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Reviews for To make her mine

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - blisblop on January 06, 2007
    it was very nice to see sasuke so happy this way.I never thought of this before.
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  • From ANON - blue on December 20, 2006
    ok that was so cute you got to update soon!^^
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  • From on October 30, 2006
    Hi I didnt mean to steal your story my friend sent it to me and told me to post it on my adultfanfiction page since she didt have one I should have known she copied it sence she is not a very good writer I thought she must of had a good day or something sorry for the inconvenience I promise to check next time and make sure it's not someone elses work
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  • From ANON - Legilmyth on October 29, 2006
    Oh I like it! I can't wait to see where you take their teasing of eachother.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - James on October 27, 2006
    Awwwwww cute update please
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  • From ANON - Geda on October 26, 2006
    =O
    I enjoy this oh-so much.
    Please write mooooore.
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  • From ANON - ezri-candy on October 24, 2006
    I thought this was a great start. I love how you portray your characters in different ways. Some people don't like OOC-ness, but I say, how is a person to say exactly what a character will be like? I think that there can be many different divergences that a character can take, so why not explore all of them? I especially liked Hinata’s...'test' :) I thought Sasuke was very cute and sweet with the children.

    I really hope you continue this fic. There are not nearly enough good Sasukex Hinata fics out here.

    Great job!
    Ezzy

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  • From ANON - animechick262003 on October 24, 2006
    This could be awsome, but I have a serious problem with the point of view change. Personally, for me, the story reads really good in first person.
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