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Reviews for Lullaby of Nights

By : suzan
  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 08, 2007
    I've really enjoyed this story and I can't wait to see what else happens in it. :)
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 04, 2006
    Great story! I would love to read more. So yes to a sequel please and thank you. Could you please email me when you do write and post the sequel? Thanks.
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  • From darktoy on December 04, 2006
    Well, considering the cult chasing Naruto. I think that probably both Sasuke and Naruto will join or at least prepare themselves in a way for Protection.
    Let's face it, Sasuke as the possessive and Pridefull Uchiha he is, he won't let anyonw touch HIS dobe.

    And Naruto will have to face some of his fears, He will need to do do if he wants to surive.

    Kakashi will do the guardian and teacher rol, he always be seen like that.... Maybe some Iruka appearence will do good on him? LOL

    As for the rest, I believe Itachi might have been turned into a vampire, but he's probably a free spirit as well. So he might be working on his own... And he'll be probably behind Naruto's soul. But Maybe, if am correct and everything is about Kyuubi, the he might want to unleash the true nature of Naruto's soul... (And there might be some Itanaru >.>....
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  • From ANON - Omarion's Lover on December 04, 2006
    How to continue this you ask, well first off to contine with is what is Orochimaru and his cult gonna do with Naruto-kun. I'm really curious about that, as well as Sasuke's probable possessivness with Naruto while trying to protect him from the cult, I'd really like to see that =D! Otherwise you're the author write the story as you please, oh and congratulations on you almost finishing college quite a feat there (^-^thumbs up!).
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  • From ANON - midnight on December 04, 2006
    I loved it alot, and yes, please do make a sequal. I think, because your almost through with college they should be too! They're comming up in the world, not bothered by 'Rochi and his gang/cult, when they're making their peak in their career, the cult comes back into the picture!!! ooooo, dramatic, then again i have a flare for the dramatics. =) But newayz it's your story, like you said we could suggest, but you alone are the mistress of Lullaby's. :D have fun, and i'm waiting with excitement!!
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  • From MsKeller on December 03, 2006
    I'm hoping you don't take this the wrong way but I felt compelled to point this out. In a prose story (which is short stories, novels, etc) the plot progresses in a rising order. Introduction followed by conflict followed by rising action followed by the climax. After that a resolution occurs. The problem with this story is that there are simply to many conflicts that never meet with resolution. All writers have their own methods on how to time out the elements to a story and their perceptions on what a resolution entails but what you have here wouldn't fit into any method or perception. You've created a basic plot structure and even though it is both compelling and well written there is nothing here that can be remotely qualified as a completed story. I imagine you think that this 'sequel' you "might" write as the conclusion to the other conflicts that you have presented here but that is an absurd notion since you are suppose to resolve those conflicts within the constricts of the story you introduce them into. I, personally, couldn't classify this as even a short story but more of a tease made by an author. Which is a shame.
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  • From ANON - Omarion's Lover on December 03, 2006
    OMG, you can't end it just like that >_
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on December 03, 2006
    To end it there with some loose threads...Will the snake be back or what's inside Naruto??? Please type more soon.
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  • From darktoy on December 03, 2006
    Sequel my dear... You can't leave the public like this. Orochimaru is still out, probably loooking for the soul of Kyuubi. We have a possessive Uchiha, a lost older brother (Who, I might add, has some background for being a mass murderer) So.... yeah...
    I WANT THE SEQUEL!
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on December 03, 2006
    What you can't end it there......I want to know what they want with naruto. please god please update .................or um well.......sequel.....I want a sequel......anywho...lol I love this story so much. ^^ What I loved the most was the fact that you scared the crap out of me.....every chance you got. Hell this story gave me the shivers...........Well you gave me the creaps....(shivers).......not to mention......I cryed when shadow was fighting to protect naruto with his life........I'm such a BIG time animal lover.....and when he got hurt. God that made me cry......Anyway please keep writing......Cause I want to keep reading. ^^ Lol latter................And may that latter come soon. ^^ see ya.
    Kisses ^_~
    P.S
    O and I almost for got......Lol thanks for the YAOI!!!!!!! ^_^
    Kisses ^_~
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  • From ANON - SharinganEyes on December 03, 2006
    Matte! I wanna know what the heck happened! So yeah I wanna know please! something_hypnotic@yahoo.com e-mail me when u get a chance!
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  • From Morgana on October 31, 2006
    Ooooh the plot thickens.
    Creepy Orochimaru and is that Kabuto by any chance?
    Kakashi as the creepy neighbour is really the leader of a special force
    to protect Naruto and people like him.?
    Very good! Keeps me on the edge of my seat.
    Can't wait to see what he wants Naruto for.
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  • From ANON - midnight on October 31, 2006
    Scary scary scary. NO seriously, when i was a kid i was haunted by spirits exactly how you described them, dark shadows, they sucked all warmth and reason out of me, and in Lullaby Part 1 Orochi-san and Kabuto-san were expecting something in spirit form, that's what my haunts did too.. so never the less, it freaked me out. Your a great cult writer, you should publish for real!! Slight ooc-ness but not noticable. I can't wait till the next chappie!!! Happie Halloween!
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  • From ANON - Tara on October 30, 2006
    oooo!!! This is getting REALLY interesting!! But Naruto must remain calm-he's straight! STRAIGHT! lol, work that "playing-hard-to-get" magic and it's all good!
    I'm wondering, does Kakashi think that the whole spiral thing is somehow related to Naruto...coz you know, that's his sign, aint it?
    And Orochimaru is obviously after him since he apparently goes for "cute guys"!! lmao!
    I would very much like to read more of this story so please update...SOON!!!
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