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Reviews for True Self, New Self

By : yuraasakura
  • From ANON - akagi-chan on November 16, 2006
    it's coming along nicely. the only little thing i found wrong was kagerou. in the episodes i've watched, the shinobi was referred to as a "he", even by his companions. there are plenty of feminine guys running around so i think this falls into that category. also in that "butterfly" form there are no female breasts, trust me i looked.
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  • From ANON - orchidee on November 16, 2006
    This is my first naruto fic, and i am truly enjoying it! I love the AU elements (especially the creation of a much more yummmy naruto.) hee-hee! please update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 15, 2006
    Redeemed,why kill him then(wink).
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  • From on November 15, 2006
    This is really good! Hope you update soon!
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  • From TakiTenshi on November 15, 2006
    Tara here in all her log-in glory. Can't wait for the "surprises" in the next few chapters! I have to say though...Gaara saw Naruto right? It's just a bit freaky but was he in like a ghost form floating or did he look normal?

    ps: Spread Gaara love through out the world!!

    pss: Spread Naru/Gaa and Naru/Sasu love through out the universe!!

    lol, I'm being stupid again...forgive me! *bows deeply with hands clasped in a prayer position*
    Green tea with a bit of mint should do the trick!
    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Passing Reader on November 15, 2006
    Like Naruto's new look! ;p Sometimes its hard to vizualize but its uber neat once I get the picture in my head ^-^ Awsome plot line cant wait to see what happends next!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on November 15, 2006
    I love this story and yes, please redeem Itachi (for Sasuke's sake) and make it a really long one, like 50 chapters... ;) Thanks!
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on November 15, 2006
    YAY!!!! Itachi's gonna be redeemed! Oooooooo I wonder what Jiraya had forged for Naruto? Oh well I'll find out next chapter. The smithy's name rings a distant bell but I can't quite fish out the information. I love this fic, it's so incredible. Oh yeah, did you know that another term for the infinite vision Naruto has is remote viewing? I read about it in a Dean Koontz novel. Keep up the great work, I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Fourthiv on November 15, 2006
    blarge! Update soon! I wanna find out what this mystery thing is.
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  • From ANON - HellzAngel on November 14, 2006
    Yay, another great chapter. The story is progressing and I can't wait to find out what Naruto's present is, although, I can probably guess. It's actually a refreshing change to have Naruto not return straight to Konoha, like most stories. The suspension will in the end be worth the wait, when he finally arrives home, and everyone sees Naruto.

    Anyway, please update soon. Love your story very much.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 14, 2006
    wow, *tear* i could never write something this great!!!!! it's so...so...so...god omfg oh so smexy, only way to say it XD keep up the updates and i'm loving it so far!!! sense ur so great at discribing people and things, that last part is a real cliff hanger, but just a suggestion, maybe u could describe the area a bit more? like, well it is the rock country so duh there's gonna be rocks, but how bout...like colors, theres lots of rocks that have colors, and maybe buildings can be made out of the more expensive kimd because they must have everykind there!!! hehe but what do i know, i just really like ur story so far!! i don't really know ow it could get any better, and keep up the great work!!! i feel so proud of myself, usally i write one word replys, but this time because i RRRREALLLY love it, i'm gonna be extra nice a write a big long one!!!hahahaha and don't know if it's a gift or a curse for someone to read my drabbles like this XP
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006
    wow O_O
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000 on November 14, 2006
    Fantastic...lol loved it your a great writer
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  • From ANON - Rho on November 14, 2006
    Yay, new chapters! ^^ -does a happy dance-I can see that you are improving your grammer quite a bit! I didn't catch any errors at all. ^^ I am also glad to see that you aren't rushing things, especially as far as Sasuke is concerned. Naru-chan is such a bad ass in this story and normally it is pretty hard to pull off, but you have managed it nicely. I love how you are develpoing his character and abilities. Huzzah! -cheers- I am faithfully awaiting your next update! ^_^

    PS: I still need to scan that pic >< I will do something special for you since it is taking me so long.
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 14, 2006
    You know I love you, and your story!

    You're an awesome chief!
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