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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - sailoir12 on August 29, 2007
    *yawn*i m o irn*yawn* o my god i stayed up all night reading this i started reading this at 10;00pm and stoped at 4;00 i had to keep drinking coffee all night to stayay up so i had to keep stoping every now and then to make coffee and i ad to be at work at 7;00am this mornin i so almost died buuuuuuut it was so worth it to read this fic yes i read it all the way through now i will go die keep up the wonderful writing *falls over and starts twitching* =)
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  • From Gwyllion on August 28, 2007
    Oh my lordy.....I was cooing and squeeing over Naruto playfulness with lil Hiroki! That was the cutest part I have ever read. Naruto would def make a good father figure. I also hope that Sasuke will find a way to revive his clan without causing further problems with his beloved. So far, I'm enjoying this fic immensely! Tahnk yous o much for sharing! :D
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  • From roro237 on August 28, 2007
    (with a very warm smile) Zrina...I absolutely loved it:) I was wondering all week(Tue to Tue) how the boys could stay together. And BAMB! (Loopholes) I didn't take that into account. Ok! I think it's time for me to sing "Zrina number #1 Zrina number #1" I'm singing that while spenting around in my compute chair:)
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  • From ANON - Avonne on August 28, 2007
    Awwww, that part with Hiroki, Sasuke, and Naruto was just too perfect! It was so good to see the little family back together again, however dysfunctional they may be. :D

    Also, I really loved the Sasuke admitting that he's gonna ask Naruto to marry him, that scene in my head just played out so well and in-character. Man, do I love this story!! :D

    I know you said that you've given up on guesstimating the ending (hehehe, you've been doing that for about 20 chapters now!!), but is there going to be an epilogue to this? Also, is Blackmail and Betrayal going to be your only writing project after this, or do you have any more Naruto/Sasuke fanfiction ideas swimming around? You're justsuch a great and reliable author that I'd hate to see you go away!! *chains you to her wrist*
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  • From nawatia on August 28, 2007
    Yay! Fabulous chapter!!! Smooth writing, easy to read. Hiroki is such a sweet little character!
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  • From anapana83 on August 28, 2007
    This was a great chap. The one thin gi love most was your use of Chichi. That's actually what my family calls my dad. Anyway nice to see that Sasuke and Naruto have a plan. I think they'll make a great family.
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  • From kagomegirl on August 28, 2007
    awwwwww so kawaii!! hmm you know i think hinata or sakura would be more than willing to carry the kids lol. maybe both can be pregnant together ^__^ hinata pregnant with naruto's kid and sakura with sasuke's kid hahaha that would be hilarious!! update again soon!!
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  • From Allys on August 28, 2007

    *Screams at Sasuke* "Take the chance Sugar!!! Nothing really good is ever without risk." *Glomps Zrina* Family XD. I love that you used my argument!! *Huggles u* We think alike ne? Great minds and all that good shit. I love this chapter XD. It's was sweet and funny in a way this story hasn't been in a while. Not that exciting and heart wrenching wasn't amazing! But LOL, sweet, funny and just good are most definitely welcome. Hiroki was a love in this, he was behaving like a child. A really sweet small child, instead of a mini adult. It was good :), teary type good where you're just so thankful for small mercies, like a child being able to be a child. And Naruto's well on his way to normal again. Thank you! Lots to give thanks for here. God I need to go!!, I'm so late for work I'll be there until 8 pm tonight, but it's okay. This was worth it. *loves you* There's a lot more I want to say but I have to run. Thank you again ♥
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2007
    OK! So Sasuke wants to make this work? I somehow can not believe, the council will be happy about Sasuke and Naruto marrying... And what about the kid? will it be Sasukes AND Narutos? Because you write midwife...
    Argh! I would have been better, if Sasue and Naruto would run away from Konohe to start a new life... Maybe in a sequel? *grin-of-hell(C)*
    See you around!
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  • From ANON - animehead on August 28, 2007
    this is why you are my role model!!!!!!!

    i loved this chapter so much! it made my heart swell. they're going to get married...eventually. lol it's so great. oh and this


    “Hey!” he suddenly chirped up. “What if I want to ask you to marry me instead? After all, I’m the ma-”

    “If you finish that sentence, you won’t be able to make the claim for long,” Sasuke suddenly snarled.


    pawns ALL! god i love the way you write these two. the whole fic has made me love it and it would make an awesome book. and i am proud to admit that i snickered when i read Chapter "69". lol

    i so don't know what i want to say. i loved how protective they are over their newly built family. it's so sweet. i'm in fangirl heaven right now. *loves on you forever*
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  • From MsTrick on August 28, 2007
    YAY! Best chapter EVER! I think my favourite line was "Promising himself to teach the little boy about dignity very soon, Sasuke reached down and lifted the tyke up to settle him on his hip." I definitely laughed out loud at that.

    This is also one of the only stories I've read where Shino is a 3-D person. He's a hard character to write sometimes but you pull it off really well. Awesome job!
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  • From Beachan18 on August 28, 2007
    =D

    I am so much happier right now than last time, with that cliffhanger. xD Yay~! Naruto and Sasuke are gonna stay together~! And have a family aww~! NO OTHER WOMAN IS GONNA INTERFERE. NARUTO AND SASUKE MUST GET MARRIED DAMNIT.

    Stupid Tsunade. I understand where she's coming from, but like Sasuke said, she's being a hypocrite.

    ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter~! w00t~!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on August 28, 2007
    omg, yes. when you had sasuke retort about tsunade and jiraiya not being in the village for whatever amount of years, i had a frickin' party in my head. finally. someone threw that in her face. seriously.

    and how sweet that sasuke wants to marry naruto!!! XD i am so excited about this!! wonderful chapter, especially with hiroki and them being a family, and sasuke's reaction to that realization... masterful! i can't wait for the next chapter, love!!!!!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on August 28, 2007
    I can already see Sasuke giving feedback on why girls suggested as wives are out of the question. Too soft, not motherly, to stupid, not Shinobi, Kuniochi ect. FUN!!
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  • From Adi on August 28, 2007
    Chapter 69! lol where beta said you should end *snickers*

    This chapter left me so happy, it had WAFF! *smexes you* Ah! you hold the keys to my heart! *goes into romeo mode*

    I still love your Tsunade, I would so do her XD shes smexy when shes angry, and even smexier when making sharp comments at Sasuke :D I was just rereading what Sasuke said to her about her absence, I was still half expecting a full out Sannin Vs Pretty boy fight XD

    OK HIROKI!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! LITTLE BUNDLE OF FREAKING CUTENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so adorable, I can't believe I went nuts over a little kid and his cuteness. How he is with Sasuke and then with Naruto and then with Sasuke again, giving him a kiss on the cheek before bed *wibbles*

    lol oh and the whole "flirting" thing, the talk about Naruto's face *dies* your humor is love, and should be smexed :D

    How Sasuke managed to start untangling Naruto's and the demons chakra threads is so damn cool O_O I was reading it, and the pages just flew by, and then when I'd finished it didn't even occur to me there wasn't even any yaoi! XD though the kiss was nice :D:D:D

    I'm gonna go back to loving you for creating Hiroki, such cuteness, O_O what have you done to me? *shakes head* must concentrate on hardcore yaoi! BUT HIROKI IS SO CUTE, especially with Naruto and with Sasuke, ah! they're all so cute together!!!!! *adores*

    I want to see what you do about this marriage thing XD the fangirls are all gonna be in uproar.

    Loved the entire chapter, even the little mention of Shino :D:D:D
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