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Reviews for True Self, New Self

By : yuraasakura
  • From ANON - ching1 on November 01, 2006
    I was just thinking when we'll see Sasuke, then here he was! I was thinking 'so soon?' then you told us you aren't rushing. *Smiles* Nice chappie. Please do email me when new chappies are up. ^^
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  • From ANON - DrakenD4 on November 01, 2006
    This looks like a good story, I'm not a fan of Naru/Sasu I think Naruto is just to cute to be Seme but anyway the plot is good so keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 01, 2006
    i have no idea if it shows up or not, but i love this!!!!! ur really great at the descriptions, crap bad speller.... and i can't wait till sasuke comes in!!!, well he is... but u'll describe him right? u'd better, u make everyone, hotter..dreamer, yummer...hahahahaha i made a new word! it's mine now!!! hahaha no one else can use it :) yummer,hehe


    edward_elric_forever15@yahoo.com

    yup yup cya plz send updates XD
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  • From ANON - HellzAngel on November 01, 2006
    So cool to see you updated, it was a great chapter. Funny with those girls following Naruto, it's about time he had some fangirls of his own. Anyway really enjoying this, hope to read more soon. You so rock.
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  • From ANON - Akuma Sora on November 01, 2006
    Love it but you ended it with a cliff hanger. . . sorta. Anyways keep up the good job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From feisu on November 01, 2006
    im glad you did update the story :3 i like yuki too hehe, well the whole story too, anyways... keep the chapters coming. sasuke has appeared huh... cant wait to read the next chapter as well ....
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  • From Fourthiv on November 01, 2006
    Oooh Oooh Oooh! I'm so excited!!! I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on November 01, 2006
    Alright, I like your fic, I really do, but you really should get a beta. I can tell that you have an interesting plot, but there were so many grammatical errors that I couldn't finish reading it. It's still early in the fic so I would suggest that you have someone beta the chapters you have posted, and then repost them. It will make your fic a lot easier to understand. If you like, I could beta the chapters, or if you know of anyone else that can do it for you than that’s fine. However, I do strongly suggest that you get a beta. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on November 01, 2006
    Interesting start! Keep going, i'd love to read more from you :D
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi-chan!! on November 01, 2006
    Yura I love your story!! haha..if there was such a thing as a hair blowing jutsu..I'd learn it right away, haha it could be very helpful!! Lol..thanks for being my AWESOME beta for Gravi Cast Geisha's!!
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on November 01, 2006
    Oh drool. Now that outfit produces a very nice mental image. I love this fic already and hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi on November 01, 2006
    AHH! that was awesome!! MissMayumi loves it!
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on November 01, 2006
    It's a nice start. Now let's see how it develops.
    Now, I wonder, Will Naruto or Sasuke be the seme? (I don't knoe but it always is fun to ask ^_^. The authoress have the tendencie to exagerate in their responses)

    UPDATE SOON!

    (BTW, love Naruto's new wardrobe!!!!!!!!!)
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on October 31, 2006
    Hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot DAMN HOT!!!!!!! OMG I love your idea of naruto. God his tail, ears, hear, eyes, Clothing, And that damn fine body that goes perfectly with is outfit. Lol ^^....(Drool)............(drool)....O and the earrings....(wipe drool) nice touch. Really. And if his appearance wasn't enough...O god I love the fact that you made him so smart. (screams with joy)............^^ anyway just wonted to say.....UPDATE GOD PLEASES UPDATE SOON. Lol O and if you can.....well can you make sasuke..........Some how bump into naruto, in your future chapters of course, And make sasuke fall in love with naruto? And not naruto fall in love with sasuke 1st. You know? well its just a thought.....you don't really have to do it. I just wanted...well had to ask. Lol anyway Again UPDATE OK. UPDATE SOON.
    KISSES ^_~
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  • From ANON - ching1 on October 31, 2006
    I found it interesting. ^ ^
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