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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From MsTrick on August 07, 2007
YAY! I'm so happy! Sasuke and Naruto are okay (despite unexpected convulsions) and Sakura is herself: a flawed human being with a lot of good traits. I hate when she's a total bitch. Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - bluesake on August 07, 2007
...that is so not a good sign...please dont kill sasuke. >
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From ANON - Annonymous on August 07, 2007
Please please pleeeeeeaaaaassssseee be quick with an update! I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next! This is one of the fanfics on this site I religiously follow it's so good! I think you're a really talented author and I can't wait to see more of your work!
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From roro237 on August 07, 2007
ZRINA!! This is one(1)of your greatest chapters yet:) I flew (ok drove) home from work to read this weeks chapter. I was having with draws,because Naruto and Sasuke not being together for so long. And Naruto thinking Sasuke was dead. So I could wait to see this chapter. It was so wonderful how Naruto smelled Sasuke and was up and over to him in a blink. I needed that fix:) And the cliffhanger you left us with,(heart beating out of conrol) well I'll be flying home again:)
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From BishounenKrazed on August 07, 2007
my opening thought (after reading the AN): there better be a ring. after all they've been through, there better be a ring.

my closing thought: oh crap.

i think those say more towards your writing than anything else. the first shows how enthralled i am by the whole thing, how much i am pulled into the story and how emotional it can make me. the second shows that i am so wondering what the hell's going on that all i can do is wait impatiently until next week's update.

anyway, this was wonderful to read after a long day at work. the scene where naruto woke and jumped sasuke... one of my very favorites of all time. it was a perfect reunion, i swear. i look forward to that promised smut, now, but i think even more so to the conclusion of the recent drama, aka "what the hell is happening with sasuke?" ^__^
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From bluegenjutsu on August 07, 2007
That was a wonderful reunion between Naruto and Sasuke!! So loving! But you ended it with Sasuke in trouble! I sure hope he is going to be okay!
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From roely on August 07, 2007
oh, my god ! NO! come on! you got them together to let him die now! I'm going to cry now! (sobs)
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From Allys on August 07, 2007
ZRINA!!! WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! What do you mean convulsing!! Don't do that shit to me... Dammit!!! Grrrr..... Uuuhhuu... breathing breathing... Most evilest cliffie. Dammit. Thank God Naruto is out. Uuugghh I can't believe that a minute ago my biggest trauma was being skeeved out by eyeballs and wondering if Naruto would fuck Sasuke with the tails XD. Who would have guessed you were a closet sadist XD. LOL, oh God. Well that was definitely an interesting chapter. Naruto all over Sasuke with the tails and all nekkid in front of Sakura and Tsunade O.O, damn little exhibitionist, LOL, Mark your territory boy XD. Heh, beat that Pinky. And LMAO you just couldn't resist could you? "Sakura wondered faintly if she had perhaps been chasing the wrong teammate." LOL Smexcellent! And oh God what a display XD. :rubs hands together evilly: I love how Naruto just flew up, didn't miss a beat did he? Fantastic, and Oh sooo yummy. God LOL, So Hott XD. Thank you so much for the update!! And 70 chapters :FOX GRINS: I hope so XD ♥♥♥
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From marquesgue1 on August 07, 2007
"Sakura wondered faintly if she had perhaps been chasing the wrong teammate."

*smirk* heh - well too late now lool but I liked the way Sakura realised things on her own, gracious lossing is something to admire I think and she did just that ^_^ but uhhh... the part where the convulsing started left me panicked... and we're only going to see it next week :( oh god - but I love the way Naruto scented Sasuke and then just came back and the kissing and everything loool LOVED IT!!! It was another great chapter as always and now I'm going to anxiously await next week - not just to find out what was happening at the end there to Sasuke but because I also want to read the smut as all yaoi perverts fo and perhaps there'll be a nother hint as to their position now in the village - that's what's worrying me the most - what that damn concil's going to do. They better not hurt the boys *glares* but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it i suppose. Anyway, thanks for the update.

Ja ne!

Hina xXxx
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From Arcueido on August 07, 2007
A cliffhanger??? Nooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll knock myself out cold while you update so that when I wake up the chapter will be done. See ya then.
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From Adi on August 07, 2007
BAH! Didn�t get first review, *sulks* so you get no review! Aha! XD yeah anyway�. :D The first scene is so funny, you had Tsunade thinking such dramatic thoughts *snickers* I wanna see Sasuke lying there like that, face all inked in :D You know, if you uh, kinda killed Kishi, and um replaced him without anyone knowing, SoD COULD COME TO LIFE. O_O! Think about it�. I always love how you write Tsunade, her and Kakashi you do really well, in their different ways, but we�re not gonna talk about Kakashi because you might kill me with a spork.

And yes Sakura, you got it wrong, again you had two good men after you, like the sweetest most nicest guys (except when Naruto farts) and ya had to go and ruin it. WELL SERVES YOU RIGHT.

With Naruto thinking of Sasuke and him angsting Naruto style was way more heart breaking and optimistic at the same time than Sasuke could be, it�s why we love Naruto, he puts the angsting queen to shame XD I like how both sasu and naru have Itachi on the brain, the man leaves one heck of an impact.

And now, for my fangirl squealing, I advise you to ignore the rest of the review because I�m quite ashamed of my fangirl self and think she should go rot in a hole somewhere

SIDGJDA;LKFJG;LKFGJKLSDGJKLFGJKL I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THAT KISS SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was so hot and sexy and sweet and passionate and gah, all the things true love is made of, but still fucking hot at the same time!!! That kiss was as good a full out smut scene for me, I loved it to pieces, before I fell asleep on the sofa I had read it like 5 times and probably fell asleep with happy kisses floating my brain and drool slipping out of my mouth. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. It so RAWR, and the ass groping :D:D:D:D and Naruto being unaffected being nude with his half erection *whimpers* smexy Naruto. And the rough tongue! *melts into the floor* ooooooh shivers for the rough tongue. It wasn�t overly sappy and sentimental, just the right amount to let loose my inner fangirl trying to glomp you XD The second kiss was *dreamy sigh*

ok fangirling done, *cough* I think� XD I managed to spot the Sasuke C2 insert! YAY! go me! :D *does her happy dance* and I�ve already said what I thought of Sakura and her can�t see true love right in her stupid face ways. *snickers* They�ll love the cliff hanger, am looking forward to the next chapter, more so than usual :D:D:D:D

Manic review over. XD

Adi XX

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From Dragon7 on August 07, 2007
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I can�t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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From Kimra on August 07, 2007
I'm sorry... did you just put in a cliffhanger? Did Sasuke just start convulsing? I might take back all those nice things I keep saying about you.... nah. I'll only do that if you don't make things better next week... since your kind of promising smut next week one has to assume he makes it in one form or another.

Love ya work!
Kimra
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From ANON - fujinakaheero on August 07, 2007
oh mi gawd (..sorry)
Missed your last update due to the fact that I haven't been on a computer with a working internet much in these past few weeks. But jeez, so glad I saw this update this morning so I could read the last few chapters. I'm so excited to see how you're going to end this and at the same time I'm quite sad to see this story almost coming to an end. This story is awesome either way.. I've probably said this in comments I've posted before but I must say it again. This is always the first story I'm looking for when I come on here. :D
Anyways, I look forward to your next update next week... and by then I shall be back at home with my nice high speed internet that works with my laptop. :D:D:D:D:D
Until next time,
Ja ne!
Fujinakaheero
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From ANON - DevilLived on August 07, 2007
I loved Naruto and Sasuke's reunion. It was so sweet (and hot too). It was cool how Sakura accepted them, even though she was jealous. But maybe she'll get back together with Lee again.

Beautiful writing, it flows very nicely. But now I want to know what's wrong with Sasuke! Could it be his eyes???

Can't wait for the next update (and the smut!! :D) Keep up the awesome work!
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