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Reviews for Criminal

By : Fourthiv
  • From FairyCelt on October 07, 2007
    This was one of the most beautifully written fics I've read. I especially loved the end when we hear Sasuke tell Naruto they'ld be together forever. So bittersweet!
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  • From TakiTenshi on November 15, 2006
    Wait! Hol'up-hol'up thurr!! This was a ONESHOT?! N-no-noooooooooo!! *gets down on knees and screams to the grey sky that pours with rain*

    (Then suddenly it turns really bright and the sound of a record being scratched echoes through the room)

    Random man (a director):"CUT! Nice job again Tara, your talent never ceases to amaze me. You might wanna get yourself dried up. That fake rain water was slightly acidic!"
    Tara: "Nanii?!" *rushes to the bathroom to have a good wash and obliterate any trace of acid from body*

    Tara: All nice and clean now. I was saying something before I realised where I was...oh yeah! This was a oneshot?? Aww! Oh well, it was really good! But I'd like to know who the seven-tailed jinchuuriki was! And somehow...for some twisted reason, I liked the heartless cold Naruto. Maybe because he was wise and strong but...that shouldn't be! *shakes head slowly* Ah, kudos to you! This story was really well planned and intresting. Though, it wouldn't hurt if it was made into a two-shot. But somehow that isn't possible seeing as all the characters are now dead...except for akatsuki of course!
    Well I'll be off now!
    Ja-ne! *waves cheerfully and scowls at director for using acid rain!*
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  • From ANON - uzuchi on November 01, 2006
    OMG you make me cry in front of my family!! (cuz I read this fics on my cell phone with my family in front of me)
    Really I Love this fics...I read this over and over and I'm not bored.
    Take that Sasuke! you deserve it!
    ...I'm sorry for you Naruto...you just so...lonely and sad...why you should take all those pain?
    aww I cried again TT__TT

    YOU ROCKZ!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Cepheus on October 24, 2006
    i totally appreciated this shot. completely and utterly appreciated it. for once, there was evil!naruto that comes out from broken dreams and rejection from his love. then, akatsuki!naruto, and most of all, sasuke's death. i had searched around so much for such a fic, and now there it is, and i enjoyed every single line. thanks. thanks. thanks *bows*

    this was a great shot, and even though it was a tad bit rushed, i simply loved it. it had inside everything i would want (also, konoha's complete destruction) and who cares aboutsome imperfections? i find it perfect nonetheless.

    thanks for writing this shot. i hope you will consider writing a much longer fic with similar plot (and maybe itanaru too XDXDXD *gets shot*).

    SOY/Ceph/MF
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  • From ANON - Darling_425 on October 24, 2006
    That was so freakin'sad!
    Things like this should never happen!
    *sob*
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  • From ANON - moonice on October 23, 2006
    WOW WOW WOW THERE IS NOTHING TO SAY BUT WOW WOW WOWOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWoWOWOWOWO
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 23, 2006
    Wow, I'm in a foul mood right now, I'm not sad, nor happy. It was amazing anyhow, this is the first time I read an evil Naruto story. I do feel bad for Sasuke though, poor fellow, his pride brought him down.
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