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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - hina88 on August 28, 2007
Aww I loved this chapter!!! Loved it - loads of hearts for you ^_^ and go Hinata-chan ^_6 - when Hiroki cried out 'Mommy' before launching himself at Naruto I snickered loool that's Sai's work right there heh. And Sasuke bless - I love when Sasuke has his sweet moments, they're so rare so when they come round it makes them that much better - the marriage thing *melts into a puddle* really great chapter as always - can't wait for next Tuesday ^_6!!!

Hina xXxx

p.s. well done Sasuke for finding every damn possible loophole in the Council's sentence
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From bluegenjutsu on August 28, 2007
Wonderful chapter!! I'm glad Naruto has his own face back again! It was sweet how Hiroki and Sasuke got to be with Naruto when he was being worked on and how Sasuke was able to help fix him faster. It was also sweet how Hiroki and Sasuke both got to stay the night in Naruto's room. I just love the family of Naruto, Sasuke and Hiroki! I'm glad that Sasuke found loopholes in the punishment for him and that he shouldn't have to actually have sex to have children. Having a surrogate mother (or even more than one of them) would revive the clan and allow Naruto and Sasuke to still be together as a couple. :)
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From ANON - DevilLived on August 28, 2007
Awww, this chapter was the sweetest yet. I just love how Hiroki fits into Naruto and Sasuke's little family. He's so cute.

Can't wait till the next chapter- though I still can't believe that you're almost done! Wow...

Wonderful work!
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From ANON - jewel on August 28, 2007
so sweet and fluffy at the end. I loved it.
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From Kimra on August 28, 2007
Chapter 69 and no smut?

Nah that wasn't really what I was thinking, it just occured to me randomly there and I felt the need to write it in. :D

I love their little dysfunctional family. It's so cute. You actually managed, despite the odds, to introduce a child character and have me like it! I'm in awe. That kind of skill is nearly impossible to find or achieve.

Anyway. Readinging and waiting as always. :D
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From ANON - littleolmee on August 28, 2007
Ah so wonderful. I was glad to see Tsunade allow Sasuke to help, a little disturbed at the thought that went through my mind on where that thread he first started pulling on was located at though; especially for Hinate to blush about it but, then again she blushes when recognized for something she does. Of course Sasuke would be wondering if the Naruto's tongue was fixed; heck he hadn't gotten to try it out yet better be getting it while the getting is good. Naruto makes such a good mommy! Good for Sasuke, it seems some of what Kakashi taught him about how to do things sunk in; see what is underneath. I just wonder what the elders would say if they saw Naruto in his current state and what they would think about Sasuke, Naruto, and Hiroki living together as a family; especially with the boy calling Naruto mommy? Is there going to be problems with Hiroki staying with them? How will he be accepted? I know it's getting close to the end, I'm going to miss this story so much. Guess that means you'll just have to write another one right? Cause you know after such a great story as this no one is going to leave you alone! *pokes Zrina* "Hey Zrina, Zrina, Zrina-san, ZZZrina-san. . . Hello!" Yes that will be me! Lol! Take care and thanks for the update.
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From ANON - rei-dono on August 28, 2007
I really love your story! all the trials and struggles they're handling fairly well... you gonna do like others and have naru-nii-chan 'mother' the Uchiha heir? can you picture everyone dealing with him staying in the sexy-jutsu long enough to get pregnant and carry to term??
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From ANON - kynight on August 27, 2007
whoa, that last one got me! Married! Kids! could it be, Mpreg? mmm......... what are you planning? interesting, I will keep reading....... good story and very well written.
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From ANON - T on August 26, 2007
I truly have no words to even begin to describe what a wonderful and gripping fanfic you have written. I really don't! lol

Um...a little silly but...Oiroke no jutsu? lol
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From ANON - DevilLived on August 26, 2007
Oh no!! At first I was thinking that their punishments weren't that bad, but then it just got worse. What are Naruto and Sasuke going to do about the heir?!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonderful job!
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From Gwyllion on August 24, 2007
OH GOD...WHAT ANOTHER EXCELLENT READ!!! But the last part gave me the "oh crap!" face. Awww....I hope they can find a way to fix the 'revive the uchiha clan' problem. Naruto must be preggers!! Yes! I can't wait to read your next post. Thank you so much for sharing! :D
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From ANON - xpyne on August 24, 2007
::starts laughing really hard:: okay, not that i'd expect you to--or want you to, ew--because mpreg is retarded and absolutely ridiculous, but i just thought i'd point out that you have a once-in-a-lifetime Golden Moment here: to actually put mpreg into the realm of respectable fiction. ::gasp:: as in, you could knock naruto up, and there would be nothing bad i could say about it, since your story is so tightly told and seriously executed as a work of literature, i could only assume that you would make the mpreg work, too. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAH
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From ANON - xpyne on August 24, 2007
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::gapes some more:: AArgh!!! omigosh, just when i think the gut twists are over, you twist my guts some more!!!! and i'm working on the picture for you!!! hopefully it will be done soooon. it's a race against time!!! the story is almost finished, isnt it? ::big tears:: i think the picture is turning out nicely so far... i am still rather stumped by the snout thingy, haha. but my Rock-Lee-like love for this fic will allow me to endure!
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From ForgottenPrincess on August 24, 2007
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I think sound is looking mighty nice right about now. It's the last stipulation that is the kicker. It's crap. Unless i see mpreg in the future.... Please god say sakura doesn't give birth to the next Uchiha...even if it is through artificial insemination. Anyone but Sakura. Best thing. they run off together and be happy. yes yes. its good that way. so naruto is screwed for a year. Sasuke for life as long as he stays there. I can't believe that Sasuke has to pay for Itachi's evilness. They don't even want him to have bastard children..no they have to be married. in the words of my adorable nephew "yuck-tooo" Sasuke can't marry some random girl!!! He can only marry naruto! Not even a marriage of convenience is good. AH! What are you going to do???

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From ANON - shadows on August 23, 2007
Wow, I'm not sure where to begin. I first started reading this ages ago, back when there were only about 30 chapters to it, and eventually checking for updates slipped my mind as is prone to happening as my bookmark list expands. I randomly wandered by only a few days ago to find that the story had doubled in length and happily dove in! A few nights of forfeiting sleep and staying up until well past 5am to read, and here I am, all caught up.

The plot has been interesting all along, and I've enjoyed the characterization a lot, although I always did prefer Sasuke cold and in denial, and Naruto chasing after him and trying to convince him of his own beliefs. Although I can't stand the canon Sai, I absolutely love your Sai and his interactions with everyone. He is, without a doubt, the funniest character in the story (and it helps that in this story he doesn't pose any real threat as Sasuke's replacement and all). It just feels like he's advanced a bit beyond where he's at in canon, which is a good thing, and I'd like to see that sort of progression with him.

Oh wow, I was originally going to say that the saddest and most alarming part of the story was back when Sasuke first realized that he had Naruto's eyes, that he had lost the two most important parts of himself - his eyes and Naruto - and was left with a constant reminder of what he had lost. But then Tsunade had to throw all these punishments onto him. I mean, I suppose it's workable; he could, erm, create an heir and then run back to Naruto and there's not a whole lot anyone could do to stop him. But I can't imagine either of them would settle for that, so I suspect they'll be running off or somehow proving themselves to the council instead. Or maybe both.

I'm not sure how to feel about furry!Naruto though, that's a bit disconcerting. I do hope they get him all fixed up in the end. And I think I'd be very sad if Sasuke lost his curse seal; somewhere along the line it's become a part of him.

I can't wait to see how everything turns out!
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