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Reviews for The Bad Boy and the Baby

By : Midnightstorm
  • From ANON - TJ on October 18, 2006
    you bet your ass **or rather naruto's** it should be a m-preg. i just lov the thought of mommy naruto
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  • From ANON - Stacy on October 18, 2006
    That was so awesome!!And yes it should be a M-Preg fic!So....be sure to update soon!
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  • From ANON - Niara-kun on October 18, 2006
    i LUV this story!! plz leat naruto hav little uzumaki-uchiha uber-sexy babies!! with their own little fan clubs! ^^ thnx a bunch!
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  • From ANON - Linku on October 18, 2006
    That was good! Poor Naruto just has to come to terms with his uke-ness. More please
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  • From ANON - Mayo on October 18, 2006
    wonderful :)
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  • From ANON - AkaNeko on October 18, 2006
    Yay! Good start! I really wanna see what happens next : D
    But please,please,pleas DON'T add Mpreg. I promise many many reviews if you don't add Mpreg!!! >.
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  • From ANON - Sama on October 18, 2006
    OMG PLEASE U HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!! HAHAHAHAHA That was awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - ILOVEIT D.J. on October 18, 2006
    I really like it so far :), and yes, mpreg please. I love those kinds of SasuNaru stories XD!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 18, 2006
    i have to say that i'm not really into the whole mpreg thing, but then again, i've only tried it a few times... and was disappointed. but either way, if he pops out a kid from god knows where or doesn't, i'll still stick with this story. i like it and if you need any help then i'll gladly give what i can.

    aye, now i have to go write a damn paper for school. stupid papers.

    hope u update soon,
    Inc
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on October 18, 2006
    Sasuke you son of bitch!!!!!!!!! "I want to honor the engagement" my ass!!!!!!!! (Or Naruto's? ^///^)

    So far, pretty good. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - shishio on October 18, 2006
    Hmmm... Good story, great plot line, but the writting, spelling, and grammar are a little bad. How about a 7 out of 10? I suggest getting a beta. If you need one, you can e-mail me at fireprincess59@yahoo.com, I'm efficient, and I look at detail very closely.
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  • From ANON - Dreamer on October 18, 2006
    Fan-fricking-tastic, great first chapter. I love it, it has great potentail, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it's really soon. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 18, 2006
    To be perfectly honest I liked the first chapter. You could bring in a lot of different situations into this fic without it seeming forced or unnatural. Whether knowingly or not, you’ve created characters and put them into a situation that allows you to virtually take this fic wherever your creative brain wants.
    However, the only problem I do have with the first chapter is Sasuke. You’ve made him very rebellious and it seems odd that he would agree to anything without a fight, even a marriage to someone he was attracted to. I’m assuming that Sasuke wants this marriage for “other” reasons, at least at first, because that is more believable to me then him just deciding to marry someone because someone told him too. The only other thing is that I would advise you to get a beta reader because in your creative frenzy, there were a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes that could be easily and quickly avoided. If you would like, I offer my services as a beta. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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