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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Lexi on January 03, 2007
    I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions I have ever read. Ever. My brain has possibly exploded from your genius. I mean, you've kept on par with the manga, but made it your own, and all the while kept them in character. It's just.. amazing. I love the funny bits, too. I love their bickering, I loved the smut, I just love it all. Your writing style is perfect, too. It's all together a wonderful story and I'm very impressed. Please, please for the love of god (and my sanity) do not stop writing this.
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  • From ANON - rabid_fangrrl on January 02, 2007
    KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

    You officially = awesome!
    *slaps personal stamp of approval on Zrina's forehead* Don't worry, it'll wash off...eventually.

    Maybe.

    OKAY! What I like-Ed best - here we go! This bit:
    Surely kissing can't be too bad. Another roll of the hips above him brought out another embarrassing sound as he thrust up to meet them. Grinding was really good. And Naruto liked kissing while grinding. His hormone-clogged, genius mind tried to wrap itself around the situation as their hips thrust and rolled again. The goo was back with a vengeance.
    Grinding was good. Kissing happened while grinding. Therefore kissing must be good, too. Satisfied with his half-baked attempt at logic, Sasuke used the handfuls of hair to drag Naruto's lips to his own.

    This was so very wittily conveyed. Anyone in a uhmmm...similiar situation realizes how brainy melty it can be. Oddly enough, we human beings still end up trying to think at these points. Makes for a very humorous and engaging interplay.

    I LOVED the fact that Naruto caled SasUke "baby" and the little emo-prince reacted so fiestily. Hmmm...yes, it's true "fiestily" might not be a word - but I think you understanding and appreciate my wordsmithing.

    and this bit:
    A passing servant paused in the hallway as the sound of what could only be described as a small scale war emanated from behind a closed door. Normally the servant would have gotten a ninja immediately, but intermittently spersed throughout the battle were cries of "Pervert!" as well as "Deviant!" and "Freak!" And of course there was the howling of laughter interrupted by an occasional "Ow!" or "Bastard!"

    Hilarious! I love how once again you capture the essence of these two. Right up there with the decorative peeing in the snow escapade for me.

    You please me so greatly! This is excellent and the rate at which you are cranking this out! Amazink!

    Once again, excellent job!

    *nibbles YOU*





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  • From ANON - elict on January 02, 2007
    I love you. Let me have your babies. NOW.

    (Sorry, I know that your fic decerves a much longer and more detailed review, but after the last chapter, my brain has been turned into mush, and therefore I can't do better than this. Will try again later, ok? ^^'';)
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  • From ANON - Kimmy on January 02, 2007
    hell yeah!! this chapter gets a ten out of ten from me. I loved it!! i esp loved the fact that nar used clones (which has been done before) but then had them change into other people (which was a stroke of fucking genius). I really loved that whole purty around my cock parting shot from nar to sasu. I can't wait to read the rest of your fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    What an awesome way to kick off the new year! Great sex scene: I love that you didn't just go all the way, instead really writing their inexperience into it. Plus, that leaves so much more to explore in later lemons!

    Thanks for writing this story, I'm really enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - marcellaryoko on January 01, 2007
    omfrikin'gawd.......I LOVED it! The ending was perfect, LOL!! I hope they get to do more though, and realize feelings, though, too. It was great, and I really luff this story. The whole idea of it is great, and really unique as far as I know.........and I've read toooooons!!!

    Thank you for updating on NewYears!! ^_^

    -me
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  • From ANON - phoenixdown7 on January 01, 2007
    This story is delicious. I can't find any other way to describe it. I stayed up until 2am last night (this morning), reading all 17 chapters and now I can't wait for more. You've really got a style, and a sense of plot that i adore. Plus, the characters are all believable and so very IC. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is growing beautiful in all of its awkward glory, and I can't tell you how exciting it was for me to read Naruto trying the initiate the 'fooling around' with Sasuke. this is the first time I've found Naruto being the first to initiate anything believable, which is great, because Sasuke deserves a little humility and relaxation at the hands of his wonder-blond. hehe. I love what you've done with this fic, all of it, and I can't wait to see where it goes. ^__^ Thanks for an unbelievable read! Ciao for now.
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  • From ANON - Adi on January 01, 2007
    wow i really loved that
    i've spent the better part of my day reading the entire thing, when i'm meant to be revising for my exam next week, but it was SO worth it.
    you're writing is amazing and i love how IC it is, AND the fact its NaruSasu, theres so little of it out there :(
    and smut = one of the best i've read
    keep it up!!
    XXX
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  • From ANON - dragon_agility on January 01, 2007
    *le gasp*

    Well, I wasn't expecting that for smut ^^ It well went over my expectations: you did great! Especially how you really got Naruto's teasing across and Sasuke's inexperience coupled with his need. Awww, Sasuke... 8D And the clone part made me laugh; trust Naruto! hehe.

    Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - burr on January 01, 2007
    omg this was pretty! i smiled all the time while reading this chapter. i absolutely love your creation of sasuke, too. please, keepup the good work and update quickly! :) you got me really hooked up!
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  • From ANON - Aidis on January 01, 2007
    XD Hehehe, extremely well written and a helluva plot to boot. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - shishio on January 01, 2007
    O.o, Smexy and hilarious........
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    Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! -Prays to unknown Gods for new chapters quickly, even though shishio is athiest-
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  • From ANON - Avonne on December 31, 2006
    Awesome smut! Naruto's such a little expert and I'm really glad that Sasuke's the inexperienced one here - he'll definitely open up to Naruto more this way since he'll have new things to learn [and love about the Dobe, it seemed like he was really really enjoying himself!!]. And Naruto and his bunshins were a great touch, that cracked me up. Lovely chapter, can't wait for the next!!

    Happy New Year!!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on December 31, 2006
    I keep reviewing and telling you I love you (maybe I only said that once... I do try to refrain from sounding scary) but once more I have to tell you: I love you!

    You are great, legendary and all that matters in this world. So many writers can write really well but completely freak when it gets to the sex, and don't publish to that part. I'm so stoked that you are not one of these people. I'm so so so happy that you wrote this scene. It was brilliant.. and still in character (how the hell do you do that so well?).

    Anyway. I'm glad I started my new year with your story to read. Cheers and keep it coming!

    Kimra
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on December 31, 2006
    omg yay!! the smut!! sooooo yummy, i loved naru's game of ground rules.. heheh and so did Sasuke *smirk* hmm the idea of naruto practicing with clones is hot too XD and of course, jealous sasuke is one of my favorite things, thanks for all the hotness and the giggles at the end ^_^ look forward to the next one!!
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