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Reviews for True Self, New Self

By : yuraasakura
  • From ANON - narutard94 on November 12, 2006
    hey sorry i used a name somebody already used well my review has the weird things on it like the
    ^ ^
    (=^o^=) on it. sorry didn't know, sorry (T-T) keep up the good job.
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  • From ANON - yume on November 12, 2006
    love the story. ok so it's a little late for me to say that Itachi should not be redeemed. i love him but don't think h should be redeemed. it would be to out of character. love how the story is going. like your work. yay.
    (^0^)/ yay! ^ ^
    (=^o^=) yaaa

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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 11, 2006
    whats redemmed mean? it's on the tip of my tong,,,dammit!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2006
    laaaaa so good :3
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  • From ANON - Forgotten_Angel on November 11, 2006
    I'd love to see Itachi gain redemption. Personally I don't think Itachi actually killed his clan. The Sharigan can for someone to see a false "Truth" that appears reallistic. By the way, love the story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Nami on November 11, 2006
    Hum, I like the idea. I love the pairing (NaruSasu is hot, imo. ...and Sasuke in the manga looks just like his mom, so yeah XD;. I can totally see him looking like a girl so Win.) But, Sasuke... I'd think he'd feel a little more violated with that illusion. Considering the only other illusions he's encountered was Itachi with his mind f-ck powers. I thought he'd be slightly more defensive. But, yay! More reading!
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  • From ANON - snow_angel on November 10, 2006
    i liked your story, it's turning out pretty good. Ihope you update soon. and Kaji(Naruto) sounds really really hot.;)
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  • From Fourthiv on November 10, 2006
    Ahh this is getting better and better. I really like it. I cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Akuma Sora on November 10, 2006
    Ha ha! I loved it! It was funny at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From HGirl69 on November 10, 2006
    nice story, there are some minor grammar mistakes but they don't distract too bad from the story. I'd like to see Itachi redemed before his death, but that's just me. If you email when a story is updated then please add me to the list!
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  • From feisu on November 10, 2006
    Hey :3

    I'm glad you liked my story. :3 I'm very lazy to update lol. I have some ideas, but I have to get in the mood to write. I draw more SasuNaru-NaruSasu these days. Anyways, I like this chapter as well :3 Giving you advice? I like everything you wrote, there is nothing to change I think, and unless your mind is empty of ideas what to write for the story, write your own and don't ask for advices. It is very hard to write something that is already not written by someone else, in a different way. There are so many stories, that people might think you steal from them, but no, you just got some ideas of them on your own but you are changing them and stuff. Well, don't let people get to you lol. Write what's on your mind.

    ps: sorry if I made some mistakes lol. Still learning english.

    ps2: UPDATE!!! :D

    faith aka feisu
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi on November 09, 2006
    Aww! I hope Sasuke can figure out that man is Naruto! I would love for them to become lovers..hehhe...maybe even some Mpreg!!..ehehehe...thanks yura! I loe your betaing for my stories! and No your not bad!!
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on November 09, 2006
    Being as I love Itachi in all his Itachiness I'd like for him to be redeemed. As always I love this chapter. Yuki's sooo cute! Stupid ero-sennin needs a swift kick in the rear. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - HellzAngel on November 09, 2006
    I think your doing very well indeed, this story is fan-fricking-tastic. Loved this chapter, and Yuki is very cute, loved the interaction between him and Naruto. The Sasuke moments were great too, very Sasuke-like. Umm, the Itachi question, it's hard. I do like Itachi, so I think maybe he should be redeemed. Anyway, please update soon, I can't wait until he gets back to Konoha, and see the reactions of his friends, its gonna be very cool. Hope to see you soon, ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000 on November 09, 2006
    Brilliant looking foward to the next one :) and thanks for emailing me with the update!!!
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