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Reviews for The Sound of Dreams

By : Zrina

From ANON - feathrededge on January 05, 2007
"take it bitch" MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHhahaha, jeez orichi sure gets wat he deserves....almost feel bad for him!...not quite tho
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From ANON - Adi on January 05, 2007
would you mind if i recommened your story on livejournal? i seriously love your story and i cant stop thinking how IC they are which i know is often really hard to do, and the fact that its narusasu, and theres so little of that around, if its ok to post the link i'll leave my email address so you can get back to me, aditya284@hotmail.com
just want to share your story with all the deprived fangirls out there XD

XXX
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From ANON - Nomme de Plume on January 05, 2007
as i've been unable to get online since just after christmas, i was so excited to find three chapters of this wonderful story waiting for me!! but i'm certainly not liking how orochimaru is conniving to get out of naruto's mind, or rather, kyuubi's cage. dammit, i hate him! and i hope kyuubi's not falling for the bastard!

these three chapters were so good, though! especially how sasuke loses all sense of self when naruto gets into icha, icha mode. i can't wait for the next chapter!!
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From ANON - Endless Rain on January 04, 2007
Oo; KyuuOro... Now there's something that I've never seen coming. There's a part of me-the part that absolutely can't stand Oro-pedo-ecchi-that thinks that the Sannin really has been asking for what Kyuubi did to him as punishment for contemplating doing something similar to Sasuke. There's another part of me that's saying nobody, not even that lecherous pedophile, deserves to be raped. -Sighs- I am at odds with myself, lol. Eto, about that little speculation from Orochimaru about Kyuubi, and said demon's tiny show of affection. Wouldn't it be funny, despite the utter crack-ness of the idea, if Oro and Kyuubi became lovers? I can see it now. "Hi, I'm Uzumaki Naruto. I also happen to be the container of two lovers-the Legendary Snake Sannin, Orochimaru, and Kyuubi no Kitsune! What's your name?" Hahaha! LOL That is so utterly crack. Kudos on this wonderful chapter, btw. I absolutely adored it, and I await the next chapter eagerly!
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From ANON - lala land on January 03, 2007
well, i have been reading your story for quite some time (all in one go. hooray for christmas break!) and i was really stoked when the NarutoxSasuke smut started. your an exceptional (spelled incorrectly, i think) writer, and i assumed the sex would be equally as satisfying.
i was not dissappointed.
orochimaru/kyuubi was, in fact, quite unexpected, and i think the only consensus i have is this:
FUCKING GOOD SHIT DUDE. i'm totally stoked on this story. good job!
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From ANON - Kimra on January 03, 2007
Bo Ya! Okay I'm still happy. I'm still reading and I still love you. Stuffed if I care if Snake-Bastard is violated. Honestly that might make me evil. But I had this morbid fear that you where going to have Orochimaru take over Naruto's conciousness and rape Sasuke. That... although you may do it (please don't.. but I can't stop you clearly), that would be horrible. I don't mind bad things happening to bad people, it just... it doesn't bother me. :D (I'm so not the deli lama ha?)

I know this story has heaps to go still and I know your an excellent writer who will slowly take us through that story. I'm impressed with the frequency of yoru updates. It's something not many of us can do, so I'm compelled to compliment you on it. So, congrats on working so hard on this story.

I can't wait to see what else you do with the story, though I suspect things will get worse before (if) they get better.

I still love you!

Kimra / Kim
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From ANON - Kimra on January 03, 2007
I haven't even read this update yet. I'm still debating about if I want to read it. I avoid reading about rape as much as possible, but some stories are just so good you have to skim past it and hope for minimal mental scaring. I'm still debating over that in regards to your story. I wish -honestly- that you had put a spoiler into who rapes who or something like that. Because that would make this so much easier on me.

Anyway. I will read it. I think. I love this story too much to just set it aside now. But... yeah... I'll review when I'm done (if it lets me).
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From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 03, 2007
This chapter was good! Naruto's such a tease. Sasuke seriously needs to get with the program. And when he punched that guy out in the showers, that was hot! Protect your possession dammit, lol. Sasuke should be totally flattered. Anyway, i wonder, so we've seen what Naruto is willing to do, what about Sasuke? Assuming he'll get to act out of impulse, which he's done before, will he ever get to show his possessive side? I hope so, pllssss. Naruto's too damn hot not to. Anyway, so Oro got had lol. That is so funny to me, maybe i'm just sadistic. But what happened in that last paragraph i have to say, concerns me...hmm. Anyway, go forth and write!
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From ANON - Allys on January 03, 2007
Wow, you really do have some of the coolest ideas, I LOVE the thought of Naruto making Kyuubi tender ( I especially LUV that he's all pissy about it XD). You scared me for a minute there with your non-con warning and the creepy dude checking out Sasuke O.o!! Then when I figured out it was all about Orochimaru, my vicious side came out to play and I was all "Take it Bitch!!" I really don't like that dude, oh well. Another fabulous chappie as always, I'm loving the regular update thing, and I'm pretty sure I've said that before but that's okay. Til Saturday...
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From ANON - eien no ren on January 03, 2007
That was f**cking good!! The intrigue is reaching new heights! That lemon... was out of this world, nyan... Really got to me... so congratulations! Nyan!! Update soon, please? I am dying with the intrigue... ne?
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From ANON - dragon_agility on January 03, 2007
Aww, I liked the first part of this chapter with the blushing Sasuke. I realy like your writing style, it's really good!

When I first read your warning, my mind went into overdrive, thinking that perhaps naruto was going to somehow snap and take Sasuke or Orochimaru was goign to somehow gain contorl and take Sasuke *eek* but I was surprised by the development when Kyuubi took oro. I kinda felt sorry for him when I don't particulalry want to, lol! Gah, you got me really thinking with the Naruto/Kyuubi connection now. Was that scene like a flashback to when Naruto jerked off with Sasuke the night before or was he in the shower? I think it's teh latter (trsut me to go into detail with silly questions XD)

Look forward to the next update!!! (glomps)
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From ANON - animehead on January 03, 2007
*mmmm* I love *nibble* you so much *lick*

As usual this was a wonderful chapter. I always get so excited when I see that you have added another chapter. You are so wonderful. Thanks for sharing such a great story with us. I'll be looking forward to your next update.
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From ladygizarme on January 03, 2007
ahh, so much sasuke blushing, my mind reels in delight! and naruto leering and blushing at the same time, so naru lol

and orochimaru got raped by kyuubi!! he so deserves it--i like that kyuubi makes it torture not just by being painful, but pleasurable too. and maybe it's weird of me but kyuubi getting more turned on and closer to climax because of naruto's own similar actions is SO HOT (hmm, yeah, i haven't seen much in the way of people describing how naruto may affect kyuubi either, very interesting--wonder how much more this will be played out in the story as well..)

ack but it's scary and foreboding that oro thinks he's found a way out, ya damn troublemaking snake!

can't wait for next chap to see how the narusasuness continues to grow

~ lg
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From ANON - DevilLived on January 03, 2007
Currently trying to decide whether to feel sorry for Orochimaru or not... Nah. He enjoyed it that bastard. :D

I really liked that last line you had there, it was really cool. And smart too, I can't beilieve that it never occured to me before that Naruto could have an effect of Kyuubi.

Awesome job. I love how Naruto makes Sasuke blush. :D:D Update soon!
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From ANON - Adi on January 03, 2007
YAY an update! i love this story and i'd thought i'd review again. still havent started revising, but thats totally NOT your fault that i have no self control XD
just want you to know that is one of the best stories i've come across in a long while, and i hope it never finishes (though i am aware you need to end some time) so wanted to say thanks for writing it, and hope you keep writing! XXX
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