending!!!
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From ANON - Glorial on July 31, 2007
No! *sobs* You give back Sasuke's eyes and bring him in there so Naruto can see he's alive and that he doesn't care what he looks like (although I really really *really* hope you "fix" Naruto back to the way he was)!

Naruto's reaction when he tugged at his tails was funny but the whole scene was so heartbreaking *flames angst*

I can't believe this is coming to an end I don't even know when I'll get to read your next installment. I'll probably leave at the end of the week and I'll more than likely won't have internet access. this is so sad...
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From BishounenKrazed on July 31, 2007
well, that angst wasn't too bad, since it's caused more from misinformation than any real fact of sasuke being dead. and if rin survives the trip to konoha, won't he be able to fix all those threads he put there before? i certainly hope so, for naruto's sake. i can only hope that if he wakes when tsunade and the hyuuga come to try to fix him, that he'll let them explain instead of being an angst puppy and going all demonic on them.

i can't wait for the next chapter and all the excitement. if there's a sasuke pov, sai better not start any shit. sasuke doesn't need that right now, what with being a missing nin and having a hanyou as a lover. XD
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From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2007
GODS! Why do you always have to end a chapter at the most unexpected point? I am unable to review, because I'm so shocked... poor Naru-chan... *cries* I really hope, someone will find him an explain! *cries some more*
till next chapter!
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From Allys on July 31, 2007

Oh my God you Meanie ;_;. I'm dying here!! :Glomps you and BAWLS while huggling: When you do things like this you have to post the next chapter right away ;_;!!! It's okay, i know it's okay, because he'll go in and snuggle Kyuubi for a while and they'll give Sasuke back his eyes so he can take Neji in there and FIX THIS!!!!!!! Oh God!! You've turned me into a needy little prat! LOL, I need reassurance!! Oh God!! You're just trying to get me to draw aren't you ;| !!! :Bawls some more: Okay, I'm over the melodrama (no, I'm not really but it's still okay). I'm really happy that everybody is alright, and I'm so glad you have NO idea that the boys have a chance of being back to normal. :Crosses fingers: in hopes that when they get Naruto untangled he'll go back to being himself. It was almost funny seeing him chase his tails though, if I didn't want cry at the same time. It was funny when he pulled the one though :). For all of about a minute. I kept trying to get him to leave the mirror alone cause I knew he would freak out if he looked at his eyes too closely, God I hate being right. That was heartbreaking, the only saving grace is that I know he's not dead, but DAMMIT still can't get into the computer, so I stopped myself from bawling "NO, He's NOT Dead!!" at the stupid screen, aren't you proud of me, LOL, I'm proud of me. I usually do it anyway. I was kind of scared that he would hurt himself or damage the eyes but then I remembered that Sasuke didn't and that Naruto wouldn't, especially if that's all he had left of him. :_; Okay I'm good now. Thank you so much for the update :Huggles you some more while wheedling and BEGGING for the next one to come faster!: Please PLEASE!!! I'm gonna go work on a bribe!! But LOL, with the rate I draw next Tuesday might get here first O.o Oh well at least it'll distract me ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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From Dragon7 on July 31, 2007
Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!:) I can�t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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From marquesgue1 on July 31, 2007
Oh man :s Naruto... I just wanted to hug him and tell him that Sasuke was okay, on top of everything else, it's just sad :s I have to say though - the bit with the tails lol where he tired to catch them - that made me grin lool - but other than that you were right to warn about the angst *sigh* at least I guess its a good thing that they're all back in the village safe and sound - although for Naruto it might not be so great stupid f****** Council. Well thanks for another great chapter ^_^ can't wait for next Tuesday loooool ^_6

Hina xXxx
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From Adi on July 31, 2007
eheh I was reading the first scene again I burst out laughing all over again about Gai and his comments about Kyuubi *sigh* I love Gai, I love Kyuubi, I miss my OTP -_- XD I love the way your wrote Tsunade, all concerned mother figure while giving everyone orders, you did well with her chica! I�m still waiting on Neji�s hardon, if it doesn�t happen, it will have in my head XD

Oh oh oh! Naruto is back, I so miss him half the time he�s not in the scenes XD heh comforting Kyuubi, you�re never gonna get me to shut up about my OTP you know? :P
AH!! He woke up :( with claws and sharingan and ah :( bah! you call me a meanie! OMG I don�t want to read this anymore, you had to put a mirror there didn�t you? *whimpers* you made the poor thing chase his tails

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HOW COULD YOU DO THAT! *bawls* XD
aw, Zrina, seriously, my heart is clenching at this, I know you�re gonna fix him, but ah, the fact he has to go through all this and Shino didn�t exactly make it all better either *sulks* give him Sasuke so that they can be together and be mushy, gah what have you done to me woman?! �angst for the sake of plot� PSSH! PFFT! BAAAHHH!!!!

. They would chain him down like a dog in a kennel and he would never see the proverbial light of day. I will never forgive you! BELIEVE IT. *hugs Naruto and half dead Sasuke* -__________________________________- I even knew this was coming, I was prepared you know? *drags them away* XD

Ok that was my orginal review, now I�m just gonna whimper at you, and yell and scream and bash my fists, that was cruel, you shouldn�t have listened to me! you should have know better Zrina! WAH!!! :( Kyuubi despairing, Naruto despairing, you love the angst deep down, it was a really emotional scene to read, and Naruto got all violent and upset, it was realistic and touching, but at the same I didn�t want to hug him because I didn�t want to get ripped to pieces. Heh him getting cut with the shards, and then healing, for all our talks of sporks, that part was seriously heart wrenching

Adi XX

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From ForgottenPrincess on July 28, 2007
Chapter 64?:
Yes, wonderful. I love it. Naruto got tails, cute! He also got a muzzle...i wonder how he will be able to work it. He still has some of those strings on him right? The ones that connected him to Kyuubi? Poor Fox, i feel so sorry for him when he is back in the cadge crying. He really did like that Snake bastard. KYUUBI COULD DO BETTER! But now i guess he has the Mangekyou Sharingan. Sasuke is going to get his eyes back yes? But will the old man Ren be able to undo what he did? AH! And there are no more chapters for me to read!!! So i can't find out yet!!! DAMN~
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From ForgottenPrincess on July 28, 2007
Chapter 63:
Ah. Sooo goood! So Sasuke is ready, i guess he could not be "the avenger" when he was trying to act so much like his brother. Either way it was cute that Itachi saved him. Got to feel sorry for Kyuubi, he actually liked Orochimaru, weird but not unexpected. Then the fox ripped his soul in half, nice. Demon Fox Sharingan Wielding Naruto really does look scary. I am so happy there is another chapter for me to read after this.

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From ANON - fangirl on July 27, 2007
So, I was re-reading this last chapter and I admit to being a little slow on the uptake, but the physical fox changes to Naruto's appearance aren't permanant are they? I mean the fangs and claws and pointed ears I can sorta see cause when he really pulled on the fox's chakra, those changes did manifest...but the tails seems overboard, cause they were never more than chakra tails from what I could tell from the Anime/Manga and your story. The idea of Naruto walking around with tails is kinda right there with MPreg...it has it's place in some stories, but just doesn't seem to fit here, in my oh so humble opinion. And it doesn't seem like a very nice thing to do to Naruto.
Then again, in 64 chapters of story, that you should probably be getting paid for, cause you are one awesome writer...that is literally the only thing that I'm not all about. So, as always, looking forward to your future updates!
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From ANON - Xpyne on July 27, 2007
Ok! i sent you an email, with subject: "fanart". :d yay for another great chapter!!! i am looking forward to hearing about this scene from chapter 66. ♥ aaahh, but poor naruto!!! does he, uh, have a "snout" now?? ;A; at least he's alive and in control, haha. hmm, and i cant imagine it would be very good on one's optic nerves to get a second eyeball transfer surgery any time soon, but Sasuke without the sharingan is so sad, and naruto with permanently spinning red eyes is creepy. ::worryworry:: i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! =D
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From Raina on July 26, 2007
Ok so I meant to post this on Tuesday, but I got side tracked.

I found this... well I guess I should say I decided to take a looksie at this story after passing it every once and a while. I kept skipping it because it was long and I have severe attention deficit issues. So I promised myself if I wasn't interested after the first chapter, well, I tried and I would let it go. Needless to say, that did not happen. I was completely and utterly enthralled by this!! Every chapter I read I was wide eyed and had a racing heart. Your ability to draw in a reader and keep them is truly admirable. Your story telling skills are superb! I mean, how do you do it?! Your story is more interesting to me than the manga is right now(sheesh don't get me started on that) Everything I was supposed to do went out the window because I had to read what happened next. I even printed up some chapters to read in between my break between my two jobs, which is precious time (See on the weekend I work two different jobs back to back and I have very little time in between which I usually reserve for a quick sandwich or downing a Redbull) but I just could not put it down.

I'm usually not one for OCs but I love Hiroki! He is so adorable! I liked when Sasuke woke up and Hiroki was on the other side of Naruto's chest. It was so...awww! And him doing the good guy thumbs up? Aw, so cute!

I also like how you interweave the characters and their lives and how everything connects in some way.

Your Sai: Priceless.

Oh man and that flicker chapter?! I loved it! It was like watching a horror movie! So vividly described, I could just see it before my eyes! Awesome dude, awesome!

The Uchiha fight was wonderful! Looks like Naruto rubbed off on Sasuke in more way than one.*snickers at horribly lame innuendo* I loved how he kept getting up and pissing Itachi off in the process. How he was also able to get through to Itachi enough to stop him in his tracks and even have Itachi save him from the explosion.

GAH! So much, that I liked!

I finally finished reading your fic at 5 am Tuesday morning and it was a bittersweet experience. Sweet because I finally caught up and bitter because, well, I finally caught up. But then when I came back to the site a little later I saw a new chapter and I did my patented update dance. When Ren clutched his chest and fell I was like O.O! &*$#!!! I forgot he was connected to Orochimaru! So then I was torn for the rest of the chapter because I was hoping there was a way that Orochimaru wasn't dead so that Ren would survive, but I really really REALLY wanted Orochimaru dead!

Now that I am caught up I have to be a good girl and patiently wait for updates (damn!) but I guess that�s kind of a good thing though because I can finally do the things I was supposed to be doing before I read your story.

Sorry if my gushing is off putting, I don�t mean to freak you out. I am usually not so... *sigh* *starry eyed* uh... yeah� usually not so that. But you are one of the best authors I�ve read in a long time and I just thought you should know that. Sorry� *goes back to shadows*

-Rai

Oh, I like your other stories too, but I will review them in their designated� uh� review�area� (O.o;) Um� *retreats back into the shadows*

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From ANON - Myra on July 26, 2007
Ah! Oh no! Hiroki! Please be okay!
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