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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Kirai on December 28, 2006
    Hahaha! That was great you can just count on Naruto to be a mood breaker. Sorry that this is gonna be short, but I have been traveling all day so I'm really worn out and tired. The chapter was great and I loved the part in the shower, only Naruto would be that absent-minded to not feel Sasuke's eyes on him. But he had it coming anyways. Love the chapter and can not wait till you post the next one! -Kirai
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  • From ANON - dragon_agility on December 28, 2006
    Hey! This is the 1st time I've ever reviewed on this website: your fantastic fanfic made me do it! ^__^

    Wow!! I really like what you have going here! The situation is simple yet it's opened so many chances for a great plot and lovely smex between two characters which you've really written well. They're really in character and Naruto makes me laugh!

    Can't wait until Sunday; why didn't I read this sooner?! What has Sasuke done? Well, he's gonna enjoy Naruto, I hope! I get the feeling that Naruto has some experience in the bedroom area, any reiteration of this in later chapters? Like a few sentences? I'm curious XD

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on December 28, 2006
    You know I've been meaning to read this fic for a while but I admit that each time I see it, I decide to read it later, and then when I see it again I decide to read it later, and so on and so forth. However, now that I have read it, at least what you have so far, I must confess that I am very impressed.

    Your use of the language is nothing short of refreshing, reframing from using too many truisms and yet still managing to write in a way so that your readers understand your chapters perfectly. I was very pleasantly surprised at your vocabulary choices as well. I’ve actually had to delve into my own extensive vocabulary in order to remember the meanings of such a scholarly lexis as the one you have employed.

    In regards to your plot line, I enjoyed that very much as well. I have not yet come across such a fic and I am very interested in seeing where your creative license takes this twisting design you have come up with.

    I would also like to comment on the pace of this fic. The chapters aren’t very long, and so neither is the fic, and yet I feel as if this fic is more in-depth (plot-wise and character-wise) than many other fics that I have had the pleasure of reading. It is my impression that the pace of this fic is perfect for your purposes and I advise you to keep it this way. You have a wonderful style and it is my hope that you do not change it, or question yourself either.

    However, it was not my intention to write you a story of your own so I will stop here. My best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - A_Name_You'll_Never_Know on December 28, 2006
    -Jaw drops- How could you end it /there/?! We were finally going to get some Sasuke and Naruto lovin' each other in bed, and you left it off! Well, they were /really/ going to 'love' each other in bed, Sasuke, the stuck-up prick, doesn't 'love' our adorable blond, supposedly, anyway. However, you get what I mean! I will love you forever if you update soon.
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  • From ANON - animehead on December 27, 2006
    Hehe..I loved the last chapter. Hell, I love the whole story. It's great. I can't wait until your next update! You're awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - Avonne on December 27, 2006
    OMG, Chapter 17 is gonna be soooo good!!!! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! :D
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  • From ANON - Allys on December 27, 2006
    LOL!!! The dobe is soo CUTE!!! Drooling on himself and getting all flustered, KAWAII, and the pounce at the end was even better, AH-DOOR-ABLE! And as soon as Sasuke finishes his sail down that river in Egypt, they'll be adorable together :). I can't wait for the nest chappie - Sunday is now officially my new Favourite day!! Hooray for smut!!! Oh and yes, can't forget: special mention to that shower scene = TEN POINTS!!! Strikes the *nice guy pose* That was HOT!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2006
    Oooh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Good job with the pacing, and it's a believable plot. If Sasuke ends up screaming Naruto's name, that's just icing!
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  • From ANON - severedwings on December 27, 2006
    *Grins slyly*...I can see a foxly, sly, grin on his face as he rubs his hands together. LOLOL...nicely done!
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  • From ANON - Kim on December 27, 2006
    I can not wait until the next chapter is up. You are a big old tease for stopping it there! But I am still addicted and still loyal and will still read when you update (please god make it soon).

    This is a short review this time, anticipation has stolen the words from me. But your still a legend!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on December 27, 2006
    Poor poor Sasuke. I have a feeling he's in pretty deep with this one.

    Loved the whole Dobe Box thing. That was funny.

    Great job! Happy New Year to you too! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - wempu on December 27, 2006
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGGGGGGGGGGH!! i hope sunday comes soon or otherwise i'm definitely going to die!! I___LOVE___THIS___STORY!!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on December 27, 2006
    ahahahahaa wheeeee!! ahh the sexual tension just keeps rising and rising, it's so fun to watch, it's almost hard to say which i enjoy better: naruto's antics or sasuke's internal dialogue of denial :p their interaction together is always continuously great, i especially enjoyed naruto's "display" towards sasuke in front of the other guy when they first got to the most recent lair, and of COURSE the shower part!! oh and sasuke's mental box of "all things dobe" lmao nyahaa so great! and now we're finally gonna get down to BUSINESS lol, can't wait to see!! oh sasuke, you're already in deep, you just won't admit it yet :p besides the highly anticipated sex, though, i keep wondering if/when sasuke will find out why naruto doesn't care about going back to konoha. (i imagine eventually they'll run into/be found by konoha nin so will it come out before or during that i wonder..) i can't wait to see how the rest of their adventures together play out!! *huggles the author and story*

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on December 27, 2006
    Ohh you evil, evil soul! You left us hanging! Why does Sasuke keep deluding himself? He has the hots for our dobe, but maybe the dobe is smarter than him cause he aint afraid to admit that he wants 'stress relief'! I was laughing at how he just came out and said it. I'm sooo anticipating the next chapter. I've been waiting for this one! Tight work. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - conquerors star on December 27, 2006
    nyahhh stupid sasukes, why doesn't he just admit he loves his naru-chan already >.< bah...well cant wait for update ^_^ yay smut smut smut *jumps up and down excitedly* haha i feel so perverted
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