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Reviews for True Self, New Self

By : yuraasakura
  • From Fourthiv on November 22, 2006
    Excellent! I'm so glad you updated this story. This had to have been one of the funniest chapters so far. Great job! Update more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000 on November 21, 2006
    I loved it and if there is another one of these that are blank just ignore it because my damn pinkie hit the enter key...anyways....that was excelent brilliant and I am looking foward to more :) *mumbles to self* 'stupied keyboard'
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  • From ANON - cfox on November 21, 2006
    Now that was great it is always good to see Jirya get his just deserets for being such a pervert. I like how you are going , and I will take your word that Sasuke will get better soon. Great funny chapter by the way looking forward to more soon.
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  • From on November 21, 2006
    Great chapter! Loved it! Please update soon! Can't wait to read more with Sasuke and Naruto!
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  • From feisu on November 21, 2006
    hey :3

    I loved this one :3 few more days until the uploads, but there will be two chapters if everything goes right :3 update :D
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  • From ANON - HellzAngel on November 21, 2006
    Absolutely brilliant chapter. Naruto and Yuki's interaction is very cute, and the prank they played was priceless. I can see it so clearly. I laughed very hard. Can't wait until we have some Gaara interaction. Hope to see another chapter soon. It keeps me enterained.

    Oh and to the question, I think Naruto being able to fly would be awesome.
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on November 19, 2006
    S'okay I got the Masamune thing now. When I read your note on Kagero I was reeeeally confused at first but then I checked out the wikipedia link. I, unfortunately, have no access to the anime beyond cartoon network and the uncut box set so I don't know much about anime only characters. On to the actual review, awesome sword seriously AWESOME sword(pictures Naruto with the sword and drools)Sorry I have a thing for bladed weaponry. Sasuke getting stuck in the Swamp of the Underworld Jutsu up to his neck made me laugh, talk about dignity armageddon(snickers) and I love the more noble, shall we say, use of Jiraya's peeping jutsu. Snake-slime's gonna be pissed when he finds out about Kagero's failure(does happy dance cause I love when Orochimaru's plans get stymied) Personally I'm all for a flying Naruto, it'll make it easier for him to get around not to mention the benefit in battle. Keep up the great work Oh wonderous writer-sama.
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on November 18, 2006
    Wow! This is really great thus far!
    It's soooooo good to have a new plot line, and thank goodness, someone who actually knows a bit about Japanese mythology.
    Thank you, also, for going through and defining terms and historical figures (that was a surprise!) that most folks wouldn't know (I'm enough of an anthropology and linguistics dork that I knew most of it, except for some of the things coming from the anime itself, which I'm still slogging through (no more filler episodes, please?))
    Can't wait to see how this plays out!
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  • From ANON - mike~ on November 18, 2006
    i love ur story!

    i love the way you describe naruto in your fic; it always leaves my skin w/ goosebumps when i think about how potentially strong naruto can be in the near future. i really like how you're allowing naruto to slowly learn about his new abilities, instead of gaining it all at once.

    i like how naruto hides his identity, i hope it stays that way until further on. my heart seems to stop everytime yuki calls out naruto by his given name; i keep thinking that sasuke would be nearby and pick up on that hint!

    can't wait for your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Palumaztu on November 17, 2006
    just got done reading them all, you just gotta continue with the probable romance! ^^ So what will this end with, i wonder??
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  • From Fourthiv on November 16, 2006
    This story is getting better and better. I love the katana you made for Naruto, very cool! I cant wait to read more, the story is getting so exciting. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Tara on November 16, 2006
    Yeah he should totally learn how to fly! Jumping through tree branches, even with his kind of speed, must be degrading, lol.
    Again, Nice chapter! Can't wait till you update!
    ....And when they reach Konoha! I'm all gitty but patience is a virtue, ne? He'll have the boys shitting their pants and the girls...well...*mischevious glint in eyes*
    Sayanora!

    (Wow, for once I didn't have the urge/need to leave some over long review that you'll propably fall asleep half way through reading it! It's a miracle I tell you! I'm healed!...I think.)
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  • From ANON - HellzAngel on November 16, 2006
    Another cool chapter and I was right...the katana sounds cool (I love katana's). A bit of action and more interation with Sasuke. I'm as dedicated to this story as when I was when I read the first chapter. Cannot wait until the next chapter comes. Hope it's soon.
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  • From feisu on November 16, 2006
    hey hey hey :D

    Love this one as well. Kagero huh? I was listening to Gackt & Chachamaru - Kagero lol when I started on the story. One of my fav songs woot. anyways, keep updating :3 I'm not sure if you wanna know or not but my story will be updated soon with the 6th chapter. you said you loved it, so i though i give you a notice so you can be ready lol enjoy :D

    ps: it might take a few days.
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  • From ANON - cfox on November 16, 2006
    What a nice story to find and a nice take on the timeslip. My only complaint is that you seem to be making Sasuke a bit to helplesss and useless. I would think he would be a little bit stronger then you have portrayed him. If he is going to be the uke in the relation ship , he could be a little stronger as I would think that Naruto would wan't an equel mate not a push-over.

    Other then that small complaint it looks like a good story and I can't wait for more.

    thankyou for writing it.
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