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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From Adi on August 21, 2007
    Damn Zrina you really are out to keep it less than 70 aren’t you? -__- almost 5000 words O_O!!!!

    the fluff, omg the fluff, its so cute, Naruto crawling into Sasuke’s lap, omg, the adorableness will kill me, so damn sweet. Sasuke wanting to leave and take Hiroki and make them a little family, even though he’s such an ass half the time, there are times like this, that I completely and utterly forgive him and love him as much as Naruto, and then I remember that you don’t write the anime, and I die a little inside. XD

    Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice kissing, I’m such a sucker for it, and the whole dodging the fangs thing XD *snickers* THERE IS ALWAYS TIME FOR A QUICKY NARUTO you should learn not to ask, and just ram into the bastard *nods wisely*

    erm ok, I’m just as surprised as Naruto with the smex, you just brought that one out on me!!!!!!!!!! now shush, its zrina-smut time :D:D:D holy fucking cow. Naruto fucking Sasuke’s mouth, and Sasuke encouraging it… holy mother of god. Fuck fuck fuck fuck. And the necklace detail. God. OH MY FUCKING GOD.

    A CUM SHOT. A CUM SHOT ON SASUKE’S FACE. Are you trying to kill me woman? YOU WROTE ANOTHER FREAKING CUM SHOT ON SASUKE’S FACE. damn. god. wow. I cannot express how unbelievably hot I find that image.

    lol and Sasuke wanting a BJ with the rough tongue, the dirty boy!! WAH I LOVE YOU HARDCORE! yes, I realise you’ve been quickly backing away from the computer and looking for escape routes *clings* but surprise!smex is the BEST THING EVER.

    I’m never gonna get tired of reading about Sasuke doing Naruto’s hair scenes, there’s something therapeutic about reading them, as if all is right with the world XD

    Naruto’s punishment is so harsh -__- he’s gonna have a baby about it, *nudges you* have I told you how much I would love it if you wrote MPreg? *snickers* ok I’ll stop giving the other fangirls ideas XD

    You know, I knew it was coming, how many times have you told me about what’s gonna happen? And I was like “yeah that sounds fair enough, sounds believable” and yet, THE CLIFFHANGER STILL GOT ME. wth?! how how how is that possible?! HOW?! now imagine how the other fangirls feel, they never even got any warnings, you are a cruel woman Zrina XD!!!

    I can’t scream at you because it’s for the sake of plot, and because my brain is telling me that I already knew, so why is it such a shock to my system when you wrote it? -___-

    WONDERFUL chapter (as I have come to expect from you *snickers*) you knock the fangirls dead *nods*
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  • From kagomegirl on August 20, 2007
    OMG this is such a good fic i was hoping it was finished but its not and i really wanna find out what happens next!!! Please update again soon!!! i want naruto and sasuke to live a happy life together with their new son!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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  • From MsTrick on August 19, 2007
    I just realised, I absolutely forgot to review this chapter and I figured I would take this opportunity to send more love your way. LOVE!
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  • From LadyLaran on August 19, 2007
    I ran into this not too long ago and when I got to the last chapter, I nearly wept. How could you leave it like this? I want to know what will happen to Naruto, Sasuke, and their little one. Honestly, I know little about Naruto and started reading the section not too long ago. If you have an update list, please add me!
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  • From manicandyshumway on August 18, 2007
    Smexy smut! Yay! ¢¾ Neji was a nice touch. *waits patiently to see what will happen to our two loverboys*
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  • From ANON - Glorial on August 18, 2007
    Finally, I got to read the last two chapters!

    I'm so glad they got their eyes back; now if only you got Naruto back to his normal, beautiful self. While his new form is creative and all I still love his old, uncomplicated one.

    I was waiting for that little reunion where Naruto would see that Sasuke is alive and would all but jump him and you didn't disappoint me at all. I loved it.

    Smut was hot as always and even if I can't get used to the whole fur thing, the scene where Sasuke tugged Naruto's butt in the air by his tails was too hot and funny for words. I reaaally hope this isn't the last one.

    Can't wait for the update!

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  • From ANON - kms on August 16, 2007
    This was a great chapter! I hate the stupid council; I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what they want to do to Sasuke and Naruto. I liked the way Sasuke and Naruto circled each other when they met again, it seemed like something they would really do. I'm glad Sasuke was top this time, I think Naruto needed that...I hope the next chapter comes out soon!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 15, 2007
    You're welcome, Zrina!! :) I loved the lemon and what came after!! Poor Neiji saw more than he was expecting, huh? XD I can't wait to find out what the council and Tsunade agreed on concerning Sasuke and Naruto and I hope that Naruto can be fixed soon!
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  • From crazychemgeek on August 15, 2007
    Hooray - another chapter *dances around the bedroom*. Poor Naruto and Sasuke, seems like they just can't get a break with horrible Orochimaru experimenting on Naruto, and now the awful Council. Damn those evil spies!!!! As always I'm looking forward to your next update (and loved this one).
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  • From Kimra on August 14, 2007
    I know your going to make this a neat (ish) ending, and I know that it's still got a while to go. So I wait hopefully and longingly till the end. :D
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  • From nawatia on August 14, 2007
    Fabulous chapter!!! Please don't let Naruto be stuck with the fox features! While it may be kinda hot right now, the poor fella needs to overcome the demon, or blend in a nicer way. The poor demon fox is suffering too...is there a way for it to be more at peace?
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 14, 2007
    LOL, Neji seeing everything when he only wanted to check on Naruto was hilarious. Sai didn't even warn him that, that was going on. I almost believed that Sasuke had killed Naruto while he was dreaming. Hopefully Ren will wake up and can fix Naruto; even though I think they're getting use to his new form. I wonder how the council new about EVERYTHING. "There is a spy among us." I have no idea what movie that is from. So this story isn't making it to 70 is it? *wiggles eyebrows* Well if you have really long chapters I think you shall stick to what you said. Oh yeah and it was really nice of everyone to lool out for the boys while they had time together.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From roro237 on August 14, 2007
    MMM that was good with the fuzzy guy:)
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  • From ANON - fangirl on August 14, 2007
    The transition from the last chapter to this one felt a little choppy, and seeing as I haven't noticed a single loose end in your story that you don't seem to be right on top of, I can't wait to see if there's going to be some interesting repercussions with both Sasuke's new Mangekyou and the dream he had at the beginning of the chapter. Everything is so well developed in your stories and so interesting, I hope to see you published one day if you're not already...you are so talented.
    The scene with Sasuke and Naruto circling each other felt like a Tango...I could almost hear the beat as I was reading it. It was pretty powerful and playful at the same time. Poor Naruto feeling a little anxious. I hope that's not your last lemon of the story...they're too hot for that to be the last. Yes, I'm greedy, I know.
    Looking forward to next Tuesday!
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  • From Wedo2hvhrts on August 14, 2007
    WOW! Awesome as always! I really like it!!!
    Also I have another picture in mind for you . . . I'll probably e-mail it later today if I can finish the lines.
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